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Finally! Your new update!
On the surface, the OS glorified Paro. But Laila's crippling, fiery, powerful beauty stumped me. This was the best fleshing out of characters I can ever expect- all three of them, actually. And Rudra, in those last few lines, walked ahead a few paces for me in terms of character growth.
Yes, I was still waiting for "Jallad", and instead, this OS was here to surprise me.
Looking forward to your updates.
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