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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
ROFL..epic dialogue:🀣🀣🀣🀣

Simmi: Aur who sha-kesh-per ne bhi toh kaha tha what's in name???
Vandu: Its Shakespeare...

Aaah pangs of jealosy in Raman:πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Shlok: Wah! Wah ishitaji kya baat hai!!!
Aap ke hathon mein toh jaadu hai. Yeh kitna tasty hai. Raman bhaiyya aap bahot lucky hai. Mein raman bhaiyya ke jagah par hota na toh abhi ishitaji ka haath chum leta itna tasty hai.
Raman: Par tu meri jagah par nahi hai. Toh jis jagah pe hai usi jagah per reh.

how Romantic the eyelock❀️..Wah wah meghu..

Arrey wah meghu..you are awesomee yaarrπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...seriously you should become a dialogue writer for the showπŸ‘πŸ‘..such perfect dialogues and such an amzing storyπŸ‘πŸΌ..pls update more..love reading your storiesπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: simples28

ROFL..epic dialogue:🀣

Simmi: Aur who sha-kesh-per ne bhi toh kaha tha what's in name???
Vandu: Its Shakespeare...

Aaah pangs of jealosy in Raman:πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Shlok: Wah! Wah ishitaji kya baat hai!!!
Aap ke hathon mein toh jaadu hai. Yeh kitna tasty hai. Raman bhaiyya aap bahot lucky hai. Mein raman bhaiyya ke jagah par hota na toh abhi ishitaji ka haath chum leta itna tasty hai.
Raman: Par tu meri jagah par nahi hai. Toh jis jagah pe hai usi jagah per reh.

how Romantic the eyelock❀️..Wah wah meghu..

Arrey wah meghu..you are awesomee yaarrπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...seriously you should become a dialogue writer for the showπŸ‘πŸ‘..such perfect dialogues and such an amzing storyπŸ‘πŸΌ..pls update more..love reading your storiesπŸ˜ƒ

hey thanks a lot... I have started writing next part.. This time i will update it soon...😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

thanks...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice.so mr.bhalla is getting jealous.hmmm!that's really interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic update!!! πŸ˜Š
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Originally posted by: JPJ83

Superb superb superb...

thanks a lot... πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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Originally posted by: disha93

Fantastic update!!! πŸ˜Š

thanks...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww super rockin update loved the bedroom scenes the most..
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awww super rockin update loved the bedroom scenes the most..

thank you so much...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guyzzz i have updated part 5... plz leave your comments behind...they really motivate me to write more...😊

hope you all enjoy this one....😊

Ishu sees ruhi and shravan struggling with something.

Ishu: Ruhi, shravan yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho?

Ruhi: kuch nahi ishima, hum ball se khel rahe the toh humari ball cupboard ke upar chali gayi (pointing towards cupboard)😊

Shravan: hum bas wahi nikalne ki koshish kar rahe they...

Ishu: Arey tum dono ko lag jayegi agar aise jump karoge toh. Ruko main nikal ke deti hu. ishita climbs on the table 

In ishra's bedroom...

Raman was sleeping facing opposite side...

Raman: (still eyes sleepy) arey subah ho bhi gayi, yeh Jhansi ki rani uthne se pehle muze yaha se uthna hai... (he turns and astonished to see ishu not on the bed.)

Raman: oh god!!! Ab main kya karu? Ye Jhansi ki rani ne muzhe dekh liya hoga? Ab who kya sochegi mere bare mein? Ab uske taane sunne padenge... isse pehle ki woh muzhe kuch bole muzhe khud uske dimaag mein jo kachra bhara hoga usko saaf karna hoga...

He gets up and moves out of the room. He sees ishu in the hall, standing on the small table and jumping to get something.

Raman: Kya hua circus mein joker ka kaam mil gaya kya? (smiles evilly)😈

Ishu: (not seeing behind) nahi muzhe aapka kaam chinne main koi interest nahi hai. Aap kya raat ko karela khate hai? Jo subhe uthke itni kadvi baatein karte hai...

Raman: Nahi, par aajkal tumhare hathon ka khana khata hu na... Thoda toh asar dikhega hi na?😈

Ishu: (to herself) kash main paglon ki doctor hoti... Toh kamsekam iska ilaj toh kar sakti... Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Yeh pagal hi rahega zindagi bhar... Agar isne muzhse kabhi acchese baat ki toh aathva ajuba ho jayega...

Shlok: Arey ishitaji, aap yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Ishu: Thank god is ghar mein koi toh hai jo insaan hai, varna... (looks at raman and raman just shrugs his shoulders)πŸ₯±

Ruhi: Woh shlok chachu humari ball upar gayi hai na toh mumma bas usss

(before she could complete her sentence)

Ishu: aaa (her leg slips and she falls on ground)

Raman: Aur jao Jhansi ki rani wale kaam karogi toh yahi hoga...

Ruhi: Papa ishima ko datane ke bajay aap unhe bed pe rakh dijiye...

Raman: Main kyun? Woh khud giri hai khud uth jayegi...

Ishu still on ground and feeling helpless.

Ishu: Koi baat nahi ruhi main uth jaungi...😭

Shlok: Arey ishitaji main hu na aapki help karne ke liye.

He puts his hands forward towards ishu... Raman pushes shlok's hand behind

Raman: Shlok mere bhai, uska pati ab tak zinda hai...

Raman bends forwardand picks ishu in his arms. She feels awkward but then he whispers in her ears sirf ruhi ke liye'

By the time the whole family gathers.

Amma: Ishu. Ishu... meri ishu ko kya ho gaya?😲

Raman: (still ishu in his arms) apna hunar dikha rahi thi aur gir gayi...

Appa: Kya ishu? Kya kar rahi thi...???

Ruhi: mumma meri aur shravan ki ball nikal rahi thi, cupboard ke upar se...

Simmi: Bhai, ab aap bhahi ko niche rakh sakte hai...πŸ˜†

Raman: (realizing he is holding ishu for quite a time) Haan... muzhe konsa shauk he isko uthane ka?

He delicately keeps her on the sofa...

Amma: Ishu Dikhao kaha lagi? 

She sees ishu's foot. It was slightly swollen.

Amma: Aiyyo!! Kitna laga hai. Vandu go get some medicine...

Vandu: Yes amma...

Vandu brings medicine. Amma applies it.

Ishu: Ouch... amma its paining... Aap usi pe pess kar rahi hai...

Raman: Jaha lagta hai na usi pe malam lagaya jata hai.. doctor hoke itna bhi pata nahi...

Ishu: doctor hoke bahot sari medicines pata hai jisse bolti band ho... par maine kabhi try kiye hai...

Raman: Oh abhi tak try nahi kiya (slowly sitting besides ishita's foot and signaling amma to give him the medicine.) toh tumko karna chahiye khud pe.. Kam se kam utni hi shanti hogi... (medicine on his hands and he gently moving his hands towards ishita's foot...)

Everybody noticing it and smiling at both of them...😊

 Ishu: Aap shayad bhul rahe hai.. har baar aap zagda karte hai... iss bar bhi aapne hi shuru kiya... Muzhe lagta hai ek badasa injection hi laga doon apko... usi bahne kam se kam (kat) aaa...

Ishita shouts loudly as raman twists her foot and relieves her from pain.

Ishu: yeh kya kiya aapne? (still not out from that shock)

Raman: Pair... pair thik ho gaya tumhara...πŸ˜‰

Ishu moves her legs and ...

Ishu: amma, see my leg...πŸ˜ƒ

Amma: haa ishu.. yeh sab raman ke wajah se hua hai... Tum toh medicine lagane ke liye ready hi nahi ho rahi thi... Thank you raman... warna puri trip ishu ko ghar mein beth kar nikalne padti... woh moch ka dard sehe nahi sakti...

Simmi: Arey wah bhai... aap toh bilkul doctor ban gaye...

Vandu: doctor itne asani se nahi bana jata.. bahot padhai aur mehnat karni padti hai.. it requires dedication and hardwork.. dedication matab...

Simmi: bas bas itni angrezi hume bhi ati hai...πŸ˜ƒ

Raman: oye simmi.. doctor ki padhai nahi ki hai humne par kam se kam.. ilaj toh thik hi karte hai... (gives a victorious smile) varna kuch doctor... (He looks at ishita and winks...)πŸ˜‰

Papaji: Arey bahot masti ho gayi. Sab lok tayar ho jao hum aaj kahi baar ghumne jayenge...

Ruhi & Shravan: (dancing) bahar jayenge... yeh maza ayega...

In ishra's bedroom...

Ishita: Thank you...

Raman: kya kuch kaha tumne? Sunai nahi diya...😈

Ishita: thank you...

Raman: jor se bolo... Zhagadte samay kaise sherni jaise awaaz nikalte hai... waise bolo...😈

Ishita: you know what.. aap thank you bolne ke layak hi nahi hai.. kam se kam muzh mein itni courtesy toh hai ki mein sorry aur thank you bolti hu... par aap toh apni galti hone pe bhi sorry nahi bolenge... aur thank you woh toh is janam mein aapke muse kabhi niklega hi nahi...😑

Raman: yeh awwaz dekho kitni kadak hai.. muzhe sirf ek baar thank you sunna tha... tumne toh paanch baar boldiya... You are welcome toh mein bolunga nahi... pata nai kis musibat mein fas jao aur muzhe bachana pade?

Ishita: aap khudko salmaan khan samzjhte hai... let me clear your confusion aap salman khan ki juti bhi nahi hai... (she leaves...)😑

Raman: Kya salman khan ki jutti...??? example bhi dhang ka nahi de sakti... doctor kisne bana diya isko... nahi yeh doctor nahi dentist hai... Khudko toh jahnsi ki rani hi samajhte hai... pair thik hua nahi ke jung pe jane ke liye tayar...😈

In the bus...

Ruhi: dadu hum kaha ja rahe hai????

Papaji:  beta hum log wai jarahe hai... waha par 7 ghat hai... Bahot hi sundar jagah he...😊

Ruhi: Waha par hum log tennis khelenge...⭐️

Toshiji: haan puttar jo khelna hai who khelo... bas enjoy karna...πŸ˜†

Amma: Haan par.. sambhal ke... bahot dangerous hota hai...😲

Toshiji: hum punjabiyon ko  kisi baat ka daaar nahi hota... hum sherniyon ke bacche hote hai... billiyon ke nahi...πŸ˜†

Amma: Precaution is better than cure!!!!πŸ˜‰

Toshiji: (to simmi) kya boli yeh madrasan... kahi angrezi mein gaali toh nahi di...

Simmi: jane do na mummyji... enjoy karne aye hai, kyun apna mood kharab kare...

Toshiji: Haan, yeh bhi gal sahi hai...😊

Raman: (slowly in ishita's ears) wais eek baat puchu?

Ishu: raman kumar bhall meri permission le rahe hai? Main nahi bolungi toh nahi puchenge aap...😈

Raman: Nahi... Puchunga...πŸ˜†

Ishu: that's it puch kyun rahe hai...

Raman: Apni courtesy dikha raha hu...πŸ˜†

Ishu: Dikh gayi puchiye...

Raman: kis chakki ka ata khati ho?

Ishu: what???? (absolutely confused...)πŸ˜•

Raman: kitni bhari ho pata hai tumhe... sirf paanch minute utha kya liya, mere toh haath itne dard kar rahe hai... jaise mano do bhare hue cylinder hi utha liye ho...

Ishu: Pehle tak toh apni amma ka khana khati thi.. par jab se yahan ayi hu... wahi chakki ka atta kha rahi hu jis chakki ka aap khate hai... (ishu to herself) itnasa wajan nahi utha sakte aur khud ko salman khan samajhte hai...

Raman: Phir se salman khan... Itna pyaar karti ho kya usse...

Ishu: Haan.. Aapko kya...πŸ˜‰

Raman: itna hi that oh usi se shadi arne chahiye the na... meri zindagi kyun nark bana rahi ho...😑

Ishu: Galti ho gayi.. jo aapse shaadi ki... isse accha toh main apne amma ke ghar khush thi... Mai apko ek advice deti hun har raat sugar khake soiye... kamsekam normal toh bolenge...😈.

Driver: papaji. Aa gaya wai...(driver said interrupting raman and ishita's fight... )

Raman: Ishita!!!!!😑

Ishu: Chup... (signaling raman to keep quiet...)

Everybody gets down and sees the beauty o nature...

Mihika: Akka yaha tents banaye.. kitna maza ayega na...

Romie: haan ji mihika ji. Mein aapki madat karta hu...

Vandu: Come on mihika, chalo tents late hai...πŸ‘πŸΌ

They run towards bus...

Romie and mihika building tent and romie touching mihika in name of help and mihir notices...

Mihir: (to himself) yeh mihika samazhte kyun nahi hai? Muzhe hi kuch karna hoga...

He walks towards romie and mihika..

Mihir: Uncleji ko paani chaiye...

Romie: ha toh jake do...

Mihir: woh muzhe pata nahi kaha he.. toh tum jaake de do...

Romie: ruk main tere ko batata hu kaha hai...

Mihir: Isme time waste karne ki jagah tum khud jake leke aao...😊

Romie: o yaar, main mihika ji ki madat kar raha hu na?

Mihika: Romie, kisiko paani ke liye na nahi kehte.. jao tum jaake paani de do uncle ji ko. Yeh main akeli kar dungi...😊

Romie has to go... he goes in the bus to get water...

Mihir: Main tumhari madat kar deta hu...πŸ˜ƒ

Mihika: koi jaroorat nahi hai... tum jaake trisha ki madat karo...😑

Mihir: u know mihika trisha is gone...

Mihika: so u remember that even I am gone... So don't even try.. pata nahi kal tumhare raman bhai koi aur ladki layenge aur tum dum hilakar uske piche jaoge.. And u wanted to help me na? yeh lo (she hands over the tent material to him) yeh tent tum hi laga do...😑

She walks away...

Mihir: mihika. Mihika meri baat toh suno...

Romie: (to himself after noticing mihir and mihika) muzhe kuch karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai... yeh mihir khud hi raste se bahar jayega...hahaha...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

*****

Ishita and ruhi were roaming in the park..

Ishu: Ruhi yeh pedh dekho, kitna beautiful hai na... aur iske flowers bhi...

Ruhi: haan ishima... aapko woh flowers chahiye kya? Mein lekar aao..πŸ˜ƒ

Ishu: (smiles) Aww meri baby... woh bahot upar hai baba... tum toh abhi choti ho.. jab badi ho jaogi tab dena... thik hai...

Shlok: o ji.. woh toh choti hai, par ji main toh bada hu... main ladu aapke liye...πŸ˜ƒ

Ishu: Nahi its okay... Bahot upar hai..😊

Shlok: Aapke smile ke liye ek phool toh la hi sakta hu...πŸ˜ƒ

Ishu: par...

Raman: Koi baat nahi darling... mein lata hu.. tab toh tum logi na...😳

Ishu absolutely shocked at his behavior...πŸ˜•

Ishu: pedh pe chadna ata hai...???😲

Raman: Punjab ka sher hu itna toh ata hi hai... Aur meri us galti ke liye abtak naaraj ho... Chalo darling bhul bhi jao...😳

ishu: kya??? πŸ˜•

Raman starts climbing the tree...

Ruhi: Come on papa.. you can do it...πŸ‘

The whole family comes near the tree to witness what is happening...

Ishu: Raman aap niche utarye... Aap ko lag jayegi...

Raman: (loudly) kitne phool chahiye tumhe...

Ishu: (still in shock) ek hi kaafi hai... Aap niche aa jaye na...😳

Mihika: how sweet... jiju aap ke liye phool lane upar gaye na... Akka you are so lucky...😳

Raman climbs down and has a lots of flowers in his hands... Ishita gives a breathe of relief...😳

Raman: ye lo tumhare liye...😳

Ishu just accepts it...😳

Simmi: Bhai tu kabse itna romantic shomantic ho gaya...πŸ˜‰

Papaji: Oye simmi puttar.. pyaar bade bade parvaton ko hila deta hai... yeh toh phir bhi insaan hai...

Vandu: I must say raman, that was a very sweet gesture...😊

Bala: Vandu muzhe ek doubt hai... hum family day par aye hai ya kisike honey moon mein kabab mein haddi banne...πŸ˜‰

Vandu: haan appa, hume in dono ko honey moon bhejna chahiye tha pehle... Warna waha ki sari kasar kahi yaha na puri kare... hahahaa...πŸ˜†

Every body laughs...πŸ˜†

While walking... Ishita holding the flowers and smiling and raman notices...

Raman: yeh phoolonka guldasta banao ya apne balon mein lagake khud guldsata dikho.. tumhari marzi hai...πŸ˜†

Ishu: how rude ek pal mein acha banta hai.. dusre he pal mein phirse ravan kumar...😲


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