Originally posted by: rithureuben
Nice fanfic. But don't like that it ended so soon.
😉Wah! An entire OS on an SBB/SBS/E24 segment?
Kya bath hain 😊..Very good observation of characters Pri.. Very apt dialogues.. KCM's maikay wala was fundoo..I could hear her deliver the dialogue.😆And our Major sa uthavlae horahae hain 😆..mehandi se apne likhae .. 😉..Could have continued a bit more na? Chaal teek hain, next OS should be 100 words more ok?
Originally posted by: shreya_rc
haha... rithu tum soch bhi nehi sakte ho, itna likwane ke liye kitne zor dalni padhi mujhe 😆😆
Originally posted by: prettypri
Thanks Ritu...😊.About it ending soon..well..as I said it was only about that one sequence leading to Paro burning her hands!Only imagined that much today😉
Originally posted by: prettypri
Radz..🤗Thank you..thank you...all praise is welcome😉😆If KCM was going to be in the OS mausam had to come in...ha ha ha..!About the length I actually wrote this as a scene ...my imagination of the scene ...and then ventured..with shreya's encouragement to post it as an OS!Next time...if there is one😉..why not...will write a long one...be prepared to read😆
Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
It was nice pri...I like it...
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