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Posted: 10 years ago
😭   this is my reaction after reading the last line...


But from the first till before last few lines... it was posy vs black and white...😉😉😉 kind of cute it was...

your updtes are like...ek phal mein hasaya ek phal mein rulaya...par dhil nahi maanta ki yeh dard dega...sirf sukoon dega... 👏
Edited by indhuza - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update di
arnav is highly acctracted toward his wife...
But dont want to accpect it
thats why he go away frm her
lol she thinks arnav is a thief...
Loved the way he teases khushi
wow khushi asked her
What is that one thing you call as yours?
Wow kya baaat hai khushi
love u so much
loved it Edited by arshirupa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting.very interesting.
carry on.
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a fabulous update <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update as usual Deepthi!!! 
So both of them were missing each other, that is a progress in the relationship 😊 Poor Arnav seems to have had a tough childhood and Khushi is asking all the right questions, if only he let her break some of the barriers and told her his past he would be at peace too.

Aww it was once that he thought she was the only thing that he could call his!!!!

Please update soon, cannot wait to see what happens next 😊
Edited by anu1017 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for them to share each other's pain. Awesome update. Take a bow. You are an amazing writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Egoistic Arnav too smart enough to deal with every thing bt not his wife.he cares have an attraction..one person he knows is only his bt isnot able to say to same person who he owes..
Egoistic Khushi have only her pride to say her own.she is just unable to make herself digest real arnav..who he is?what he is?she infuriates him a lot..fights bt trust to an extent..
I think the day adi will ever try to hurt khushi,which i think is gonna happen that day khushi will get her answer..
Loved the dialogue nani said to khushi abt arnav..true to his state..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I simply loved the update.
Very very amazing . I know i write the same thing in every comment but i love the intensity if this story.
Arnav and Khushi are both fighting their emotions...they both are somehow attracted to each other and at the same time they loathe each other too.
Arnav is now lusting after Khushi and he left his newly wed wife to fight the attraction.
Awww...they were missing each other...
And i absolutely loved the kitchen scene. It was so friggin cute. 
Khushi thought he was a thief and the way Arnav teased her was adorable.
Its so nice to see some of these much needed light scenes in their intense relationship.
But of course , Arnav and Khushi can never have one proper and civil conversation...and so once again there was a world war with at the end hurt both of them.
The chapter was really really good.
Loved it to bits.
And thanks for updating so regularly.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
liked it ... evry emotinal:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
well superb ...but expecting romance lil bit ..but not fight