A Boy's Tale : A Rangrasiya OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: The-Diva

Haan, you're right! Over confidence bhi thik nahi hai naa! I wanted to ask you, tum wo umanand ke adventures ka post nahi banaogi? I love those!! 

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

''What would u like to be when u grow up, girl ?''[/DIV]

and she stared into his eyes with confused innocence.perhaps she would never grow up...or perhaps she would be the warmth of early sunshine,the sigh of vernal breeze, the morning song of a thrilled cuckoo, the shy blush of a budding red red rose -------ethereal but too delicate for this ugly,harsh, viciously cruel world.

He promised himself to shield her, to be her knight errant, to grow up a man she always wished him to be.

And he grew up...and pushing her further and further until she dissolved into a faint remembrance.leaving behind that ragged doll and a fond memory,his last hope of salvation and sanity.

[DIV]He never got the chance to say thank you.She never waited that long to hear it

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

tu maar khayegi, saare din mehnat ki and feedback aisi mili tujhse ??😡😡

Originally posted by: niyoti

Shreya! What a surprise! You write! This part is my absolute favourite! It's heart breaking and yet so sweet. Absolutely love LOVE Paros descriotion. This whole OS put a smile on my face.will you write some more please?. 😃

Originally posted by: prettypri

Ha ha ha...this was initial feedback ...will write detailed analysis...ab you write so well...my reaction should be also good na😉

Originally posted by: niyoti

Shreya! What a surprise! You write! This part is my absolute favourite! It's heart breaking and yet so sweet. Absolutely love LOVE Paros descriotion. This whole OS put a smile on my face.will you write some more please?. 😃

Originally posted by: The-Diva

@Shreya Don't want to make your post messy, isliye im not quoting.

Kuch funny yaad nahi aaya? No problem, I'm sure KCM ke kuch witty dialogues aur one-liners sun ke you will get dher saare ideas 😆 You didnt watch today's epi??

I apologize for mixing Hindi and English, par Kya Karu O Ladies, Mai Hu Aadat Se Majboor!!

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

ohho baisa, dont apologize that much...we r not speaking in suddh hindi yaa english !😛