YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread4* UPDATE 04/14/14 pg. 12!

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Just read heartbeat part 37 38
One of the best heartbeat parts..
Virika anniversary gift scene
Zaaine is damn cute

Update soon

Ps will undress my previous comment soon

Abhi m feeling like to spam... Although I have my chem test in two hours

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Keany You No Update Heartbeat For So Many Days...? 🥺 😭

Why???

Me Miss Zaaine...🥺 😭

Update Please?? 😛

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

chapter 54

Hello Guys... i know its been long time i Updated.. so here i present u my most favourite update!! I was working on this from long time to make it long enouh for all u lovely readers . Hope u r as much excited as i m abt this update... cz finally the little member will be here...eagerly waiting fr ur RESPONSE !!

Viren and Jeevika were getting so bored since Zaaine had fallen asleep. Jeevika was tired also and wanted to go upstairs to sleep, but Viren didn't let her go making her watch a movie with him. Jeevika started feeling uncomfortable and was slowly realizing that something else was wrong. She then felt an extreme amount of pain and knew it was time.

j - "VIREN!!! HOSPITAL NOW" she yelled...

v - "What????? Wait how is it possible? I mean right now???"

Jeevika just looked at him wanting to kill him for not moving...

😊 scroll down...

It was 1st of April!!!!!!

Happy April Fool's day 🤣

I know this was an evil joke cause many people have been waiting for an update for like a month now, but this was all Millee's idea!!!!! 😆 Scrap her and yell at her for making me do this 🤣 Okay I'm not that evil also... Will give you a small preview of what is going to be coming 😃

Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Preview:

v - "Jeevika come out of the bathroom already! Its almost time to go. Zaaine is already sitting in the car waiting for us"

j - "Cominggg!!!!" she said walking out

j - "Viren are you sure Zaaine will be okay without us this weekend? I mean we've never left him alone"

v - "Yeah but there's always a first! Anyways he has to start getting used to this now that another baby is coming. Plus Zoya's parents love him and she's also going to be with him tonight and she will meet us right at the reunion party tomorrow afternoon"

j - "Yeah but why can't we take him"

v - "Because there are going to be no kids there. Now will you get in the car?"

j - "Fine" 🥱 🥱 🥱

Even though Jeevika was scared to leave Zaaine alone, Zaaine was awfully excited knowing how much he was pampered by Zoya, Karan and her parents. It was still early morning and Zaaine had called asleep on the way to their home. Viren carried him inside and Karan showed him the room to put him in. After a few hugs, and Jeevika staring at her son numerable times, both of them left heading towards an exciting weekend!

Promise the next update will be very long!!!! 😆 ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

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Millleee😡🤬🤣
how on d earth u get all des ideas hun🤣
brilliant idea though👍🏼

Karina like really while reading i was happy dat finally d baby gonna pop out bt wt we got babaji ka thulu🤣

Loved d preview
sooo finally virika goona b alone n romance hun😉
bt will miss my baby zaaine
u better gve us a update jaldi i mean really jaldi

Edited by --Ayesha-- - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Where is d update🤔sirf preview
u made us fool😲🤣
millleee ur dead🤣

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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

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hahahhahahhahaha🤣 my evil laugh !!!

this April Fool prank was hilarous... even i cracked up whn i thought this !!! 😈

I really liked all ur comments regarding this prank !!!😆😆😆

but guys keeni is really sweet she gave u precap... i didnt expected tht !!!😳😳

BUt thts why i love u keeni pie... u always make me happy by these unexpected updates !!😃😊

Coming to update.. how on earth u r so brilliant writer... like really u can bring butterflies in my stomach with ur updates...👏

nd i do really blush while reading these sweet update😳😳😳.. eventhough u know i m nt a blushy kind of person !!!! 😎😎

this preview is really fun ...

finally they r gng to tht reunion party !!!🥱🥱 grt .. nd they better have so much fun !!! 😈

nd u knw wht dont blackmail me with those killings thing!!!😡😈 i know u cant do this ...

nd tht alcholic part was fun !!1 i will love to see tht🤣🤣👍🏼

nd u know thn i will make zannie bikhari ... aww i love to see him like tht !!! 🤣🤣

in short i want to tell u .. tht u r perfect writer... ⭐️

I LOVE U TWINNE!!!❤️

👏👏👏

ND dont be a lazy pant like me... nd update soon !!!

or should i say u better update soon !!! 😆😆

Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago

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kryanfan1

@kryanfan1

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

this was such a bad april fool's..!!

I expected a long update..!!!😭😭

Anyways the preview was good...so waiting for the next update..!
Update soon.!!😊😊

Thanx for the pm..!!😊😊

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Nitu

@Angelic_Doll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

read the april fool prank now u really made a fool out of me the update was short yet sweet sry for not cmting on oder stories was buzy wid xams but must say ur a brilliant writer addicted 2 ur story vry much its lyk an drug