OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Possession (completed) - Page 7

That was... so nicely written. when is the next one?

This is amazing. I was waiting the whole day for your update.
I cant wait to read the next part.

I agree with Sunara. This is the story I wanted to see in the serial. The buildup of the relationship between Rudra and Paro is gradual and at the right pace.

👍🏼

Originally posted by: ashaskb

That was... so nicely written. when is the next one?

Edited by napstermonster - 10 years ago

Loved every bit of it! And thsnks for not making it short... this is your best work for me! 👏

This makes me happy!!! Thanks :) have to read it again later.

That was beautiful, beautiful writing. Loved that the story unfolded slowly, luxuriously, built and ended on a surprise twist. Just lovely!!

wow! mind blowing! loved it! cant wait for the next part!!

Just lovely, Paro went back where she was needed, the jallad's house is where she felt she belonged. So bittersweet that a strangers home meant more to her than her own. And he was waiting...deep down he knew. Can't wait to read next part!

Wow this is excellent writing.The majors  yearning for her is well described.Pls update regularly.loving this.