OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Possession (completed) - Page 4

Lovely story, Napster. Hits just the right spot for the weekend. Enjoyed this bang-on characterisation of Rudra, Paro and Aman. Thank you. Waiting for Tomorrow. 😊

so intense...such raw emotions. I honestly do not know how you do it...

love it! cant wait for tomorrows part!

He was so in love with her in the "Yesterday" part. He just cannot voice it. He is a man of action. Can't wait for the "Tomorrow."

And is this why she ends up staying in his house with him and his father? Because she is no longer a prisoner, she wanted to stay away from her cell, and BSD allows her to move to a safe place? This would explain your other OS. The mirror wala.

wow so intense ...loved it

Wow. The emotions were palpable from the start. The intensity of Rudra's actions just goes to show how far to the edge paro can push him. Excellent work. Can't wait for tomorrow's piece. 

Are we gettin an update tonight ?

Awesome!!! Simply Superb!!! LOVED it!!!👏 I think this is one of the best OS's i have read on the Forum!!! 

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