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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update, FB part was very emotional, Present me finally Rajat ne bol diya Priya uski wife nahi hai, πŸ‘πŸ‘ waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon, thx 4 PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
next update jaldi 
please cant wait for longgg 
  superb 
 jut 
  thank u for ur pm 

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Posted: 10 years ago
very bad yaar.. u ended it on another suspense πŸ˜’


Loving it, continue soon ! 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Sandhya meri questiionaire abhi bhi jaari hai../

Viro i m asking a new question only..
how dare rajjo tell tyum tum to Ram , when he is a employee under him?? sorry  sandhyya i noticed this point πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
Hospital k register mein priya ka naam nhi tha kya, bcoz previously also she had a check up their, shayad ram bhool gayaπŸ˜›πŸ˜† jaane do sandhya tumhare kehne pe ram ko maaf karidya aur Viro sandhya ko baksh diyaπŸ˜†
baaki comment karoongi, mera aapko  Ekta sis kehne ka saarthak hogya, ram ko suit se sherwani pehenaayi, aur aapne rajjo ko bilkul ram ke saaamne k seat pe bitha diyaπŸ˜†(main jaanti thi ye karogi 🀣) aur rajjo OMG itni lambi dialogues, Ye rishta toh theek se sambhaal loπŸ˜†πŸ˜† , laggta hai energy drink peeya haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Driver bechaara kitna studious and honest hai yaar medicine laake car k saath bahar hi khada tha kya??πŸ˜†

Priya ne letter bhi chod diya, ram ne padh bhi liya, paral changed to Pihu, KK confronted her son, ram still hidden his feelings, restless priya again maseeha Rajjo. sabko free me gyan baant ta hai, jai ho rajjo babaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†. sorry bahot zyada khinchaayo hogayi ab aage se nhi hogiπŸ˜›πŸ˜›


Very beautiful update,loved the story n portrayal of emotions raging bull ram , hurt priya, angry vikki on his friend's childish behavior, hyper neha as usual, nutz blaming her self, and super happy maa KK. 



Thanks for the brilliant progression, beautiful narration and PM too.

chalo abb aapke naye sawalo ke jawab deti hoon
first he was an employee...woh bhi Ram ka nahi tha...Rajat's boss is different.
second...meine jaanbhujkar mention nahi kiya ki Priya same clinic gayi ki different...same gayi hoti toh ram ko shayad pata chal jata...aur Priya clinic gayi zaroor lekin doctor se mili nahi
Driver ki detailing bhi chahiye😲...itna maza aata hai driver ke POV jaanne kaπŸ˜†...malu iss baar koi loopholes nahi chode hai...tum dono ho na scrutinize karne issliyeOuch
Thanks for commentsπŸ€—
 
Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi πŸ˜†
is bar trouble nhi karungi aur na hi koi question puchungi πŸ˜†
priya pune chodkar gayi aur ram pune aaya only to know k priya left him πŸ˜”
priya note chodkar gayi aur reason tha bhi na usme k wo kyu jarahi hai toh ram ko itna naraz nhi hona chahiye tha  πŸ˜†
driver toh bada accha aur wafadar hai...poora din apni madam ka wait karta raha πŸ˜†
ram ko pata tha k priya clinic gayi hai toh usne clinic pe enquiry kyu nhi ki πŸ˜•
present mai shaadi k mandap tak pahonche gaye esha aur ram πŸ˜† but rajat beech mai aagaya..i mean samne aagaya πŸ€£
now rajat will speak up the truth aur apni dukhi kahanai sunayega πŸ˜†
waiting for next update πŸ˜› want to know k rajat kya kya batata hai aur kaise batata hai πŸ˜†
yeh part likhte waqt aap kitni careful thi wo update padhkar dikh raha hai πŸ˜† but mujhe reason mai aur malati nhi balke rajat lag raha hai πŸ€£ 

thanks for the pm πŸ˜›

p.s. aaj subah maine ipl ka "come on, bulawa aaya hai" song dekha...i wanted to post the link for you as ur rajat is dancning in that πŸ˜† but link nhi mila 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

chalo abb aapke naye sawalo ke jawab deti hoon
first he was an employee...woh bhi Ram ka nahi tha...Rajat's boss is different.
second...meine jaanbhujkar mention nahi kiya ki Priya same clinic gayi ki different...same gayi hoti toh ram ko shayad pata chal jata...aur Priya clinic gayi zaroor lekin doctor se mili nahi
Driver ki detailing bhi chahiye😲...itna maza aata hai driver ke POV jaanne kaπŸ˜†...malu iss baar koi loopholes nahi chode hai...tum dono ho na scrutinize karne issliye
Thanks for commentsπŸ€—
 


Ok sab agreed ..
Mujhe driver ki honesty dekh k maza aa rha hai, aaj kal k drivers aise nhi hota hainπŸ˜†πŸ˜•

Well Doctor se nhi mili toh prescription kounsa diya med laane ko?😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!! what a Awesome twist πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Wonderful Update πŸ‘
Hope next update is very emotional & re-union of RaYa,
Waiting for next update & Thanks for the PM πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

hi πŸ˜†

is bar trouble nhi karungi aur na hi koi question puchungi πŸ˜†
priya pune chodkar gayi aur ram pune aaya only to know k priya left him πŸ˜”
priya note chodkar gayi aur reason tha bhi na usme k wo kyu jarahi hai toh ram ko itna naraz nhi hona chahiye tha  πŸ˜†
driver toh bada accha aur wafadar hai...poora din apni madam ka wait karta raha πŸ˜†
ram ko pata tha k priya clinic gayi hai toh usne clinic pe enquiry kyu nhi ki πŸ˜•
present mai shaadi k mandap tak pahonche gaye esha aur ram πŸ˜† but rajat beech mai aagaya..i mean samne aagaya πŸ€£
now rajat will speak up the truth aur apni dukhi kahanai sunayega πŸ˜†
waiting for next update πŸ˜› want to know k rajat kya kya batata hai aur kaise batata hai πŸ˜†
yeh part likhte waqt aap kitni careful thi wo update padhkar dikh raha hai πŸ˜† but mujhe reason mai aur malati nhi balke rajat lag raha hai πŸ€£ 

thanks for the pm πŸ˜›

p.s. aaj subah maine ipl ka "come on, bulawa aaya hai" song dekha...i wanted to post the link for you as ur rajat is dancning in that πŸ˜† but link nhi mila 

meine maalu ko bhi explanation diya ki agar Priya same clinic jaati toh ram ko sab pata chal jata...aur enquiry kaise jab Priya ne register hi nahi karwaya aur Doctor se mili bhi nahi.Tongue
Ram ke orders the driver ko ki wahi rehne ka toh kada raha becharaπŸ˜†
aur jyada flashback keechti toh log kehte I am stretching like a rubber band...toh issliye jyada details nahi diOuch
dhuki kahaniπŸ˜† haan aur bahut lambi sunayega😑..tum dono ki wajah se😑
 
P.S. kitna chedoge uss Rajat ko aur muje...are jeene do useπŸ˜†..muje nahi chahiye koi link😑achha hua nahi mila link...sakshi ka hai toh de do😳
Thaks for commentsπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii sandyyy 
Again I missed it ... Hopefully from next time I will be able to come in first page πŸ˜†

Coming to the update ...I so waited for Raya marrige in any way πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
But you stopped at the very point ...
You could have write "BIWI" 

"Priya meri BIWI nahi hai Ram" 

It could have stronger impact πŸ˜† ..Kyun wife likha πŸ˜‰

The flshback scene was simply superb ,when Ram called priya , he got switched off and Ram felt some tug in his heart and than driver calll .When Ram read the letter his emotinos ,aguish ,while travelling in train priya's weeping .everything is just potaryed simply awesome.
And in present she said to rajat she dont care and went inside ,hugging her two kids she cried 
wah superb scene .I loved it 

But i want the next update also ASAP...
abhi chahi ye ..πŸ˜†If you are not going for the tour ,i could have make you post atleast tomorrow πŸ˜†
Chalo thanks for the update ... 

I so wanted to give one more gift EKta sister 
But controlled as you have to travel na so not posting now .. 

If you wont post the next update sooonner 
will deffo post your gift here πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm 
chaho toh can i post your gift πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†