TaaRey Dark FF - Deewangi Thread 2 *Thread 3 link added* - Page 34

wow superb update
so finally truth comes out
very soon thats great

superb updt
rey forgot that taani was in storeroom
taani leg is injured liked his concern for her
he is really hurting her so much
happy at least he little bit know about ovi
eagerly waiting for nxt part
just can't wait for the truth to be out
so updt soon
Edited by Sona_loveVD - 10 years ago

GREAT!!!!

U r superb as always & happy to know that ovi's truth will be revealed before rey soon...update next part soon...

now I don't have words to say. May be because of the pain taani is going through. Don't take my comment seriously I am an emotional freak. Is rey even a human? How can he forget that she is still in store room😡Why he always remember her as his wife when they are on a bed and rest of the time he didn't even treat her like one. Is she his wife only when they getting intimate. I am seriously hating this rey. May he would find out the truth. May be he will amend everything. May be taani will forgive him and this story will have a happy ending. But whatever he is doing is just unbearable man!! I just wanna give him a tight slap along with a nice dose of punches and may be I will also throw him out of his own house least caring about the consequences. He is behaving worse than any animal.

you know what moved me the most were these two lines.
Rey took her hands and pin them above her head...he bend down and kiss her neck shoulder...leaving harsh wet kisses...taani was feeling pain but she didnt stop him she was standing there lifelessly

Taani was standing there...rey look at her but she was not looking at him she was staring at ground

I could really feel her pain in these lines. Thank God rey felt guilty after doing that else I would be the first one to go and give him a kick😡 and that ovi, for the first time she did a right thing unintentionally though. Still hate her to the core. Again I would say don't take this comment too seriously its just my frustration on the character's behaviour and not with you.

This comment is an attacker for all those who know me as I am always in a happy mood but I am also something like this. I can't take the injustice even if its in ff. Hope you understand. BTW! You are doing a great job. Hats off! You write really well

as always superbly written

feeling really very bad for taani how she has to suffer

n rey i m feeling lyk killing him how can he forgot that he is the one who locked her in store room

but luv his caring side also
atleast he i feeling guilty on his behaviour towards taani

luv that taani answer him back

thank god atleast now he is going find out truth

precap is really exciting
want to see rey regreting about his own behaviour towards taani

update it as soon as u canEdited by princess_tara - 10 years ago

hey shanu its awesome update, m happy ki rey heard everything whatovi said to herself, nOw he wil get the truth , ovi is finished now , but the deep wounds that rey gav to taani on her heart , what will happen now , m crying 4 taani really , why rey always do that beast kind behavior wth her , really hating him now, how blind he is in ovi lov, hey shanu I hav a req yr plz before yr examz plz update this wanna kno next n jb u will busy wth yr examz toh vaise bhi tum update nahi karogi toh plz before exams update it plz dear

Painful rey is really an animal yaar
After doing so much he forgot abt taani
Thn hecame home n star to luk for her
Thn dis mahan person remember tht his wife
Is in store room coz of him n thn he go thr n
Bring her n thank god somewhr he feel guilty
Hmm luv tht he dress taani wound he change her dress
Haaye he sleep with her gud luv taani morning reaction
Luv her ans to rey thank god she show her angry to him
Rey reaction was expected but luv thr kiss thn rey want to
Hlp taani wah but as always he end up hurting her but luv
Taani ans also n wow best prt rey is going to find everything
Thing abt taani ovi life thank u so much for this per-cape is dis 😃 luv it to best thanks for PM n update soon plzz update Tom plz waiting for swayam to com n take stand for taani luv u 😊

it was nice update..
rey will surely regret for his behavior with taani..
and what he will do with ovi after knwing the truth..

Awesome update...👏

Poor taani...😔

Rey is feeling guilty after that little incident want him to feel worst after knowing ovi truth...😡

Taani should not forgive rey...😳

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😃