A One Man Army ||~Season 2~|| - Page 8

awesome prologue
ella and evan bond is nice
loved their fun
ella mad on inspector super
update soon

beautiful prologue
luved thee bro n sis bond
there cute fights n then the manofy part

ella is strong
hate the person whoever has kidnapped evan

so update soon
waiting for chap1

Edit
Sorry am really busy with my practical works..I loved it specially love the bonding between Evan and El..and you write so well that I can feel that lovely but naughty bro-sis bonding so hat's off to you for that..👏👏..and also I loved the convo between El and Inspector..they way she threaten him was so funny..😆..good work..⭐️⭐️ Edited by deboleena.manna - 10 years ago

Interesting and superb prologue.egarlx waiting 4 ur nxt update

nice update. Lovd bro- sis bonding. And i salute hr guts to bust out on dat officer and to go out and search fr hr bro all alone. Update soon.

superb prologue dii
love it
their bro sis bond was soo cute
& loveable
their piggy back ride awww
that was so cool
now i too missing my bro
& when taani warned the officers or
i say threating them that part was so cool
in the last part
I walked towards the unknown journey but the destination was clear...
i love this line
i dun know y
waiting 4 ur update
so update soon dii

Awesome prologue
Loved evan n ella bonding very much
Evan went missing from mission
Ella is going to find him alone
Waiting to read first chp
Update soon

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

Isnt this tr story?

Nope its not
It is not based on any actors
Its neutral story just like any other stories in writers corner

awsum prologue...

beautiful prologue!!
awesomeness personified!!