Originally posted by: vishakupp
Looking forward to it. Please do update soon
Originally posted by: vishakupp
Looking forward to it. Please do update soon
Originally posted by: anupam_dil
very very nice partππ but come to current track soon as I want to see the reunion through your writing...continue soon...and plz PM me
lo mardi goli health kodr kapoor was giving you heavy medications na toh nhi kaha tha but ab kahungi πi should have force you na...next tym pakka karungiπhaan bht bharosa haiπ
kaha na control nahi hua πkoi bhi leap lo...reverse ya forward...doesn't matter...story se matlab haiπmujhe laga dr. kapoor ki hi advice hogi ..waise how is he? hv you visited him? π€£koshis karna k rajat na ho else kapur is fine...first name se hame kya karna hai π€£lkein kitna pila rahi ho yaar...kidney problem hogayi toh π€£u can irritate me...waise mujhe irritate karna aasan nhi hai π
Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Very good start. Very impressive. Please continue soon,
Plz pm me for ur updates.
Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
What an amazing storyline! It was sad to see that circumstances once again played its cruel game and separated Ram and Priya but what was circumstances which made Priya left. What was Ram hiding from her which, according to him for her own good? And why both of them behavingly stubbornly? And who is his HE, taking advantage of Priya? Why is He calling her Mrs. KapUr? Many questions.
Pls continue soon.
If possible add me in ur pm list.
Superb beginning yaar.
I m surprized and loved reading.Emotions of raya were perfectly penned down.continue soon.Ekta nhi ho lekin separate toh kar chuki ho raya ko aur beech mein Mr.Kapur ko bhi ghusa diya pressent meinππWelll post the other parts soon if already u wroteπ
Originally posted by: tulshan1989
hey shazk u r back with another story on raya
have no words to descrbe just beautifully written
raya love each other but their ego is stopping them
pls continue soon and pm me the first part
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