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Awesome update di
loved it to the core
every word was perfectly penned.. just wow!!
The pain was evident very clearly. Arjun in ICU, Karan in critical state, Kiren is arrested now..
the flashback was amazing!
Patil killed himself.. Raza felt the pain of losing his dear one.. Arjun felt it more than him.. The Arjun-Sik's convo was brilliantly written! two gun shots, one dead n other alive! Sik ws still planning to kill Arjun slowly but Arjun didn't give that chance, he killed Sik in just one shot ! fantastic!
Arjun's state is critical..
oh.. a new cliffhanger..
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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