Farishtey (last part: Pg 114) 2/10 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulas update,
Sameer & shree's agony was written beautifully👏
Arjun is wounded😲
Last line was a eye catcher 😛
Waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi kunchu di 🤗...
 
awesome update di👏...
 
so much emotions all together...
 
the pain that sree and sam are going through was, too much but why sam blamed arjun ?😲...he didn't deserve all this 

 and avani and arjun ???😕...
 
the scene at beach ...nicely written !😃...
 
update soon di🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update di..
lovely ..
chain snatchers so common na...
well lov d etf scene..
shree n sam bro
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awesome potray..
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome dear.
Sam shree reaaly hurt.
Sumthng big stored for Arjun.
Oh no he is hurt.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭😭really emotional n heart touching part
Sameer n Shree's mind state which was indulged
in the memories of past and the haunting present was beautifully described
their visit back to the ETF was nice ye really painful
also their convo was wonderfully written
on the other hand Arjun n Avni's convo was nice as well
Avni putting forward her worries as a mother and
same time not trying to be rude to Arjun was appreciable on her part
but then time made Arjun, Avni n Anjali meet again
but Arjun injured😭
thanks god the two were there n took him to the hospital immediately
eagerly waiting to know as which another line would cross paths
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved the shree n rathore's convo
waitn 4 nxt part
thanx 4 pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
very heart touching
Rathore and Shree visit to the etf office was beautifully described
their conversation was amazingly written
Arjun got hurt..glad that Avni and Anjali are there
thanks for pm..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mind blowing update di.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
You made my heart heavier...
Shree-sameer part was more than beautiful.. how both still lingered on their ETF days, and their POV during old workplace visit...each and every word was meaningful and weighted more than a ton for me...( I'll tell the cause later)

And Anjali...Avni...Arjun...nice move... do continue.

Keep writing...& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sameer and Shree both are so much affected by the turn of events and both ended up in the same place in search of some peace.Only if Sakshi had said about the convo with Arjun that day, but she too went away with that secret.So, none know about what had happened to Arjun that day, but Sameer knows that it was Roshni's b'day so he would be quite disturbed.Still they all care about him, but won't let it be evident.
Avni being Anjali's mother is worried for her.She doesn't want her daughter to depend on anyone so wants Arjun to stay away.But again they meet.Arjun is injured on the process of helping them.A panicking Anjali and a worried Avni helping Arjun.
Shree and Rathod hadn't planned to meet that day, Arjun hadn't meant to meet Avni and Anjali at the beach side, that was destined to happen and I have my own guesses for what's to happen more but will wait for you to reveal it.
Great update.
Looking forward to more..
Continue Soon.