KriYaansh Drabble Series : Entangled (Chap 2 - Pg 6) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Happy Birthday to meπŸ₯³

Is it 22nd January again??πŸ€” I thought you are gonna update it on my next birthday!😑
Finally you got remembered of this avoided beautiful piece of work. Thanks for updating Jerry! huh!πŸ€“

You are an expert of details. You write such small details which are so near to realism. One can't stop adoring and smiling while reading it. This series is so close to my heart for obvious reasons. And This series is so on my watch for many reasons. 
I totally loved Rey's condition in office. I can relate.πŸ˜†
Then comes my most favorite part, you love kria! Don't you??πŸ˜† How you managed to write her so well?? She reminded me of my mother who corrects the papers in a similar way. She tells us Kid's super funny answers in between like Kria did. I am in awww! Honestly! it was cutest thing I have ever read!!
But why the hell it was so short??? Let me guess! You are friend of Tommy! Laziness personified!😳

Jerry! This was amazing excerpt. I loved every word of it. Update soon!!!
Love you!πŸ€—

Hahahhaha agar one update her birthday dungi toh mere marne tak bhi khatam nahi hoga lols πŸ˜†
Glad u found the mush readablr..i am such a sucker at writing mush and romance..a hopeless romantic lol πŸ˜†
YESS me lovess Kria ..she is one of the mosttt beautiful female character i have ever seen and my fav in D3 after Rey <3
hahaha that English essay part was from an incident at my school...funny school days πŸ˜†
Adi drabble hai lol.. And mere laziness quotient ke hisaab se this is lengthy lola
yesss i am,tommy's dadi maa in terms of lazinesss :p
i am super happy u liked it ...me loves u toos :* :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

this chapter was fabulous and great... rey find her at one place and the way she do her
and make him go crazy... bu her ways to laugh and express he falls for it more loved it

thanks a lot dear ^_^
Glad u found the mish and depiction readworthy ^_^
:D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hayeee... mahi di..

i thought uh forgot ur way :P

bt wow... an update..

thank uh so much for that...

update was nyc... i loved how you described Rey...

with minute details... 

i loved it... updates soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Finally updated
Cute update
Loved the way u described kriya's antiques so cute and adorable and beautiful
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
awesome...

really a sweet update...

rey is damn adorable...

lovely..

continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
uff mahii...you are bahut zyada late u know that naa *rolls eyes*

recieving a PM from u was a surprise for me anyway!!! πŸ˜†


well coming to it... it was choo cuteee...

that moment when Rey spoke that he wanna kill his boss...that cracked me up bahut zyada 🀣

i loved how he admired her beauty...

it was really cute..

loved it..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
awww this was a cuteee part😳
d way rey admires kriya and his love for her awww

as alwayzzz fab one mahi😊

update d nxt part soonishπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
it's a cute update Mahi...
thanks a lot for Pm..

update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Loved this update to the core... its such awesome..

The way rey wanted to get rid of his tiredness by just puttng his head on her shoulder..
the way she scolded her just like a kid..
the way he noticed all her small actions and expressions nd got lost in it...
the way he found her wrds funny along with her fun expressions...
the way he thought of shooting his boss for so much work..πŸ˜ƒ
 
WOW!
just a big WOW!
Its marvelous.. ❀️
please update soon and PM me.. 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
nyce update... 😊

this one's very light... πŸ˜›

as rey is quite cool now... apart from the daily workload... πŸ˜ƒ

kriya surely brought the needed happiness in his life... πŸ‘πŸΌ

awww... such a cute school teacher... 😊

hehehe... poor rey... teachers are strict with their work... πŸ˜†