AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 4 - Chapter Eleven To Thirteen

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-Genelia-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Hi Silent Reader 😳
I am glad that u finally got courage to comment here 😆
It seriously means alot to me !!
now coming to ur comment 😳
is this a way to give ur first comment ?? 😡
instead of appreciating u r saying dumb things !!
try commenting again in a better way then I will surely answer ur questions 🤣
Will be waiting !!

look frst of ol don call me a "SILENT READER" u dumb ass!!!!! 😡 😆

coz IM NOT A SR!!!!

widout evn gvng me a chnc 2 say smthng u jumped on to d conclusion... nw vn uv olready concluded lemme tell u i WAS NOT in a state of being a SR leave SR evn VISIT d forums...

i read ool ur stories seatng infrnt of ma lappi continously 4 HOURSSS aftr i had logged in tht day !!!! n links i got frm ur index ... plus d recnt 1 i found in d frst few pages...

i wnted 2 clear ol ths but since my net is going OVVVER LAZY i cldnt...

smhow i mangd 2 read d updt n put up a cmmnt too... i wnted 2 say more at tht point of time bt i hd to shrten it up... by only venting out my frustation on u 4 ending d prt thr!!!!

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-Genelia-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

oh yeah btw

a heartfelt congrats 4 OL THS SUCCESS N FAME!!!

may u go ahead n achv a lot mooore!!!

CONGRTS 4 D NEW THREAD N STORY wch is no doubt going reallly well!!!

d updt ws damn good!!!

wanna punch tht sehrish r8 thr!!!

eagerly eager to read more SOOONER!! 😛😆

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Superb and gr8 update
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try to update soon 😉

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Another cliffy update!!!
CliffHanger Queen!!!!

Asya convo was cute!!! 😳

Asad is Attracted to her can't even think Abt Zoya with some 1else!!!
😳

Dis Sherish
😡

Aargh dis witch!!!
Trying to get Asad get drunk & blame him!!! For sumthng dat he haven't done!!!!

So cheap!!!! Why does he hav cheap friends????

Zoya coming to pick him!!!!
OMG what will she witness??!?

Shud wait 2 days!!!!

thanks 4 pm

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha I don't know even Tanveer is cheap 😲

yes she will witness !!

Will try to update soon 😉

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Iqra, another cliffy.. That's really mean of you.. I have a bad feeling regarding Sehrish's evil plans

it was getting long na thats why !!

haha ya u should have bad feelings for sure 😆

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
u don't like how he talks with Zoya or Sehrish ?? 😲
haha next scene is more dangerous so I want it to come up together 😆
Will try to update soon 😉

With Zoya sometimes he is so rude😡 and i really dont care how he talks with Sherish I would even have preferred he did not talk to her 😆

And what do you mean by dangerous i don't like that at all 😡

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: zoyaaakhan
Bubble 🤗
You are awesome...
AsYa convo was so cutee..
So Asad was attracted to her even before... 😳
Give a long update next... please... 😛

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try to update soon and a long one for sure 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Nice update
So its kinda clear that sherish is upto something
omg zoya is coming to pick him up
What will happen now
Plz cont soon i mean early on 26

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try to update soon 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha Ayat is not coming here for sure 😆
LoL I will think about slapping !
Well he thinks she is drunk so she will apologize for sure 😆
Will try to update soon 😉

No Ayat then 😭😆

But I want my slap then 😡😆🤣

Oh like that ?! Zoya was right he's dumb 😡

Again he won't believe in Zoya !

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Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: snehasya
hey I guess asad wont remember anything from past night but as zoya is still online she will here all the plan hence asad wont be proved guilty in front of zoya but by fighting she wil be the one who asad will make feel guilty and as asad is short tempered he will blow out on her
hmmm lets wiat for iqra version uske twist toh acche accho ko shock kara de

thanks for pm update soon

nice idea 😉

haha ya wait and I will show what I have got 🤬

Thank You 😃

I am glad that you liked it !!