Originally posted by: Jenny_sms
Awesome parts
Sorry Iam not able to comment busy hoon yaar but now I'll comment regularly promise...
Originally posted by: Jenny_sms
Awesome parts
Sorry Iam not able to comment busy hoon yaar but now I'll comment regularly promise...
Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
Their hang out or date was pretty nice and beautiful. They acted like a teenagers and sometimes like kids. LOL, yeah πEye locks are getting frequent and long too. Their chemistry is getting intense and interesting. Thank god! I thought you guys were bored of the eye-locks πLooking forward to read about the party. Aayega, aayega ;)
Originally posted by: Kyara.95
Hi :)
This is the first time I am commenting on this thread!Actually, I had this drabble bookmarked since very long but read the whole of it just right now. π³ Thank you! :)Honestly, I really enjoyed reading it till the part when Aliya was taking a bath and Zain barged in the washroom not knowing of her presence inside.But ...After that one, this got boring from the clothes wala prank. π I didn't have the intention of dragging it as much but due to the response, I took it for some more time. :) Next time, please do tell me if you don't like it :)Now, I wan't you to pen down some romantic scenes between them, Please!.I mean common girl .. it's their HONEYMOON after all and they have been living alone in that suite since many days now. You have to bring them close!! Physically and emotionally, Both!. As I said, it will begin in Day 10. I already have something in mind and all this is just a filler leading up to the party. :)
Originally posted by: -AkkiLuvsNBT-
Awesome ZaYalicious Update..Wow Choclate Ice Cream... It's my favorite π
I seriously want these scenes after they fall in love...!!! Aww bhai, pehle kyun nahi? π
Waiting for next part Sis
Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
That was such a cute updateπ³ Thank you π³LOL they are acting like kids with the icecream and then like themselves with their eyelocks, loved the kids reactionπ Thank you π
Cant wait for the next one
Originally posted by: Mishika123
Nice update dear !! π
Awww...Zain touching Aliya's cheek !! βΊοΈβΊοΈN I want a pm from me so maine buddy request bheji hai !!
Originally posted by: ---Shweta---
By the time she was done, Aliya's lower face was covered in chocolate ice cream.Zain tenderly wiped the ice-cream from her chin and nose and they looked into each other's eye, each mirroring the other's image. They stayed there for some time until a small kid came by and started laughing.Hayye Kajol <3 Thank you Shweta! :D
Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
lovely update.zaya was so cute.thanks for pm.update soon.
Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover
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Lovely update
Aliya's choice is same as me :) Same as me too :D
Awww zain wiped ice cream from her face
Plzzz update soon
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