OS | Pieces of me - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aap yahan!! What a pleasant surprise. :)
Loved the os..
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! You are an amazing writer! The entire thing was written so perfectly from the descriptions to the emotions to the dialogues! Kudos! The entire scene was very believable and something I can actually see play out in the show at some point!
Great job! It was a pleasure to read and I hope you write more! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg...it is a finnest piece dear...
just love it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful os
loved it
loved the conversation confrontation between paro n rudra
both has pain in their life but they dealt with it differently

pls do write more 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it, S..:)
What stood out for me was Rudra speaking his mind and heart...just a little maybe but he did. And I loved it.. So , I am happy that the hope which flared in Paaro s heart does have a chance. Beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely! Very well written. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for this lovely OS on PaRud!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was lovely
Loved the bit where he opened up and Paro closed the distance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely piece of writing. Loved reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It helps that I don't watch the show...It doesnt help that thanks to these wonderful pieces - i feel like watching the show

What a stunning piece - and most because I love that this Rudra (or could he be called the ocean in some other avatar) - acknowledges that he cannot change and that the woman he craves, the one who craves him - is waiting for a change that romantic notions will tell us are plausible, real even

You have always had a way with words but this piece actually strips off some of the civility that I associate with your words and brings purely raw emotion that I think this show is about

I love having such stunning pieces of you to read in the morning, first day of the week!

Keep them coming! (Yes, I guess I am encouraging emotional blackmail :))