Quicksand - AnKhi OS.

Awesome!!! Loved the titanic bit u put in and the analogy between paakhi and quicksand... Ur writing is soo vivid that I could imagine all the scenes and anshu's emotions..

Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

Awesome!!! Loved the titanic bit u put in and the analogy between paakhi and quicksand... Ur writing is soo vivid that I could imagine all the scenes and anshu's emotions..

Edited by AbandonedRiddle - 10 years ago

Brilliantly written!!! Keep writing dear!!!😊

Originally posted by: mirchy

Brilliantly written!!! Keep writing dear!!!😊

Thank you so much for this wonderful OS! <333

This was beautiful. I loved the idea of Anshuman falling in love with Paakhi being much like sinking in quicksand. The way you used Titanic as a backdrop of his feelings towards the end was brilliant. I did have problem with the language at some points because you switch too frequently between tenses.. it was a tad bit unsettling but otherwise this made for a very nice read. You have understood the characters and their relationship very, very well and that was perhaps the best part. Some bits were beautifully written. :))

Edited by ...Maham... - 10 years ago

This is absolutely WONDERFUL! 👏👏👏

Your narration was so vivid, so complex, so encompassing of all the confusing and paradoxical moments that pass over Anshuman that I was left completely satisfied at the end, even though your protagonist is left in a moment of willful oblivion.You have beautifully captured the painful ambiguity in Anshuman's mind at this point in the story! I hope this couple continue to inspire you because you have such a nuanced understanding of the characters!

Awesome one shots.

Originally posted by: jakr

Brilliant loved it