OS: Garam Hawa - Page 5

Damn. Poor Paro. 
Edited by e_enigma - 10 years ago

And thats so honestly thought by Paaro.. I loved this account of here..

Originally posted by: sushan

You are truly gifted writer I have read your Filigreed Sun what an amazing work.Love to read more from you.Welcome back. Love the twist all the time keep thinking it was Paro till we find that it was Laila with Rudra

Immense talent !  👏     Erotic but not vulgar !    Can i have a link to the above mentioned "Filigreed sun',  Please ?

oh..the second part was saddening kind of. For Laila. For Rudra.. While things seemed to be difficult to take control of in Khushi s story, for Rudra on the other hand , is such a complicated tangle. There s Laila, his compassion turning into injustice, Varun , his despise for what his mother did..

absolutely fabulous...you know i was actually hoping you would write rudra's side of the story too...the fact that rudra is NOT a beast is evident from the fact that he cares both about laila and paro in his own way..wish you would take this piece forward..do turn this into a OS/ FF if possible..like i've mentioned in my previous comment, you are an amazing writer...would love to read more of your works...😊 Edited by shagun-rocks - 10 years ago

Lady!

Very nicely written.

I need thandi hawa, pani and a consumashun after reading this!

Off to read Rudra's mind-sax

This one was bit sad. I dont know why, but!! Whatever.
Sj sa you write beautifully, and I'm reading your work for the first time, except your fun posts.

Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!

Amazing writing!!