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Desigirls12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet in new place and thinking sahabji for saving her and te way she going to meet and te way she admiring te whole mansion was lovely.. te way geet meeting my maan and came to know he saved her to be his slave and te way her pain thinking abt her life was lovely emotional..i love te update

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509501

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

omg.that was a fabulous update.really looking forward to it.

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

😊

update next part

very curious

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dhakdhak22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Nice dear
Wow maan bought hr
Geet dreams brokn again

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Is Maan A Vampire...

that is why he never comes out of his Haveli...everything is dark and black in that Haveli...

Geet is slave to him now...

very very interesting and intriguing update...

thanx for pm...

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chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

oh dear
this just isnt her day
well being saved from death into another hardship
well lets see what else fate has in store for her
well this will be intense for sure
so she wasnt really saved then not really
but why did he come himself to save her
he could have asked someone else to get her
there is more to what he is letting on for sure
so it begins their tale
her parents died so they didnt sell her but the ones who were left behind naa
so far its been mysterious am sure it will make more sense as you go along for sure
hmmm look forward to it for sure
wait it aint supernatural is it this story
not vampire werewolf or something like that
but then why so much darkness then
and what exactly he wants from her
man i ask too many freaking questions
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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tamannA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

maan saved her for his debts poor geet

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Sahiba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

heya..thanks for the pm...

really liked the concept...but there is this doubt that why does she call her sahabji and could recognize his voice as mentioned in prolougue but has never seen him in person and his identity is kept in dark as u mentioned in chap 1

...oh so he bought her...i think there is more to this story than just meets the eye...he must have known her for long...pls continue soon..looking fwd to its updates!!!!

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879014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

so much confusion

but nice udt

cont soon

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

awesome update...jitna socha tha usse bhi badiya update hai...so maan is not a saviour...he is dark in character...interesting...I loved how u described the whole haveli black...it is really scary & I love it...

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