Rishabala OS : Suddenly You - Page 4

wonderful OS - loved how their relationship evolved.

superb os

end was hilarious..😆.

nice os lazy.

hahahahahahahah.the last 2 para cracked me up.it was hilarious.but all in all a lovely os.loved it .

Unres on Pg 1.😆
Edited by manju21.k - 10 years ago

res ji😃
Unres ji😉

AH firstly thanks a zillion for the dedication honey 🤗!!! Love you so much 🤗!!

I simply loved the title.. its so sweet in itself 😳😆 !!! U are are truly magical writer hun.. else i can never ever would have imagined Trish, Dips and Madhu as lovely sibblings and them teasing RK in the name of Madhu was such a treat 😳 !!! 
Their journey from friends to life-partners and lovers happened with such silky smoothness that it felt enchanting 😃 !! Just from a mere TOUCH to KISS and to them becoming one was portrayed so beautifully that one would like to stop and wonder how the process of "Falling in love" is so mesmerizing especially when you know that person all your life ☺️ !!!
RK's talk about giving her the baby (now) gave me goosebumps ☺️ !! Their confession was very sweet too 😳 !
I could not help but rofl for their decision of postponing of having baby after witnessing the chaos in the hospital 🤣🤣 !! Oh God.. just imagine having such bratty kids and that too twins  😆😆 .. hmm i am totally with them in this decision though 😆😆 !!!

One sweet tale Lazy ☺️☺️☺️ .. where it felt falling in love is so magical ☺️ !!!
Edited by aDarkAngel - 10 years ago

beautiful story!  All of a sudden the person you have known forever becomes your life partner.  Strange how quickly relationships can change, and perceptions.  

Wonderful os...i am absolutely smitten with ur writing kuku dear...

lovely OS..

Wonderful OS! The end just had me laughing.