Arhi SS:What you will(retold)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am here. Will be back later tonight once Ive had a chance to read this.
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Ah sorry mklam for the delay in returning to this comment. But let me say that every minute I spent waiting to read this in peace was well worth it. The bard and his works hold that special place in literature that I can most times only see and bow my head to. To bring Arnav and Khushi to his world is something else. And The Twelfth Night is a fine place to start!!

I love how the waif is there and the ball is now rolling. 

Take it away. Just like you painted the picture of a storm-ridden Delhi, paint the pages of IF with the story of mistaken identities, love and laughter - I'm going to be with you for the ride.

All the best
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Posted: 10 years ago

UNRES πŸ˜‰
Nice start... sounds interesting... 

Is the boy related to Khushi in anyway or is it Khushi in disguise??? Just asking because of the name... 

 
Edited by varsha2KD - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow very nice start.
Awesome updates, it's very intriguing 
Looking forward to read it. 
I guess fate brought the boy to Raizada Mansion. Whose glimpses did Divyani found in that innocent boy? I am eager to know the background of boy. 
Update soon 
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Posted: 10 years ago
is that khushi in disguise of boy...awesome 
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'll be back here once I am done with work πŸ˜ƒ 
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Comments for Chapters 1 and 2 - here :) 


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Posted: 10 years ago
New Story ! Yay ! :)

The story's intriguing from the start...
Want to know about the mystery boy's background...
Looking forward to further updates.
Thanks for the PM.
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me here too ... 

Interesting ... Is Khushi disguised as a boy or is it really a boy ? 
This waif seems to be in dire straits ... what with the threadbare pants frayed 
at the edges and the sweater two sizes too big ... and genuinely in want for some food ... 

Waiting to read the next chapter ... Thanks mkalam ... 
Edited by Kishmish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg ...another story :D
Wow...loved the raga series...and now this ...
Amazing start...
Btw...y I feel that boy is not boy??
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg.. is it Khushi's son?? waiting..