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Posted: 11 years ago
oh!!! NOOO Arnav's insecurity will hurt Kushi. Why can't he see Kushi will heart with his behavior. Hope everything goes well.
Edited by akurmapu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply superb!!
Like the way Arnav wants to take the next step in relationship and overcoming his doubts and past.. But Rishabh and Khushi hug work oil in the fire.. But thank god Khushi was managed to explain Arnav.. like the way she Answer Arnav and promise she wont hug Rishabh. and Looking forward how khushi will respond to prove it to Arnav..

Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
i hope arnav and his insecurities wont take a toll their relation...i donno how he is going to get past his insecurities... and well , its definitely not the right way to begin the physical relationship but the thick headed man he is, he might not understand it...
poor khushi...i wonder how she will be able keep convincing him...
anyways i hope u update soonish with the way u hv decided to stop this chapter...cant wait...
and ofcz the chapter was well written, their reactions were completely justifiable..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Looks like there's trouble brewing in paradise. What with Khushi working with Rishabh and Arnav's possessiveness and distrust. I liked the way Khushi tackled it openly and in a forthright manner. Best policy to use with Arnav. Wonder if his fledgling trust has been restored or is he still,suspicious of the two of them? Definitely not the time to take their relationship to the next level...

Waiting for the next update.
Edited by hpr123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was as usual more than awesome.
Emotions - they are just so complex & the behaviour to which they lead is obviously further more complex. On one side Arnav is extremely insecure & want to hold on Khushi for his life. He can go to extreme limit just to make her stay in his life for eternity. He is getting extremely possessive & protective day by day.

Khushi on the other hand finally realises her love for her husband & will do anything to gain his trust & be with him,

Even Rishabh is very concerned for his Khush , that if he saw his Khush getting hurt, he can get into a war. But still is ready to continue his friendship with her.

This story is so nicely written that all ur readers can see that all ur character's behaviour was completely justified in their own way. Seriously can't wait to read more.

& It's very unfair dat u have left the story at this stage. Plz I will simply die if I have to wait for so long. So, just like u have updated both the stories in this same wee, plz be nice to us & update the nxt chapters of CLG & MKM- II as fast as possible. PLeeeaaassseee

P.S : I am so happy to see that u have updated Chapter - 2 of CLG & Chp -36 of MKM- 2 in the same week. I have simply start dancing & really A BIG THANK U TO U FOR TURNING THIS WEEK INTO A SUPERB ONE FOR ME.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it!

I understand Arnav's insecurities and I hope after Khushi confesses and their both on the same page that Arnav will be comfortable around Rishabh a little more. It irks me that he demands everything from khushi and she just bends to that will. Marriage is compromise and I understand that khushi is acknowledging and doing what Arnav asks but a hug isn't as sexual as Arnav sees it. Personally I think Khushi deserves an apology because he basically questioned her in the car about her affairs.

Am I the only one who is really annoyed with Arnav's behaviour towards Rishabh? I'm trying to justify it in my head but it does irk me. This is absolutely not your fault I understand the complexity and the effort you put into the characters. As an author your doing your job well if you have me thinking and forming questions from each chapter!

Awaiting the next chapter!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a mind blowing update. he was very eager to see khushi.. the anticipation shown by him was well written and the enthusiasm in khushi in meeting her husband was well expressed. But the whole scene was spoilt by the hug.

I really appreciate khushi for the patience in replying each and every question laid by arnav... she has one thing clear that whatever be the accusation and mistrust he has, she never gets angry on him and lashes out rather she explains everything to him and makes his misunderstanding clear. o my hats off to a character like this.
and arnav never misses the chance which comes his way... waiting to see her reaction...

awesome update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Mind blowing update...now after all those accusations he want her to kiss him.. 😕 happy to see khushi helding him with such maturity...I would love to see khushi vocal about her feelings...
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why?
Why did you stop here?


NO! Abhi hi toh padhna tha aage. Accha..promise that you will start off from where you left in the next update? PLEASE? Aisi naainsafi matt karna!

I SO loved the update. The yearning..the contradictions..the way Arnav was feeling. He will need a lot more from Khushi before he will start giving.

Assurance is all he wants. In all its form. And that, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada will definitely give. And Arnav being Arnav and what he has always been through would need that.

Abhi hi dekh lo, there he was daring to think and feel so much for Khushi..missing her even...and when he reached he saw what? Yes a harmless hug...but well, we know the history! Koi bhi ek second keliye sochta...had he been in Arnav's shoes. But yeh toh Arnav hain.

The big thing is, Khushi is willing ..actually she is quite adamant to give him that assurance that she ONLY belongs to him.

Its so good.

I SO SO loved the update. As I said, cannot wait for the next.

PS: Please start off from where you left, in the next update! PLEASE??? :'')






Edited by arshi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
i see the sence of insecurity in arnav becoz of his past...gettng angry is a genuine reaction aftr watchng khushi hug rishab.
The demand for kiss...should khushi do it or not?..
I think in such situation a normal person would have acted as told...so to save her marriage n arnavjii trust she might kiss him.
Ofcouse he is her husband n her love so it is right if she kiss him.
This is my personal opinion.

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