Life wasn't always fair, it was better if one recognized this fact before getting hoodwinked at the hands of fate. ---some dialogue it is..loving this story Parkhee...I have watched only one movie something starting with Gadar or something..sunny deol and Amisha patel...that was a painful visual story of the separation...when I read this one, got reminded of that movie even though story lines are different..I loved the Punjabi setting and slang..thats a nice touch...Arnav Putar, Babey and Khushleen...cool!
He had some aura around him that made her feel safe, like her mind knew something about him but her conscious couldn't remember. --- Nice scripting, you have written "that feel" so sweetly
He could follow even a buffalo and admire it for all she cared. ---Lol! Nice one!
As if he would eat her alive he mused with a smile.---Again something wonderful to smile while reading after reading lot of tragedy and painful incidents..
Gentle spray turned into a heavy fall in just fifteen minutes and then Babey was finding it hard to control monkey Khushi from going out and drenching herself in it. After half an hour when Babey had shouted herself hoarse and Khushi paid no heed, she gathered her Dupata and climbed the stairs herself to get Khushi down, by her ear.
.---Babey and Khushi combinations are cute..
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