RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 19

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She Won't Marry I Guess.
Update Soon.
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Originally posted by: sizzlingtrisha

What an emotional update 😭 loved it my heart beating faster 😳 update soon 😳


Thanks for liking it... πŸ˜ƒsure i would πŸ˜Š
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Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Omg such an emotional update. I hopw that she won't marry Rahul.update soon thanks for the pm.pm me if there is an other update


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thanks for reading πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nividances

Oh no...just like I guessed, Shail is getting Rachna married. πŸ˜‘😭

Hope everything works out and Kabir comes to the rescue...maybe he will come to the Garg's house to surprise Rachna when he realizes that Rachna is upset.


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Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome.. LOved it.. Thanks for pm..


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Originally posted by: SilverBell

She Won't Marry I Guess.
Update Soon.
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Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Wow!!! so so emotional...

Loved it..
Thnx 4 d pm...


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Chapter 19:

Rahul's mOm : Rachna beta haath aagay karo

As Pihu's head spins and she falls on the floor

Gunjan shouted: deee

everyone got shocked

Dayal: kya hua?? πŸ˜² 
Shail: πŸ˜²

Rahul's mOm : Rachna beta haath aagay karooo

Pihu's head spinn and she felt on floor

everyone rushed towards Pihu she was unconscious

Dayal: Driver ko bolo gaadi nikalay humein abhi hospital jaana hoga
Shail: haan mein abhi bolke aati hun
Rachna: ek minute pa'pa mein check karti hun

She checked her pulse rate and was shocked πŸ˜² but didn't say anything.

Rachna: woh humein hospital chalna chhayay
everyone rushed towards hospital

after a few minutes doctor came after checking Pihu...
everyone was tensed

Rachna: ek minute pa'pa maa aap log yeheen rukein. Dr. Neha aapne blood sample liya hai?
Pihu: kya kar rahi ho Rachna, meine tumharay liye naatak kiya aur tum mera blood nikalwa rahi ho!! πŸ˜‘
Dr. Neha: han Rachna le liya hai abhi reports aa jayengee
Rachna: πŸ˜ƒ thanks! dee aap chup karke betho πŸ˜‰
Pihu: Rachna! πŸ˜‘ i will kill u agar mujhay koi injection laga!

Mean while Dayal and Shail enters

Dayal:tum hass kyun rahi ho? πŸ˜²
Shail: πŸ˜•
Rachna: kuch nahi papa aisay hee, abhi pata chal jayegaa πŸ˜ƒ
Shail: ajeeb ho tumhari behen bemaar hai aur tum.. πŸ˜•
Rachna: maa mein ne kaha na πŸ˜ƒ
Rahul'dad: Pihu ab theek hai, mere khayal se humein ab chalna chahiye, baaki baatein baad mein
Rahul's mOm: haan baki sab hum baad mein fix karenge.
Rachna(in mind): thank God dee ne bachaa liya! πŸ˜ƒ

After sOme time Dr. Neha cOmes in.

Dr neha: Dr. Rachna yeh rahi reports, aap check kar lein
Dr Rachna: haan do πŸ˜›
She swung open the file and begun scanning it with her eyes. She was over joyed πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ wow Omg positive!!
Pihu: πŸ˜•
Rachna: deee mein maasi ban nay waali hun! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Pihu:😲😳😳
Dayal and Shail: kya ye tou buhat khushi ki khabar hai πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: ab hum thodee der mein ghar chalte hain mein abhi aayee

*******
at night ...

Rachna: dee ab jiju ko bhi bataao na yeh news πŸ˜ƒ
Pihu: haan lekin meine socha ke mein saamnay bataungee unhein πŸ˜›
Rachna: tou iss mein konsi badi baat hai, aap aaj bata do, kal jiju yahan pe πŸ˜ƒ
Pihu: haan yeh theek rahega πŸ˜› ek minute, mein samajh gayee! tujhay Kabir ki yaad aa rahee hai na!
Rachna: πŸ˜³ haan  dee ab aagay kya karein, aaj tou aap ne bacha liya
Pihu: hmm πŸ˜• ek kaam kar, Rahul ko sab bataa de, woh zaroor samjhega
Rachna: lekin dee aapne dekha na woh kitna khush tha
Pihu: Rachna woh samajh jayega

mean while Rachna's cell rang,,,
Pihu: lo jee humari tou abhi tak call nahi aayee aur yahan.. πŸ˜‰
Rachna: dee! πŸ˜³

Rachna goes near window

Kabir: muwahhh πŸ˜³
Rachna: πŸ˜² Kabir!
Kabir: haan my sweetheart mein tumhein buhat miss kar raha hun 
Rachna: mein bhi 
Kabir: hmm yeh bataao kya kar rahi thi?
Rachna: aise hee dee se baatein
Kabir: mere baaray mein?? πŸ˜³
Rachna: jee nahi aanay waale baby ke baare mein (later she thought she revealed)
Kabir: kya baby kiska?? πŸ˜²
Rachna: wo Kabir dekhoo dee aur jiju ka surprise mat kharaab karna ok?
Kabir: haan haan tum bataao tou kya hua? πŸ˜²
Rachna: tum chacha ban nay waale ho! πŸ˜ƒ
Kabir:kya?? πŸ˜ƒ sachii
Rachna: mucheee πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Kabir: wowww mein abhi jaake bhai ko batata hun πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: nahii! πŸ˜‘ chup bilkul chup samjhay tum!
Kabir: ok ok shhh ab theek hai πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: hmm..Kabir
Kabir: haan πŸ˜³
Rachna: tum kab aaoge? mein tumhein buhat miss kar rahi hun. πŸ˜­
Kabir: miss tou mein bhi tumhein buhat  kar raha hun.. abhi sirf kuch ghantay guzray hain aur yeh haal hai πŸ˜­
Rachna: tum please jaldi aao aisa na ho kuch ghalat hojaaye πŸ˜­
Kabir: kya hua hai Rachna πŸ˜²πŸ˜­ sab theek hai na
Rachna: haan filhaal tou hai, baad ka nahi pata πŸ˜­
Kabir: ohoo Rachna tum ro kyun rahee ho πŸ˜­
Rachna: tum bhi tou ro rahe ho na
Kabir: nahi tou yeh dekho πŸ˜›
Rachna: i love u
Kabir: i love u too πŸ˜³ chalo goodnight πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: goodnight πŸ˜³

*********
next morning 

On phone

Sugandha: kyaa?? πŸ˜²πŸ˜ƒ waqai buhat buhat mubarak ho!
Shail: aur aapko bhi
Sugandha: mein mohan se bol dungee woh aajayega Pihu ko lenay
Shail: jee acha hai πŸ˜ƒ

*****
At hospital

Rahul: pheww finally humein break milaa πŸ˜› tumse baat karnay ka buhat mann kar raha tha
Rachna: mujhay bhi tumse baat karni hai
Rahul: chalo na Rachna kaheen bahrir chalte hain
Rachna: nahin mujhay yaheen baat karni hai
Rahul: bolo πŸ˜›
Rachna: tumhein yaad hai mein kitna pyaar aur shaadi ke naam se tang hoti thi
Rahul: haan ma'm pata hai lekin ab.. 
Rachna: lekin ab sab badal gya hai
Rahul: jaanta hun mein πŸ˜³
Rachna: mujhe pyaar hogya hai
Rahul: kyaa sachh πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: haan mein pyaar karti hun Kabir se..
Rahul: kyaa? πŸ˜²
Rachna: uss din jab tum mere ghar aaye, mujhay kisi ne bolne ka mouqa nahi diya
rahu: lekin...😲😭 tum tou mujhay pasand karti thi na
Rachna: nahi Rahul yeh tumse kisne bola, mein Kabir se pyaar karti hun, uske bina nahi reh sakti  plzz tum apne parents ko manaa kardo πŸ˜­
Rahul(heart broken): cOme on why are u crying? chalo kisi se tou pyaar hua tumhein, tum fikar mat karo πŸ˜Š

***********

Sugandha: mohan mein buhat khush hun
mohan: maa mein bhi buhat khush hun πŸ˜ƒ mein raat ki flight se hee delhi ja raha hun
Om: ek minute, tum nahi mere khayal se hum sab ko chalna chahiye πŸ˜› 
Sugandha: kyaa?/😲matlab aapko rishta manzoor hai πŸ˜›
Om: haan mein bhi yahi chahta hun jo tum chahti ho πŸ˜Š

Kabir overhears and he was overjoyed


at night...
Rachna: Kabir kya kaha uncle ne? πŸ˜•
Kabir: woh Rachna pa'pa ne bola unhein kuch time chahiye (laughing inside πŸ˜†)
Rachna: mujhay buhat darr lag raha hai agar.. πŸ˜­
Kabir: Rachna kuch ghalat nahi hoga bharosa hai na mujh peπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Rachna: haan lekin darr bhi lag raha hai 
Kabir: Rachna ab tum sojao πŸ˜³
Rachna: ok πŸ˜• goodnight

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Edited by RabirLover - 10 years ago
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naughty kabir..πŸ˜†
awesome update