RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Preeti16

loved it!!! please continue!!!!!


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Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

Awesome update.. loved it.. update soon please


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Chapter 16:

*Bell rang*

Kabir: Lo aa gaya pizza, let me check

Rachna(smiled): jaldi karo buhat bhook lagee hai

Kabir took the pizza from the delivery man and paid him

                                                                 Kabir: chaloo ab                           

                                                                Rachna: kahan?

Kabir: mere room mein, wahan hum buhat ache movie dekhenge

Rachna(smiled): ok

They reached the room and Kabir locked it's door

Rachna: Kabir yeh kya kar rahay ho? door kyun lock kiya?

Kabir: ohoo Rachna aisay hee chalo betho .. aray yahan kyun beth rahi hoo?

Rachna: matlab?

Kabir: matlab yeh wahan betho.. bed pe araam se.. mein tab tak movie lagata hun

They were watching the movie and enjoying pizza...

Kabir: Rachna tumne kabhi socha hai agar sach mein aisa hO (making her scared)

Rachna: kya matlab? agar sach mein yeh daine yahan aajayay?

Kabir: haan tum kya karogee phir?

Rachna: hahahahha yeh koi poochnay ki baat hai mr. Kabir Tripathi mein doctor hun mein us daine ko injection laga dungee aur usko nashaa de dungee

Kabir: what are u mad us daine ko injection lagaaogee kaisee pagalon wali baatein kar rahi ho (laughed out loud)

Rachna: ismein hasnay ki kya baat hai?

Kabir: acha leave it yeh bataao agar mein tumharay samnay koi bhhooth ban ke aaon tou?

Rachna:hahahah very funny tum tou already bhooth ho (continued watching movie)

Suddenly a horror scene came, Rachna's Eyes became wide and she shouted aaa and hugged Kabir

Kabir(laughing):kya hogya dr sahiba apka injection kahan hai

Rachna:m..mujhay buhat darr lag raha hai she switched off the tv with remote

Kabir: Rachna yeh kya hai yeh meri favourite movie hai band kyun ki?

Rachna: mujhay darr lag raha hai

Kabir:hahhah darpok billly meow

Rachna: Kabir !!

Kabir: hahhaha yeh kya hai tumne apnay sath sath apnay baalon ko bhi pizza khilaya hai

Rachna:oh no mein abhi dho ke aatee hun

She went to the washroom and opened the wash basin's tap, water didn't come

Rachna(confused): pani kyun nahi aaraha yahan se try kartee hun she opened all the taps and by mistake the one for shower as well and water  started flowing on her..

Rachna(shouted): Kabir! Kabir!  (she was trying hard to close the taps.. in mean she became fully drenched)

Kabir: kya hua?

Rachna: yeh band karo pata nahi kya hua mein pooree bheeg gayeee

Kabir: ek minute (he also got some what wet ) huh yeh lo hogya kya kartee ho Rachna tum (paused)

He looked at her she was fully wet, he was speechless. She was looking damn gorgeous fully wet, with few tendrils of hair falling on her face, he moved closer to her and caressed her wet hair away from her face

Rachna(in lower tone): woh galtee se khul gaye thay 

She saw his proximity to her which was a little too close, her heart beat started raising higher and higher as he whispered

Kabir: aisee galtiyaan baar baar kartee rehna (giving her a naughty look)

Rachna was blushing high, he lifted her in his arms and made her sit on his bed.. he kept on staring at her and rubbed his fingers on her face and caressed her hair

Rachna: Kabir mujhay apnay room mein jana hai

Kabir: kyun?

Rachna: woh change karna hai warna... thand lag jayegee

Kabir: nahi thodee dair mere saamne betho na aise heee

Rachna: Kabir agar sab aa gaye tou

Kabir: aur agar uss room mein daine aagayee tou (naughty smile)

Rachna(smile):daine tou nahi lekin bhoot ke buhat zyada chances hain tumhari shakal mein (giggled)

She was about to leave when he held her hand and grabbed her from her waist and made her face close to him..

Kabir: mein help karun? (winked)

Rachna: haan zaroor lekin change karnay ke baad  (showing tongue)

She pushed him away and ran from there, he started chasing her, they both were running in the house when suddenly sughanda, Om, Pihu and Mohan came ðŸ˜²

All four were shocked to see them like this

Finally Kabir Rachna realised that everyone is at home and they both stood stunned

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!!
Awesome... continue...
Wanna know what will happen next ...
Am very excited...
Thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg u r a suspense builder ...today i read frm 10-16 all parts ...bcz i had missed ur p.ms earlier ...aamazing talent..neever ever stop writing..u r amazing...writer...keep entertaining us
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Posted: 10 years ago
So awesome! Cliff hanger..update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved It.
Very Cute.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg what will they say? Update soon. Thanks for the pm. Please pm me again if there is an other update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Wow!!!

Awesome... continue...
Wanna know what will happen next ...
Am very excited...
Thanks 4 the pm...


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