RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yellowpurse

 haiii

☺️is this enough in the comments? lol jk.

Rachna: Kabir lekin mujhe bohat darr lagta haiπŸ˜•
Kabir: come on Rachna tumhari koi suhaag raat nahi hai ke tum mujh se darr rahi hoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† (then he thought what he saidπŸ˜†πŸ˜†)
i was thinking the same thing!!! y the heck scared?πŸ˜† oh, and also like the line where he's like main help kar doon kya (saree pehen ne mai :p soo cute & naughty.

it was all very sweet and beautiful...thanks so much! a really nice treat :)


πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Thanks!!! happy u liked it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nividances

Hai Meru...tumne to maar hi daala πŸ˜†

Just loved it! Romance hi romance and proposal also!?!?   πŸ˜³

Too much...can't wait for the next part!


thanku yaar...!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: linu82

Very cute and nice update I love it. So lovely and romantic make me blush. Rabir r just cute can't wait for next part now . I hope we will have some romance in the show as well between them I just can't wait😳


thanxxx πŸ˜ƒ happy u liked it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Wow! u r awesome. what a romantic place.its was so so so romantic.plzz update soon 


thnx 4 reading... !!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bollyfood

Romantic . Love Kabir's naughtiness πŸ˜‰.


glad u liked it πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

Love Kabir here.. so naughty and romantic  update soon


thanx for reading πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Same here love kabir's naughtiness!!!! Plz update soon


thankx for readingggπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome update! Very romantic scener!


Thanx alooot!!😊 happy u liked it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter:14


Night 12 am...
Rachna in her night dress is sitting in her room, she is thinking about all the evening and keep on blushing. Looking at the ring in her finger, it's thought is giving her goosebumps πŸ˜³ . She is lost in her world of fantasies and is brought back to her senses with a phone call.

Rachna: hello
Chaya, Gunjan: hey Rachna πŸ˜› kaisee hai tu?
Rachna: Chaya Gunjan hey mein bilkul theek hun πŸ˜› tum log bataao buhat jaldi yaad aagayi meri 
Chaya, Gunjan: Oh hello tum ne kabhi ek baar bhi phone kiya? tum tou jaisay humein bhool he gayee, jaisay kisi aur hee planet pe rehtee ho
Rachna: han wo tou hai
Gunjan: kya?
Rachna: kuch nahi tum log bataao na kaisa hai sab kuch wahan?
Chaya: hmm sab theek hai waisay tu one week mein wapis aa raho hai na πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: one week mein? πŸ˜•kyun?
Gunjan: aray tu bhool gayee kya tumharay six months pooray hojayengay na! πŸ˜ƒ phir tum aur hum woww phir se humari masti!
Rachna: kya one week baad six months khatam hojayengay  mujhay tou pata bhi nahi laga

Chaya: Rachna lagta hai tu wapis nahi aana chahtee πŸ˜­ tu humein bilkul miss nahi kartee? 
Rachna: nahi aisi baat nahi hai, acha mein tum logon se baad mein baat karti hoon abhi mujhay kuch kaam hai πŸ˜­
Gunjan: Rachna sun tou...
Rachna cuts the call
Rachna(in her mind): matlab sirf one week.. mein aur Kabir.. uske baad mein us se itna door chalee jaungee *she got tears* tu bhi na Rachna kitni pagal hai ro kyun rahee hai πŸ˜­

Suddenly she heard knock on her door and wiped her tears

Pihu: kya ho raha hai
Rachna : dee aap abhi tak soye nahi?
Pihu: haan aisay hee mohan kuch kaam kar rahe the meine socha tujh se baat kar loon 
Rachna: betho na dee...
Pihu: hmm tou kaisi rahi?
Rachna: kya? πŸ˜•
Pihu: Rachu tu achi tarah janti hai mein kya pooch rahi hoon 
Rachna: oh acha buhat buhat buhat amazing! πŸ˜ƒ
Pihu: acha phir tu ro kyun rahi hai?
Rachna: kuch nahi aise hi maan papa ki yaad aa gayi thi
Pihu: Rachu mere khayal se mujhay ab maan papa ko bata dena chahiye tum logon ke bare mein..
Rachna: dee aise nahi na pehle uncle aunty se baat karo, aise pata nahi sab kya samjhenge
Pihu: hmm tu sahi bol rahi hai pehle uncle aunty se baat karlun phir
Rachna: hmm 
Pihu: kya hua hai Rachna itni sad kyun hai?
Rachna: woh kuch nahi soch rahi thi itne saare months kaise guzar gaye na.. pata hi nahi chala.. bas one week baad mujhe jaana hoga wapis 
Pihu: Oh acha tou yeh baat hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† btw mujhe achi tarah pata hai tu mujhe miss nahi karne waali balkay is liye sad hai ke tu Kabir se door ja rahi hai hai na πŸ˜†

Rachna: πŸ˜’
Pihu: hmm waise madam fikar mat karo kuch dino ki baat hai phir tumhein yaheen aana hai humesha ke liye πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Kabir: ehem ehem kya baatein ho rahee hain
Pihu: looo inki kami thi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Rachna: kuch nahi aise hee😳
Kabir: woh mein tumhein batane aaya tha tumhari sandals mein ne wahan rakhwaa dee hain
Pihu: sandalsπŸ˜•tum log ne ek doosray ko sandals se maara tha kya?
Kabir: πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† nahi bhabhi mein mohan bhaiya nahi hun jo sandals se maar paday
Rachna: πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Pihu: πŸ˜² jee nahi chalo ab chal ke sojaao chalo yahan se
Kabir: aray ek minute na baat karni hai Rachna se
Pihu: Kabir buhat hogayi baatien subah ko kar lena
Kabir: bhabhi aap jaao na sirf 5 minutes plzz plzzz 
Pihu: mein dobara aa rahi hun agar tum yahan huwe tou acha nahi hoga!
Kabir: ok ok promise ab jaao

 Kabir sits near her on bed...

Kabir: wohh kuch batana tha..
Rachna: mujhe bhi 
Kabir: theek hai pehlay tum bataao
Rachna: nahi pehlay tum
Kabir:okk
he gave her a rose and said i love u πŸ˜³
Rachna: Kabir kitni baar bologe πŸ˜³
Kabir: baar baar πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰ (and kissed on her cheeks and said) Goodnight
Rachna got tears πŸ˜­
Kabir: aray Ro kyun rahi ho? πŸ˜²
Rachna: kuch nahi i love u too. πŸ˜³
Kabir: ab tumhari baari bataao kya baat karni thi?
Rachna: kuch bhi tou nahi, bataa tou diya. πŸ˜­πŸ˜³
Rachna: ab jaao.
Kabir: nahi mein yaheen so jaun πŸ˜†??
she hits him with a pillow
Rachna: just shut up and go πŸ˜³


Next morning...
RaBir in car πŸ˜› on the way to Rachna's college
Kabir: Oh hello kya hogya hai Dr Rachna Garg aapki bolti kyun band hai πŸ˜†
Rachna: kuch nahi
Kabir: Come on Rachna jhoot mat bolo kuch tou huwa hai jab hum wapis aa rahe the tum buhat khush thi achanak kya hua hai bolo na
Rachna:i love u so much plzzz mujhay bhool mat jana πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
he stepped on the car's break and it stopped
Kabir: kya hua? πŸ˜² tum ro rahi ho? (wiped her tears and hugged her) I love u too and i promise i will never forget u lekin tum aisaa kyun bol rahi ho?
Rachna: woh Kabir mein wapis jaa rahi hun delhi πŸ˜­
Kabir; kya? πŸ˜²πŸ˜²lekin kyun? πŸ˜­
Rachna: mere 6 months training poori hogayi na iss liye
Kabir: kahan huay hain abhi six month.. abhi tou sirf two months.. πŸ˜• dekho feb, march, april may june july. tum tou 3rd july ko jaaogi na
Rachna: aaj 26 july hai..
Kabir: πŸ˜² sachi πŸ˜­
Rachna: hmm 
Kabir: tumharay saath time kaise guzar gaya kuch pata hee nahi chala 
(to lighten the moment) ehem btw itna kyun ro rahi ho wapis tou tumhein yaheen aana hai mere paas πŸ˜ƒ
Rachna: hmm πŸ˜³
he hugged her again 
Kabir: phir tum mein aur humara romance koi rokega bhi nahi (winked)
Rachna: Kabir tumhein bas yahi aata hai kya (and pushed him away) chaloo peechay traffic jam hogya hai πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Kabir: oh haan πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

At Night...

Rachna in her room doing some work on her laptop. Suddenly her cell rang

Rachna: hello

Chaya Gunjan shouted: surprise!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Rachna(confused): kya? πŸ˜•

Gunjan: tujhe hum abhi nahi bataa sakte..

Rachna: lekin kyun?

Chaya: ohoo agar bataa diya tou surprise kaisa bas tere puhanchne ki dair hai yahaan pe..

Rachna: kya matlab?

Gunjan: matlab tujhe samajh aajayega bas ab jaldi se aa

Rachna:tum log humesha fuzool baaton pe khush hona! bhaad mein jaye tum log ka surprise! *and she cuts the call in anger*

Chaya: arrey isse kya hua

Gunjan: aray kuch nahi mood off hoga uska

Rachna(again got tears): koi mujhe samjhta hee nahi hai

*Knock knock*

Rachna:come in (wiped her tears off)

Pihu: Rachna tu abhi jaag rahi hai

Rachna: haan dee bas final kaam karke so jaoongi (Pihu notices her sad face)

Pihu: ab kya hua?

Rachna: kuch nahi dee ek ajeeb uljhan hai pata nahi kya hone waala hai

Pihu:ohoo kuch nahi hai bas tu zyada soch rahi hai

Rachna: hmm shayad

Pihu(shocked): ye, ye kya hai?

Rachna(scared):wo kya dee ring hai aur kya (and hides her hand)

Pihu: pata hai mujhay ke yeh ring hai Rachna yeh kahan se layee tu?

Rachna: kya di meri hai meine delhi mein lee thi, yaad karo yeh wahi tou...

Pihu: jhoot mat bol! sach sach bata!

Rachna: woh uss raat Kabir ne...

Pihu (shocked): kya? tum log iss hadd tak puhunch gaye!

Rachna: dee is mein ghussa karne waali kon si baat hai mujhe aur Kabir ko waise bhi shaadi karni hai

Pihu: woh sab theek hai lekin Rachu abhi tak maan papa se koi baat nahi huee aur tum log yeh sab..

Rachna: dee plz chodo na, mein pehlay hee buhat pareshan hun..

As Sughanda calls Pihu

Pihu: mein ja rahi hun baad mein baat karungee tum se

...


It was late night around 2 a.m.

Rachna was trying to sleep but something was bothering her on the other hand Kabir was also unable to sleep, he decided to go outside and have some fresh air, he saw Rachna's room's light on..

Kabir: Rachna

Rachna: huh haan tum is waqt yahan

Kabir: hmm woh neend nahi aa rahi thi aur tum?

Rachna: kuch nahi kuch kaam karne ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin ho nahi raha pata nahi kyun  (sad face)

He goes near her and sits on the bed

Kabir: tum ro rahi thi? 

Rachna: nah..nahi tou mein kyun roungee πŸ˜›

Kabir: acha chodo yeh sab utho (he held her hand )

Rachna: kahan? πŸ˜•

Kabir: utho tou chalo mere saath

Rachna: lekin iss waqt kahan?

Kabir(dragging her): arrey chalo naa

Rachna(confused): hum kahan jaa rahe hain? πŸ˜•

Kabir: ooper

Rachna:kyaa lekin ooper nahi abhi tou mein sirf 23yrs ki hun, humari shaadi bhi nahi hui.. abhi itni jaldi ooper 

Kabir(hit his own head): Oh God madam lagta hai medicine padh padh ke tum pagal hogayee ho ooper matlab terrace idiot!

Rachna: oh sorry actually mein sach mein tired hoon na iss liye (giggled)

Kabir: pagal chalo

Rachna: wowww kitna beautiful terrace hai itne dinon mein meine dekha tak nahi how stupid I am πŸ˜²

Kabir: hmm acha ma'am ab betho πŸ˜³

He makes her sit on grass and keeps his head on her lap πŸ˜³

Rachna(shocked): Kabir yeh kya hai uthoo kisi ne dekh liya tou πŸ˜²

Kabir: plzz Rachna thodee dair koi nahi dekhega sab so rahe hain πŸ˜³

Rachna(blushing ): ek baat bataao...

Kabir: hmm.. πŸ˜›

Rachna: tum mujhse itna pyaar kyun karte ho? πŸ˜³

Kabir:😳 woh tou mujhay khud bhi nahi pata 

he held her palm and kissed it β˜ΊοΈ Rachna closed her eyes for a while😳 then she started caressing his hair πŸ˜³ there was some moment of silence between them

Kabir: Rachna ek baat puchoon sach sach bataaogee

Rachna: haan pucho na πŸ˜³

Kabir: mein jaanta hun tum upset ho kyunki tum wapis ja rahi ho, lekin kya koi aur baat bhi hai jo tumhein itna pareshan kar rahi hai? 

Rachna: pata nahi Kabir  mujhe aisaa kyun lag raha hai mere wahan puhanchtay hee kuch ghalat honay wala hai πŸ˜•

Kabir: kuch nahi hai Rachna, yeh sirf tumhara wehem hai aur kuch nahi πŸ˜³ come on smile now, aur mein hun na, kuch ghalat nahi hoga i promise!

Rachna:janti hun πŸ˜³ tum mere sath ho tou kuch ghalat nahi hoga..

Kabir: i love u πŸ˜³

Rachna: I love u too πŸ˜³

he started playing with the tips of her long silky hair πŸ˜³ Rachna was blushing red β˜ΊοΈ

Rachna: ab chalein πŸ˜³ neechay

Kabir: nahi abhi nahi mujhe khelnay do na πŸ˜³ tumhari zulfon ke saath πŸ˜³ phir pata nahi kab (paused) *to lighten moment he teased her* btw ek baat bataao tum doctor ho na

Rachna: hmm πŸ˜ƒ

Kabir: phir tou tumhein bachay buhat pasand hongay hai na πŸ˜ƒ

Rachna: haan buhat zyada! πŸ˜³

Kabir: woww phir tou mazaa aajyega!

Rachna:πŸ˜• kya matlab?

Kabir: matlab yeh ke humari shaadi hogee phir humaray bachay hongay hai na minimum 8 bachay tou hone chahiy hai na πŸ˜ƒ

Rachna:Kabir πŸ˜² 8 babies mein kaise sambhalungi 

Kabir: arrey maid rakh denge na.. theek hai na πŸ˜ƒ acha chalo 10 sahi hain πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Rachna: Kabir mein insaan hun 10 babies πŸ˜²πŸ˜² nah baba 

Kabir: acha baba theek bas final 12 πŸ˜ƒ ab theek hai?

Rachna: mujhay na ab sachi mein tum se darr lag raha hai πŸ˜­πŸ˜‘ uthooo tumm

Kabir(laughed hard):🀣 arrey tum roo kyun rahi hoo sorry baba mazaak kar raha tha🀣 πŸ˜‰ (wiped her tears) poori ki poori pagal ho!

they chatted all night, they didn't notice the time... and they slept.. with Kabir on Rachna's lap and Rachna keeping her face on his face πŸ₯±


next morning...

mohan: Pihu zara Kabir ko bulana

sug: arrey haan Rachna ko aaj college nahi jaana kya? 

Pihu: maan shayad woh chali gayee, mein dekhti hun

Rachna's room...

Pihu: Rachna array yeh kahan gayee books bhi yahan padee hain shayad washroom mein hai tab tak Kabir ko dekhtee hun

she checked in Kabir's room, she was shocked, he was also not there

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i'll update this FF now only after my exams.. until than TC! Love u all!

Likes, Tamatars, andaz all are welcome..πŸ˜ƒ 

Edited by RabirLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haayyy!!!! amazing!!!! update sooon!!!