Never Too Late - A D3 FanFiction [Updated Chapter 18- Page 69]8-9-2014

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

chapter 13
nice update dear...
swayam yells at sharon... good...she needs it...
poor neelima...
rey's pov was awesome..
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm

Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 11 years ago

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
before evrything...let me apologise for not commenting on i guess so many chapters...really veey sorry rini for dat...me last chapter pe cmnt krne wali thi bt u updated dis 1 fast...like really fast...
m loving sneha kapoor here...yup for me its like a movie infront of my eyes where sharon is no one but sneha...cant imagine ANYONE else here...dat anguishness in her behaviour dat vulnerability nd the die for attitude..so sneha type...
i loved it the way how swayam tried to put her feet in others shoes...sharon raiprakash crying..i dont want it..plz make her feel bttr..
my nxt favourite...reyaansh singhania...envious of kriya ghai..beaUTIfully described...
transformation from reyaansh to rey...amazing...

It is AoK. really...

And yes even I can see Sneha before me- she is the inspiration when I write. I try to imagine how she would play it in that particular sequence, and that's how I try to portray my Sharon. And she'll be better, don't worry. She's SRP, she knows better than being a crybaby.

Rey is beautiful- I just fall in love with him every time I write him...

Thank you... 🤗

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Thank you so much for all the encouragement people.

I cannot tell you how much your words mean to me...

Thanks to all of you who regularly read this piece of fiction and find the time to 'like' and put in your valuable comments...

Vaishu, kreya204, kriyapatel, dongirls, trisha19, Sanskriti, alex754, spongy, Rajeshwari, Rockingbhardwaj, Effacious, Anjali, Akanksha, Akansha, Alisha, Sanchita and whoever I missed out...

You guys rock...

These days I'm rather fond of this postmodern form of expression, via gifs.

And I lowww Hiddleston. He just makes Loki so much sexier. 😛

And I'm also grateful that although you people ship any one particular couple, you don't completely overlook what I write for the other couple.

So yeah... I just wanted to... um... Express and give you guys a 🤗

I'll return with a new chapter very soon.

- Rini

❤️

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

ds is lovely..
swayam gave sharon her own medicine...loved it bt swayam beta you are so dead now...
rey's thought were. very well penned down...
update soon dear...
thanks 4 d pm

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: -bLEu98-

Thank you soo.. much for this awesome comment. 😛
yeah that open ended convo- I wanted to leave it like that, to the reader's imagination. But looks like my readers don't like it much. From the next time I'll take care.
Read the last two chapters- 13 & 14 there's plenty of SwaRon. I've to build both the stories simultaneously and the fact is that the two stories are pretty much entwined and one cannot progress without the other. 😊
Thank you so much for liking both.

I am glad that u liked my words,But i must say that i always love to read open ended scenes,it make me feel curious and also make me excited to imagine anything for SwaRon..So please u dont need to stop open ended convos in ur write up..And yeah we all know ur story always ride between the two strong alternative bond,Kriyam and Sharey together..And u dont know i am just loving kriyaansh to read here..

I am sorry Rini,i was late to comment there for chapter 13,But now i will comment after combine read of 13 n 14..So again reserved,I am busy

Prateek

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: -bLEu98-
Thank you so much for all the encouragement people.

I cannot tell you how much your words mean to me...

Thanks to all of you who regularly read this piece of fiction and find the time to 'like' and put in your valuable comments...

Vaishu, kreya204, kriyapatel, dongirls, trisha19, Sanskriti, alex754, spongy, Rajeshwari, Rockingbhardwaj, Effacious, Anjali, Akanksha, Akansha, Alisha, Sanchita and whoever I missed out...

You guys rock...

These days I'm rather fond of this postmodern form of expression, via gifs.

And I lowww Hiddleston. He just makes Loki so much sexier. 😛

And I'm also grateful that although you people ship any one particular couple, you don't completely overlook what I write for the other couple.

So yeah... I just wanted to... um... Express and give you guys a 🤗

I'll return with a new chapter very soon.

- Rini
❤️

Nice choice..Loki..Mahn..Such a real "Cheetah"..👍🏼

😆

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

padh liya ..res for both the chappy's😛

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Beautiful yaar. Tour too good. I reallyelove your works.Well done.
Thanks a lot for the PM.
Update soon

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA
padh liya ..res for both the chappy's😛

tune ab tak pichhle chapters ke bhi 'unres' nahi kiya! 😆 Laalat hai! Hai hai! 😵

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

So I thought I would skip it.. Please notice the unsurity of the statement in here.

But here I am waiting for my sleep to overcome me and then I have the idea to comment.

See even stars worked in the favor of comment. Can't exactly comment in which individual's favor.. ;)

See for your Swayam characterization, I have liked it so far, loved it when he grew balls to face the diva... but for this chapter I didn't like him..

I mean see.. one of the perps of your work is the fact that you showed Swayam growing up spine. I mean in show many a times I would feel Swayam was being played. Like many a times I would so wish desperately he shouts in front of her coz lets face it SRP ragged him like anything. So there were some off moments in show but all in all it suffice.

Here too... but for this chapter. He overstepped. Being playful was awesome. Like you won't bite me and everything. But then teaching her a lesson that way, my heart went out to sharon. I could just imagine those weary eyes, remembering that staircase scene.

So here I am... loving Sharon... shunning away Swayam... *humph... with a pout*

So now coming to KR...

Okay if things would have gone right that day I would have showered you with my endless love for showing Rey's monologue... It was so great... Finally clearance over his part... his attitude.. his feelings... his behavior... his entire persona in that sense. I loved how you showed it.

And then the way you showed Rey relating to Kria... just cherry on the cake. I would bask in the make believe glory that Kria and Rey are layers beneath same coz lets face it there can be so many girls like this... :P But... there's a but.. there can be no one like Kiri... I could imagine the scene of Kria looking out... being so carefree... and beautiful...

And as for Rey... he is such a controlled character... poor he.. your heart reaches out to him coz what he was offered... what he had to take it.. carrying the burden of taking his best friend into the pit with him... Its like he is carrying the weight of entire world... It will be so good to see him take a break and just be himself. I can sniff and feel that... that this thing is lurking around the corner...

A beautiful chapter.. ^_^