Swayam OneShot: Flame in the soul - Page 3

Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shenz,What should I say?

This piece of yours made me re-live the whole exceptionally beautiful journey of SwaRon once again.Seeing SwaRon from the eyes of Swayam comes is a heavenly joueney.This piece was filled with so many emotions if Swayam and every emotion potrayed beautifully by you.I am so glad I read this...Its beautiful.Beautiful. 😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

It was just Beautiful. The way you expressed Swayam's feelings is just commendable 👏 👏

Swaron's journey came back rushing to me as I read this OS. Brilliant.

I just love your works as they are dealt with precision and beauty. Amazing. ❤️

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 9 years ago

This was such an expressive piece. You penned down the emotions in such a wonderful flow, from the beginning to the end. I really liked the way you handled it, I could imagine Swayam in front of my eyes.

I wish Swayam would have been handled the way you wrote in the serial as well. I was quite disappointed with the way they handled him. Anyhow, this piece is commendable.

Try to write more along these lines.

Love

N.

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