Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 20)

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Khushi...
Aranvji gave u his credit card...to buy what ever you want...okay you bought evening dress...nice.

From past some days you are little bit complaing h won't treat you as wife...did you try...to prove him that you are a lady...you are wearing tweety shirts,Mickey shirts with PJS while you sleep...so he thinks you are a kiddo ...so dear buy sexy nighties and lingerie as your second big purchase from your hubby credit card...Arnavji will feel proud as the purpose of the card for which he gave has been served...I tell you khushi you won't regret...it.

Khushi please dear remember at least vaguely what your hubby said and did...okay...

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Mahika84

@Mahika84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

WOW what a wonderful chapter, I really enjoyed reading it.

Finally looks like they are taking baby steps in their marriage...credit card thing is so cute & nice gesture & offcourse genuine from Arnav, unknowingly he is making an effort to become a good husband. Khushi's first purchase from her husband's money looks so classy; I can't wait to see Arnav's reaction when she wears it.

Khushi wants to drink & Arnav agreed for that & she felt empowered was very well written...drunk khushi is really treat to watch, I am happy khushi finally said what was in her mind, at least now Arnav knew that what's in Khushi's mind because he wasn't drunk.

Ahh the kiss...it was quite passionate & the nightmare part was very sad, it shows his insecurities in relationship, the last line while he was murmuring that khushi won't go anywhere is quite heart wrenching.

I am really anxious now for the next chapter, can you please update fast...pretty please.

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Loved the update rocking cute . loved how arnva took charge of khushi expense that was good for both of them both showing the other the role of the other in their life , loved how he has not tried to curtail her independence but encourages her to see and do thing even if he is not there loved that he has no qualm about her trying new thing and also letting him know she want his opinion about it loved how he told that alcohol was an offence in Dubai loved her reaction poor girl hearing sirens . Khushi wants more in their relationship she just does not know how to go about doing that loved her reaction to him calling her a kiddo she thinking he is treating her like a kid and arnav is afraid to do more because she might move away they are at a stalemate , loved that she bought the gown she wants to be sexy for him and we got a kiss so wish she remembers it and his confession of sort awesome update thanks for the pm.

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Sorry I forgot I had res'ed, I have left a comment on page 120 xx

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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

A beautiful and awesome update! 👏

I think it's an important step in there relationship that Arnav verbally expressed himself to Khushi and even broke his no physical contact promise to himself; although I wonder if it will be counted as a proper one as Khushi was drunk.
Will wait ti see if Khushi remembers/ manages to remember anything later.

Thank you for the mail.

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

drunk khushi + miffed khushi & love lorn (well,he put his guard down and tried doing things like husband...taking care of her financial needs at-least) Arnav + insecure ( territorial) Arnav == more crazily loving and insecure Arnav. and sleeping beauty...😆😆😆

chapter was so so so amazing.

i know i kind of tried to post comment before and i saw few people quoting song lines and love poems ...and thought...it is time i should shut up and enjoy the nice chapter and all the nice comments...but i am very bad...at being patient...so sorry could not finish any comments...but yes..chapter i did twice.

i am so apprehensive about what i am going to write next after so many nice songs and lines written for this chapter...but ...this what came to my mind after reading this chapter...as Arnav's "haalat."...so here it is..

this is a poem by Aamir Khusro...
and this one is in three languages...Persian, Brij (Hindi dialect ) and Urdu. first line is in Persian and second in Brij and third in Urdu and fourth in Brij and so on...( well, i came to know about that from Google ...when long back i was google- ing Jihale- miskin makum ba ranjis...Ghulami movie song..this one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5l5IeRaqxY

this is a version of the Aamir Khusro poem by Gulzar...which is nice tooo )

so okay after the lesson in poems and history...and lot of blabbering lets get back to the chapter...

I think this is Arnav's haalat now...and especially the last line.

( well, lyrics and translation is also from google- ing)

Zehaal-e-miskeen makun taghaful,
Duraye naina banaye batiyan.

Do not overlook my misery,
by blandishing your eyes and weaving tales,

Ke taab-e-hijran nadaram ay jaan,
Na leho kahe lagaye chhatiyan.

My patience has over-brimmed, O sweetheart!
why do you not take me to your bosom.

Shaban-e-hijran daraz chun zulf,
Wa roz-e-waslat cho umer kotah.

Long like curls in the night of separation
short like life on the day of our union.

Sakhi piya ko jo main na dekhun,
To kaise kaTun andheri ratiyan.

My dear, how will I pass the dark dungeon night
without your face before me.

Yakayak az dil do chashm-e-jadu,
Basad farebam baburd taskin.

Suddenly, using a thousand tricks
the enchanting eyes robbed me of my tranquil mind.

Kisay pari hai jo ja sunave,
Piyare pi ko hamari batiyan,

Who would care to go and report
matters of my heart to my darling.

Cho shama sozan cho zaraa hairan,
Hamesha giryan be ishq an meh.

Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,
I roam about in the fire of love.

Na nind naina na ang chaina,
Na aap aaven na bhejen patiyan,

Sleepless eyes, restless body,
neither comes she, nor any message.

Bahaq-e-roz-e-visaal-e-dilbar,
Ke daad mara gharib Khusro.

In honour of the day I meet my beloved
who has lured me so long, O Khusro!

Sapet man ke (d)varaye rakhun,
Jo jaane pauN piya ke ghatiyan.

I shall keep my heart suppressed
if ever I get a chance to get to her trick.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

OMG first kiss :O but Khushi may not remember any of it..DAMN

What a superb update

we had it all:-

Khushi enjoying her evenings with Arnav, seeing a new more carefree side to him, her buying a newer more married style outfits

then Khushi being somewhat comfortable in asking him to allow her to do something she has always wanted to try - Alcohol

Khushi then feeling upset and maybe insecure at always being referred to as a kid/kiddo even if it accidentally..she doesn't know anything better on how Arnav views her and what he feels for her

She gets totally drunk, accidentally but she was so adorable trying to protect Arnav from the spinning hotel🤣best was her puppy story it was really cute

in the hotel she finally tells him whats bothering her, well in a sense she does and Arnav's fears comes to life making him reveal that he does like her and alot

and the kiss happens, he knows she didn't dislike it and she hugged him tight

his nightmares are growing, now Khushi was in it which will not be good for his already fears that he has about his life and loved ones leaving him

looking forward to that time when they sit down and talk, or another one of these incidents but when Khushi is sober😳

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Justmybarun

@Justmybarun

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Ahh... What to say? Wonderful as usual. Spending husband's money brings great sense of belonging. Finally Arnav's insecurities made him let out his feelings for her. Poor though her state is such that ... Iam wondering if she really forgets or not. Great update or I wanna say episode... We'll done.