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Winters.A season cold and unforgiving was at its peak.A chilly night with a full moon, empty streets ,fragrance of orchids and a glowing fire, the most serene and peaceful environment one could experience.Yet a young girl was oblivious to her beautiful surroundings.She was lost in her own thoughts.Seated near the fire, she was trying hard to hide a smile but failing miserably.Their was a continuous buzz irritating her .She finally decided to look around for the culprit who was disturbing her thoughts.

"Sharon Tai! sharon tai!" someone called out.
"What is it kid?m not deaf..and for the last time just call me sharon"a highly irritated sharon replied.
"Whatever tai" a boy of around 7 replied rolling his eyes."Here are the the drinks you asked for and if you are done dreaming then better get ready for your prince charming, would ya?."
"Why the hell should i get ready for Swayam?Also prince charming?Don't use cheesy names for him baby bro"sharon said curtly.
"Are you kidding me tai?m NOT a kid.Ask swayu he would love the na-"
"Really now?stop this..did you come here to just irritate me..you promised kid you wouldn't come to the terrace today so what brings you here mate?"
"lol..someone is changing topics..i came here to break your dream bubble and tell that its time. For god's sake its your first date.do some arrangements"
"All this is none of your business kid. Weren't you supposed to--"
The kid cut her short and said with a tone of finality,"Stop the drama already tai. It is your DATE and whatever you might say you are worried about this.You can share your nervousness with me, u know na?"

Sharon became silent. She was not nervous as people are for the date thingie. The fact that she had confessed her feelings only yesterday was still not sinking in.She did not know what swayam expected of her..or what she expected of him.What would they do today?She was deliberately avoiding thinking about all this and simply enjoying the wait for her 'pehla pyaar' ,even the word made her shiver.After battling with her heart for 3 long years,yesterday she had finally told swayam about her feelings.Her shell was broken and she had taken a leap of faith by confessing.She knew he would always be by her side..loving her..she remembered his exact words from yesterday "Before i met you Sharon,there wasn't anyone i wanted to be with..but after knowing you, i have come across someone i never want to live without"..But still..what if their intensities did not match..what if..what if...what if...her fears were irrational and unending.

"Great now you are zoning me out.Hitler tai, swayu ke khayalon mein itta kho jaye ki apne bachhe ko ignore karna start kar diya.."

She noticed the kid.Absolutely adorable he was.How could he understand her so well..the only person who knew her inside out like swayam..or rather swayam knew her almost as well as the kid did..

"aap meri baat sun rahe ho na..earth calling siren" she snapped out of her thoughts again.
"haan m listening bro..i wan't lost in kisi ke khayal. okay? u are the one talking non sense" she replied trying to be stern.
"Thanks for the no compliment sissy.Now hurry your BF will be here.Also ma'am i warn you, if you don't behave properly with Swayam or fight with him then i will...umm steal your hp books..M i clear?"
"Yes captain.Point noted.Now off you go to bed."
"Adios.Have a nice day..oops night with your bf.And do tell him i love him and give a kiss to him from my side."the kid cutely replied.
"WTH----"

The kid was already laughing running to save his life but before sharon could follow him she noticed someone standing near the door, a smirk plastered on the person's face.

Sharon was stunned.The last person who should have known about her fears was standing in front of her.Fate! she hoped he hadn't seen her lost in his dreamland.The amount of embarrassment and awkwardness this could lead to! More so she did not want to ruin their first date by unnecessary shyness.

Swayam silently made his way to the fire and seated himself beside sharon. He quietly opened his bag and started searching for something.Here sharon was feeling more irritated by every passing second and giving swayam quizzical looks along with a few death glares.
Swayam finally extracted a square wrapped gift and before sharon had a chance to pounce on him said with a grin "Nah, its not for u.Any gift cannot justify this day and besides i remember my stupid promise of not gifting you anything.This is for my partner in crime.I do have a right to spoil him.Tell him i said i love u more."

The words made Sharon's heart skip a beat.Could someone be really so thoughtful?The kid had already accepted swayam and swayam knew that he need not woo the kid still Swayam cared..cared about a boy who was abandoned by his parents... Swayam will never miss a chance to surprise her. She shifted her attention to swayam and noticed his clothes..trousers and a hoodie..so he chose casuals for the evening just like her.

"Ahem, shar you do realize you are zoning people out too much today. yes your boyfriend is handsome but its rude to check out someone so openly" swayam replied with a smirk.

"Dream on bf. And you should be the one realizing that you are late?"
"Oho gf . Being late would be like a predictable boyfriend,which i am not.YOU were the one too lost to notice me standing on your terrace."
Sharon sighed in defeat.She knew swayam being late was unlikely and anyways she wasn't really too observant this evening.She decided it was best to change the topic.

"Mr eavesdropping unpredictable bf I wasn't dreaming.I was simply wondering how can someone so diet conscious like you love drinking chocolate milkshake. Here you go with your drink btw."Sharon said handing him over a glass. Swayam gladly accepted it, muttering something in his defense like a child does when he is caught sneaking chocolates..sharon giggled.This boy could change from a mature and philosophical person to a kid in a second.No wonder my bro loves him... and so do i..she added as an afterthought.
"What are u drinking anyways?same old coffee i suppose"Swayam stated.
"Yes i am. At least its better than the kid's drink" sharon replied instinctively.
Swayam smiled internally..sharon was trying to challenge him and distract him by it.Well bring it on baby..Out loud he said" This ain't kid's stuff sharu. It is way better than that bitter simply undrinkable liquid."
"Oh please.You can't compare the two.You seriously need to change your taste"
"Now do i?My taste is you and m not changing it"Swayam said noticing how her lips curved slightly to form a ghost of a smile.
"Ahan loverboy, trying to be mushy to change the topic? Don't worry i wont be challenging you to drink coffee as i know u would not to able to Shekhawat."Sharon replied,not ready to give up to his antics so easily.
"Miss Raiprakash..Challenge accepted.Now you will be drinking this."He quickly exchanged their drinks not giving sharon a chance to oppose.Sharon's plan had back-fired. She could not back off now.She will have to give up her coffee and drink the 'milk' instead.
With their heads held high, both of them took a sip.They gulped and looking at the other's disgust-filled expressions and broke into fits of laughter.

"Yuck! this was as bitter as i thought"swayam exclaimed.
"And this was as sickeningly sweet as i thought."
They both smiled at each other, realizing that they were opposites..Yet so similar in nature.

Sharon shifted her position and rested her head on swayam's shoulder.Her fears were forgotten now.This was swayam after all..how could she think about being uncomfortable in his presence ever. Swayam put his hands around her bringing her close and pulling a quilt over them.He was feeling elated knowing the fact that it was so easy being in her company.None of them had to be fake.They could be their real selves.

The clock stuck 12 and a pair of cell phones blared pehla nasha instrumental.On the screens flashed a reminder which read "Christmas"
Sharon looked intently in swayam's eyes.Her eyes reflecting the conflict going on her mind.She knew she will have to take the initiative. Swayam wold never risk her comfort. Closing the distance between their lips she kissed him for a moment before returning back to her position in his arms.This was good enough for both of them for the moment.They let silence engulf them, cherishing their closeness and enjoying the other's presence. Their souls feeling content and peaceful after long.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N- HONEST reviews please people.

A writer,I ain't. Yet this randomness has been penned for one special person. KSHITIJA aka krtzy di. Finally your b'day gift.Call it 6 months late or half a year early. :P Miss u a lot di.🤗

Next Anandita ( it feels so odd to type your full name:P) Yeah,i know this was solely written for di..but its posted only because of u.Thanks..for everything <3

-Love Veronica


Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 11 years ago
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Reserved for the one this is dedicated to and all other special people who read this before it was posted.Thanks a lot😳

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Sanskriti di

well kisine mujhse kaha tha that she cant write

It doesn't seems like ur first attempt. Do write more on Swaron
Beautiful👏
The kid n Sharon's bond was amazing. The way he teased her for date.
well penned Sharon's nervousness n embarrassment on seeing Swayam saw her lost in his dreamland.
Their cute talks😳
Perfect ending



Nidhi

yay me first

i love posting first for some reason i dont know

firstly
you deserve a round of applause
this os is beautiful

coming to the os
1) its your imagination
and it is very good
2) i loved the kid
calling sharon as "tai"
was something very touching.
he was someone we can relate with
3) swaron's chemistry and bond was very well described
and yes sharon's nervousness was very well portrayed.
4) the convo's, all of them had reliability in them,
the descriptions also were well specified
i did not have any trouble trying to imagine
the location and the setting.
5) the kiss was written maturely.

but you know what i loved the most
it was that romance element which you filled
in this story
everyone of us has a silent wish to have a bf like
swayam and a cute brother like the kid
a romantic set up was the cherry on the the cake.

hope to see more of your works
and write more
the os actually quenched my thirst for a
happy swaron

yours sincerly
nidhi.
Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
amazingg piece really good stuff
an exceptional debut if tis is ur first os
coming to ur os
it was beautiful n compelling 😳
luved the portion where her brother was teasing sharon
about the first date n the kiss 😉
their bond was very well penned
coming to the date sharon's embarrassment n shyness
her feelings towards the first date was beautifully penned
the date in itself was bewitching ☺️
a warm kiss in the end was a perfect way to end tis ecstatic story
also thr first date happened on a christmas eve was a really cute thought
all in all a very romantic n pleasing read
do write more 🤗



Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES

Unres

Wow Girl!!!
That was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G 👏
I'm highly impressed with your writing skills and you say you ain't a writer
Nah! Now you are surely one 😉
If randomness has an outcome like this then I would say you should be random quiet often as then we will get to read something beautiful like this 😃
Coming to the OS, well well well!
I loved the way you penned down Sharon's thoughts and inhibitions
The cute moments between Swayam-Sharon was 👍🏼
Sharon and the kids bond and also Swayam sharing a good bond with him was an 'awww' moment 😳
And then the cute little kids naughtiness was like a cherry on the cake 😉
Well Done Veronica!!
This was truly a beautiful piece from you!
I'll be looking forward to read more from you for sure 😃


Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww...
first date on Christmas eve
romantic
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a amazing sweet and superb os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jerry u wrote os 😲 😲
Am i dreaming or is dis for real. .

Un res. .

I still can't believe u wrote dis jerry. .
Tu toh chupi rustam nikli yaar. .
It was so so beautiful n amazing. .
U use to tell me u can't write n u never played story building with us too. .
But ur a writer yaar. .
Who ever made u write dis os thanks a ton to dat person. .
I so loved it. .
It was brilliantly penned. .
D kid was so cute n naughty loved his bond with sharon..
Swaron moments were very well written. .
Over all it was an amazing os. .
Din look like dis one was ur first. .
Keep writing more
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved vero..😊.
Unreserved
Whoaaa vero this is your first attempt at writing and you say it came out randomly wow really you're written the entire write up so so so beautifully.. I had a smile gracing my lips throughout the read..😊.
I liked the kiddo and Sharon's bond and even more likeable was how he adressed Sharon as Tai.. I really loved it when he would do that..❤️.
Sharon's irritation on hearing him call tai and inspite of knowing she is irritated by it he would yet again adress her by tai quite a naughty but a very adorable and sensible kiddo..😊.
I liked their entire convo before Swayam came in.. Then Swayam's thoughtfulness to get something for the kid to make him happy touched my heart..
Then the standard romantic mushy lines by Swayam again melted my heart..😊.
The coffee and milkshake exchange was funny to read..😆.
The ending of your Os spread over calm and serenity and I liked it.. The kiss in the end and Swayam and Sharon in one quilt was something that I loved so kudos to you and your writing skills vero..❤️.
Ohkkk I agree kaafi lamba analysis ho gaya don't kill me for it though..😆.
Love,
Kashmi.🤗
Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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veru...!! meri cuppycake angel shona surabhi devila nd princess..!! 🥳
i knew it..!!! i knew it ki mein bolungi toh tu definetly meri baat manegi..!!!
thankuu so much for considering my words..!! and posting it..!!😳

love you bahut bahut bahut zydaada...!! itta ki mein khud nai jaanti ..and pari ko bhi utta hi..!!<3

baaki batein hum umm...secretly karte hai..😉

love,
anandita


Edited by Princess_anny - 11 years ago

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