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Posted: 10 years ago
perfect situation for current scenario, you can continue, it always a treat to read RaYa stupid but lovable fights, continue ASAP 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom

Very nice OS, continue soon.


Thanks so much...
Will continue soon...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely
Ram's anger, possessiveness are clearly shown. loved this scene.
please post the next part soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi friends, 
Here I present the another scene of the OS , This scene of OS will element of fun and laughter in it...it too contains the romance without words. But again I've written it in one go and didn't read it myself so sorry for all spelling and grammatical mistakes.
Hope you all enjoy reading and give your views on same.
Thank you πŸ˜ƒ    

Scene - 2

Ram is seeing the tv and changing channels when he stopped on sony channel while seeing a promo of a show 'Bhoot Aaya' suddenly an idea clicks to his mind.


At night priya is setting her couch to sleep when enters in room and sees her doing her task...he smiles wickedly to himself and goes and sit on bed and switch on the tv, resuming the channel on sony when the horror show is coming on it. Priya settles on her couch with a book...opening the book she starts her reading while ram glance at her one more time and put the volume high so it will catch priya's attention;  As he thought, priya looks at tv only to lower her head instantly and hide it behind the book , she ascends the duvet on her little more to hide herself ...she got scared looking at a ghost while some horror music is playing in background , but she try to not show it on her face as ram will notice it as she tries to behave normal and look calm, but Mr. Husband knows his wife very well and he clearly remembered their honeymoon when he scared her only to take a cute lovely  revenge from his wife as she complains to her mother about him being out at night while she is all alone in room and watching a horror movie or show and getting scared. This past memory of their honeymoon brought sheepish smile on his face as he looks at his love lovingly hiding under her duvet; he understood she is scared at that moment. Making his face straight and normal he continues to watch tv as if he is so engrossed in it while he puts the volume more high to get her attention towards it once more , she did exactly what he wants...she looks at tv and get scared once more , she wants to requests him to change the channel or to switch it off while her precipitation draws on her forehead , but seeing her husband tranquilly watching tv and not noticing her scared condition , she just hold herself and decide not to ask him to change the channel or switch off tv. She tries to concentrate on her book but the volume and the eerie background music is grabbing her attention again and again making her every try fail to concentrate on book. Ram notices priya as she is trying hard to not to be scared...he smiles wickedly to himself and stood up to walk towards changing room to have a change while leaving priya alone in room with that horror show. As he is in changing room she looks at tv by ascending her face little bit up from the comforter once more with eerie face as she gulps some air. Ram enjoying the reactions of priya inside the changing room while steeling glances at her from there. She first thinks to switch off tv herself but then thinks that he opened it then why should she puts it off. She pulls the blanket on her some more to hide her face and not to look at tv again. Ram comes in room after having change and sees priya's condition...because of sacredness she has hide herself inside the duvet, smiles appears on his handsome lips seeing her cuteness  but then at heart he feels bad to make her scare...then again he smiles mischievously thinking as how he will win this battle of love. He moves towards bed takes the remote and switch off the tv then takes his pillow and duvet and draws himself on floor pertaining as to sleep but while grinning inside his heart, but when taking the remote from bed to make tv off he picked up his mobile also,  unnoticing to priya.

 

Not hearing the horrified sounds any more she lowers the duvet little down from her face to notice that Ram has switched off the tv. She breaths out in relief and smiles faintly as now tv is off. Priya comfortably sleeps in bed to sleep after keeping her book aside on table and switching off all the lights. Only dim lights and moon light is adorning the room.

 

It's mid night when ram lowers his duvet from his face little bit to see as if she in sleep...he smiles looking at her wickedly and then makes himself ready for playing his another trick. He holds his mobile very quietly in his left hand under the duvet and then plays eerie sounds once again, since priya is in sleep , sounds have gone unnoticed but then he raised the volume of the mobile ,  after some time priya's sleep broke because of the unwanted noises , to notice from these sounds are coming she lazily opens her eyes and when she heard the sounds clearly she gets horrified once again. She gulps first and then looks at Ram only to notice he is sleeping calmly, nervously she looks at window whose doors are waving slightly due to winds blowing outside , curtains are also swaying inside the room as winds are making them dance.  Beads of precipitation once again forms on her beautiful face , Ram has put his eyes closed so that priya should not come to know his mischievousness. He makes the sound stop in between and priya breaths the sigh of relief but again he plays another eerie sound , priya startled to it and swiftly run to ram, she kneels down and called Ram many times ...

 

Priya (kneeling down while horror written on her beautiful face, in stammering afraid voice   ) : Mr. Ka...kapoor...Mr. kappoo...rr...Mr. ka..kappoo...rr...

 

He was singing the romantic melody in his heart as priya came running to him but then he suddenly controls his heart who is beating on high speed with joy and still pretend to be asleep.

 

He again plays the creepy sound making sure priya doesn't come to know that he is doing that stuff. This time she startled some more as a result she holds his right arm with her both hands tightly. This time she shudders him while calling him out. Ram gets up from sleep a little, facing her while rubbing his eyes with his right palm and making an innocent concern face asked her what happened and why she is out from her sleep at this hour. 

 

Ram ( pretending to be worried and making a concern tone while rejoicing at heart) : Priya kiya hua ...tum abhi tak soi nahi...what happened.

 

Priya ( anxiously she faces him while her forehead is covered with beads of sweat, in afraid tone while stammering ) : Mr. Kaaapppooorrr...woh mujhe ...woh mujhe ...ajeeb ajeeb si awaajein sunayi de rahi hain...

 

He again plays the creepy sound but this time in low volume while he is enjoying in his heart but also feeling bad as he is making her scared.

 

As he again plays the sound priya again gets scared and makes her grip with her both palms more tight on his left arm while seeing around to know from where the sound is coming. Ram dance in his heart at she tightens her grip on him , he controls his joy and hold her right arm very lightly in concerned state with his right hand.

 

Ram ( making his face as sleepy and innocent who don't know anything happing around , In sleepy concerned voice ) : Konsi awwajen priya...(he looks around as pretending to listen the sounds that are disturbing her then faces her again) : Konsi awaajen priya...mujhe toh koi awwaj nahi aa rahi...

 

Priya gets more scared after listening this from ram that only she is hearing the noises and same is not heard by Ram. Some more beads of sweat forms on her forehead and seeing her scared face ram feels bad in his heart and decide to stop his cute torturing here only, as he moves his left hand under the duvet which is holding the mobile, some eerie sound again plays and this time without Ram's consent. Priya gets really scared by this and hides herself into Ram's embrace enveloping him as tight as she could. This time Ram is also get startled as he wants to stop the plan here only but by mistake sound has played once more but he thanked his this mistake as priya cuddles to him hiding her face into his macho chest.


He holds her in his arms in concern and caresses her hairs and asks her to calm down...after some time he makes her to face him; he looks into her eyes to see her beautiful eyes now covered with pure water, seeing her in this state he feels guilty in his heart. He embraces her once more into his strong arms without speaking a word.

 

After a pause...


Priya ( she looks into his handsome eyes with her lubricated red eyes and anxious face , In her lovely low tone ) : Mujhe darr lag raha hai...

 

As she said this he envelops her once more into his audacious chest as he caressed her back and head to make her calm...


Ram( in concern voice with his pure love in his heart for her and making her calm ) : Priya relax...kuch nahi hua hai...relax...main hoon naa...


He stood up with her in same position as enveloping her into him and then scoops her in his strong arms while both stares deeply in each other's eyes with all their love, he comes to bed and make her lie on it and steps back to go ...


 Priya ( Still scared but has been clam little by his action , she holds his palm with her as he looks at her and she looks deeply in his eyes with requesting) : Please Mr. Kapoor kahin mat jaayie ...mujhe darr lag raha hai...


Ram ( he bends down on her while looking deeply in her lovely eyes filled with pure water and in concern voice,  making her calm by caressing her cheeks by his left palm) : Priya ...main kahin nahi jaa raha ...tum please relax karo...main abhi hum dono ke liye banket lekar ata hoon...


Ram goes to take the blanket from the floor and comes to bed and covers priya with duvet properly while he comes to another side of the bed and slips himself beside her , she sees his all actions and as he slips besides her, her heart calms down as he is with her, he covers himself with same duvet , he leans over her while they both deeply swim into each other's eyes while he caresses her face and head assuring her that he is with her always and in every moment.


She cuddles to him while he takes her into his warm embrace tightly with all his love. Without any words further they drifted to peaceful sleep under duvet into each other's embrace.    


Note :  It's just a scene which I have thought and placed it in this write up. Hope You guys have enjoyed reading it.πŸ˜ƒ 

    

 

 

 

 

                         

 

Edited by devmohan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
 one word amazing

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yaaar kahan se lekar agaye ye idea

it reminded me of honeymoon days cv kuch siko is forum ki writer logon se yaar how wonderful they are than u people πŸ‘

omg it was just awesome yaar


u made my day with this sceneπŸ‘ write more

loved it each and everything well described no mistakes yaarπŸ‘ perfect scene felt like seeing balh reading it

wowww lovely idea and concept continue more πŸ‘
loved raya hug and how to shift raya back to bedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ ye naughty ram hamein bade hi achhe lagte hainπŸ˜‰
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Lol divorce - marraige marraige - divorce..jst too gudd..superb starting as always :D


Thanks so much...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
loved it
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
read 2 parts in one go, fantastic OS
part 1
fight scene was awesome, also dialogue 
part 2 
what an idea yaar, it reminded me of their honeymoon
looking frwd d nxt,pls continue soon,thx 4 PM
Edited by Dsudipa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

so swt update uyaar 

and plz make it ss/ff 
dont stop this here 
thank u for ur pm 


Thanks a lot for liking it...
Your welcomeπŸ˜ƒ
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Thank you so much for the pm