Aashiqui..The Eternal Love.. completed pg 42 - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx for a VERY long& sweet update...
Etf team rocked...
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Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Bapree..kyya dhasu comments miley... Samara92 a wo dialog.. CHANDI ROOP!!😆...
SABKO BADE WALE THANK U!!!

"Eeehh.. wwoo...liza... lets go now...baad me baat karte hai!!😆",Sameer said nervously as he saw his Bumpy looking at her questioningly with a whacko expression..
She was always unpredictable... her emotions never matched with her actual meal cooking up inside her..
"Shree...rawte..chalo...",he nearly ordered and tried to run away😆😆...
"Sammy...",she softly said and got up from the floor..😳.."Ey..hato please..",she kind of pushed aside shree who was standing on her way..in front of her Sammy..
Unexpected as she was...she looked at him keenly an shocking everyone to the core she unbuttoned the 1st 2 buttons of his shirt..(CONTROL LADIES!!...AND LADAS TOO😆)..
"Hey...kya kar rahi ho??",sameer's face flushed and he tried to get off her hands from his clothes...
She sobbingly fiddled for something inside his shirt while he tried to stop her from making him more embarrassed..that too in front of so many people...😳..
"Kaddu...",she muttered after seeing the BFF locket and hugged him...
"Bumpy..",he placed his chin on her head.."kini badi ho gayi ho.."
"Aur ab mai moti bhi nahi hu!!",she pouted...while he smiled at her stupid talk..but immediately his smile changed to a frown when she remarked.."par tum aab bhi Kaddu hi ho!! Tubelight...wo bhi..Fuse wala!!😕"
Shree looked at Arjun..who himself was confused at whatever was happening...But amongst the people..There was someone who was finally happy to see the girl meeting her best friend...
"Ye sab kya ho raha hai??aur ye sir ko Kaddu kyu bol rahi hai!!",Liza seemed still confused...😕
"Hey... chodo ab.. meri team mujhe aise dekh rahi hai jaise mujhe maar hi dalenge,,, tum thodi der rest karo AISHA... abhi to kabhi bhi mil sakte hai nah...mujhe paperwork bhi karna hai...so mai chalta hu,,,,Uncle... sambhal liyo apni jhansi ki raani ko!!...",he smiled and parted from her.."bye.."

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"Kaddu kaun hai?? aur Bumpy?? Sam..will you tell us ye kya tha??",Arjun asked!!
" Uff bas karo!! aise innterrogation kar rahe ho jaise mai koi criminal hu!!.. okay... mai kehta tha na... bas lagta hai ke...iise koi rishta hai mera... iske liye concern..apne aap hi a jata tha...yuki ye meri Bumpy hai.. aur mai isey tab se janta hu jabse ye 2 ghante ki thi.. sath khele hai...bachpan se...aur adhe se zyada time to mai iske hi ghar pe hota tha./...breakfast time pe jata tha...aur agle din breakfast karke laut ta tha... she is my best friend...aur ha...ab jitni shikayat karn hai maa se...kar lena... i am so sure ke use zyada koi khush nahi hoga Aisha ko dekh ke..unka tohb bas chale to mujhe ghar se nikal ke Bumpy ko hi apne paas rakh le..oh god..kitna badal gayi hai...oh...ab samajh aya.. wohi tevar,,,wohi ego...gussa...aur...wohi masoom si aakhein...",Sameer stopped when he saw Arjun totally shocked..
"Rawte...please...ab bas karo!!"
"Ye teri girlfriend toh nahi hai na??",Arjun asked..
"Rawte... yaha 2 aur log bhi hai..kuch soch samajh ke bolo!!"
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Posted: 11 years ago

me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Ishi... itne chote update se mera gujara nahi hota...want more...😭😭😭
So right...No one can predict what is actually cooking in her mind...
Haaawww she pushed Shree...🤣🤣🤣 ...LoL poor Shree...
Haila...yeh Aisha ne toh chief ko solid wala embrace kar diya...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
.."kini badi ho gayi ho.."
"Aur ab mai moti bhi nahi hu!!",she pouted...while he smiled at her stupid talk..but immediately his smile changed to a frown when she remarked.."par tum aab bhi Kaddu hi ho!! Tubelight...wo bhi..Fuse wala!!😕"...Loved it...yeh dono kabhi nahi badalenge...🤣🤣🤣
ETF team interrogating their chief...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
"Ye teri girlfriend toh nahi hai na??",Arjun asked..
"Rawte... yaha 2 aur log bhi hai..kuch soch samajh ke bolo!!"
...Nahi Arjun abhi toh nahi hai...par bohat jald hone wali hai...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally the best friends have met❤️
beautiful👍🏼
continue soon😊
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She lied on the pillow..hugging her teddy...finally finding solace...finding him..her..her Kaddu..
She smiled on remembering how he used to follow her...protect her..drool on her...and calmly explain her to quit her addiction...and how she used to answer her back...but suddenly that smile changed to a blush when she recalled how he had hugged her...consoled her..made her eat...rest...just like he used to do when they were toddlers..
Tears rounded the corner of her eyes when she recalled how he had supported her when...
*********A FINAL FLASHBACK...MAYBE...QUITE EMOTIONAL...AS AN ANSWER TO SNEHA DI'S QUESTION LONG BACK..************

They were in the same school...having fun...playing... when a school staff came up to the 10 year old Aisha and 13 year old Sameer telling them that Sam's papa was there to take them both back home...Aisha was super excited as she would be with he Mumma and papa ..who had gone to Pune for some work and so Aisha was staying at Sam's place for 2 days...and she would get chutkara from Kaddu😆😆
Sameer was a bit curious...why would they call us back home.. school khatm hone me bas 2 ghanta hi to hai..!!
As they reached the gate...Aisha left his hands and ran upto her uncle...He picked her up and put her inside the car..kissing her forehead..and giving her a chocolate..."Mimi... ek baat bolu??"
"Kya??",she said licking the chocolate in her hand..
"Aap na.. mera brave bachcha ho... whatever comes in life..ap usey bravely face karoge...okay??"he said caressing her hair,,
Sameer sensed that something was terribly wrong...but one look at her smiling face..he decided to ask about it later...just praying that everything is fine..
"Uncle..hum ghar kyu ja rahe hai?? Mumma paa a gaye kya??",she asked excitedly..
"Ha beta...chalo..",he said after parking the car in front of the hospital...
"Hum..yaha kyu aye papa??",Sameer asked...
"Andar chalo...",he said and picked Aisha and walked in asking him to follow..
There were so many people in the corridor...Aisha was directly taken inside the ICU... where her mom lay wrapped in bandages and surrounded by machines and wires...
She forwarded her hand and Aisha went to her..
"Mumma...ye sab..kya??..",she had nearly started crying,...seeing so much blood and wires...
"Mimi...tum akeli nahi ho ok... bilkul mat rona...aur..aur.. apna khayal rakhna... (forwards her hand to Sameer who went there scared)..apni..bumpuy ko..kqabhi akela mat chodna...i love you mimi..",and there was a stillness in the room...Some people cried...but she stood numb..Sameer quickly wiped his tears..and turned to her...he gently held her hands..and she fainted,..
[NOTE- sorry samajh nai aya story me kaha dalu... isliye..writer's note... Her parents were coming back from Pune...and they met with an accident ...and they got injured.. that's why her dad was unable to walk...and her mom..well..i cant say...i mean...you all must have understood]

She was taken to Sameer's home... but as many times she got up..she asked for her mumma only...she refused to talk..she refused to eat...All she needed was..her mumma only...
But Sameer knew... that nothing could be changed now... so he took up the responsibility..he would feed her..put her to sleep...and do whatever was needed explaining her...
As she grew..she understood that her mumma will never come back..but she had to look after her dad...So she changed... she built a strong ice wall around herself.. becoming totally self centred...but still she was unable to take the unbearable separation..
Later her uncle and aunt took her away to Delhi in order to keep her away from all this...
One wrong company... and she started doing all those stuff which no one had ever imagined,,, drinks...drugs,,,returning late night...violence if anyone dared to stop her..
The police had caught her in a rave party...but they did not punish her...since unintentionally she ended up helping them..so she was appointed as an undercover agent..with a fake identity of Nadiya..
And then...her meeting the man..who drooled on her...followed her.. finally she..landing up to work with him...
***********HUH!! FINALLY OVER,,...ONLY D FLASHBACK**********

She wiped her tear...and got up sobbing...panting...she fisted her hand...bit her lips...no...she cant do it now... no..!!
She got up..and quickly changing her dress she walked off outside...being careful not to wake anyone up..
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A little later...
"Oh shit!! ye mimi kidhar gayi???...suniye...uthiye,.. mimi ghar pe nahi hai..",her aunty panicked..
"Nahi hai matlab??..thik se.."
"Maine dekh lia...ap..ETF ko phone kijiye,,,"
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"Uff...finally done!!",shree exclaimed looking at the stack of papers,,
**PHONE RINGS**
"Hello..ACP SAameer Rathod here...(pause)...kyaa?? nahi hai matlab??..ok...ok..mai abhi dekhta hu!!...uf ye ladki to meri jaan lekar hi rahegi!!"
"Kya hua??!!",liza asked startled..
"Mimi..matlab Aisha..matlab..nadiya..wo ghar se missing hai!!..kya karu mai is ladki ka!!??",He said and nearly rushed,.
He knew where to find her at this hour!!
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WHOA!! NO RAESHA?? DISAPPOINTED?? DON'T BE GUYS!!...LINE KAT GAYI!! SORRY😭
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res... vll comment in morning...waise i read the update & me first again...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Edited by 123pritha - 11 years ago
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so sad.. aisha lost her mother..😭
thats y the separation...
nice update👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay..line a gayi..isse pehle ke wapas chali jaye.. likh deti hu..

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He hated that place...specially the loud music.. the dark laser lighted ambience.. an specially those nauseated youngsters gagging around!!😡...
He pushed aside some..dodged through some... and there she was!!
"Oh god!! iske ghar pe kapre nahi hai kya!! ye kya pehen rakha hai!!😡",he muttered to himself when he saw her in a shiny top and shorts!!😡..that too with a full bottle in her hand!!..
"Phir se shuru ho gayi ye!! "
He straightaway went to the counter and glared at the man at the counter nearly telling him not to give her one more shot or else he would shoot him!!
"Bumpy...what the hell... ghar chalo!!",he said in an authorative tone!!
"Kaddu...u..r..(pecks his cheek and hugs him)...ssshhhooo ssshhhwweettt...(pinches his nose😆)..tum..ab bhi utna hi protective ho na...",she said in a fully talli way...an directly slumped on him...dozing off..
"Arrgghh...!!! ab kaha le jau isey..(picks her up)...uff.. figure slim ho gaya..par bhari kitni hai...mera hath......", he paid at the counter and took her away...
No..there was no way he could drop her at home..in this condition... Uncle will definitely not like to see her like this..he thought...no..he couldn't take her to his home too.. his mom would blast him off...not because he was taking in a drunken girl... but because BUMPY was in this state...and he could do nothing!!!😕
He drove mindlessly...not knowing what to do... then suddenly he thought of something...he took a U-Turn...and stopped the car by the side...He called up at her place and informed them that she was safe with him...and he would drop her home the next day because it was very late..He called up his mom and told that he would return the next day because of work...(obviously...jhoot to bolna hi padega na!!).. He started the car again and directly went to the farm house...thanking God that he always had a duplicate of the keys with him..
He headed inside and stopped the car at the gate...got down..unlocked the door... then came back and picked her up...stumbled a few times and finally pushed open the door to his room and made her lie on the bed...
Her dress actually made him feel awkward ...so he quickly pulled out a quilt from the cupboard and tucked her in that..
She mumbled something in her dreams..and held his finger..
He smiled at that.."bilkul nahi badli..😳..paagal..",he lovingly caressed her forehead...and she slept again...He saw the dry tear marks...and kissed them...He slowly left her to sleep and shifted to another room...(TRUE GENTLEMAN!!😳)

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He went to the balcony and sat on the railing... How everything had changed within a second...
She was with him...finally...that innocent baby of his,,,with that naughty glint in eyes still intact...
He closed his eyes...capturing all moments...
It was around 2 am when he realised that he was sleeping near the balcony...and he heard the door click open..
"Kaddu...kaha ho?? see.. i am..new...and..i am...scared... kaddu..",her miffled sobs woke him up totally and he smacked himself...how could he forget to put te night lamp on dammit!! she is scared of darkness!!😡
He quickly ran and hugged her,,, "sorry sorry...i am so sorry.. ruko...",he left her and turned on the light...and went back o him.."ole mela bachcha ...sorry...",he made her sit on the bed...
"Tum..mujhe akele chod ke aa gaye...aur..aur..light bhi bandh kar dia... tum..kitne...gande ho!!",she hit him on his shoulder ...and wept..
"Oh bachcha... bhul gaya... sorry,,..acha chalo... lie down...aur so jao...mai wo light bandh nahi karunga...khush??"
"Mujhe..bhook lagi hai!! khana do!!",she demanded and then he realised that she hadn't eaten anything except the sandwich in the whole day!!
"Par...abhi..kaise??",he said looking at the watch..
"Order karwao...khud to tum banane se rahe,,,"
He quickly ordered some food from a 24*7 cafe nearby and it was there...
She ate like a hungry dog...and within no time all the food on her plate was over..
She took the plates and kept them in the sink and washed her hands and mouth..
He looked at her crazy antics admiringly...
And she flashed a smile and went to the room running,,,
"Hey...bumpy... muh poch lo...",he ran behind her with the tissue..
Aisha giggled and showed him her tongue and ran...and hid herself..
"Bumpy...mai tumhe dhund lunga...",he said...and stealthily entered..and directly went to the curtain and removed it...That was the only place she knew as a hideout since childhood..She giggled and he wiped her wet mouth with the tissue..
Her giggles ceased when she noticed Sameer looking at her admiringly...He crushed the tissue as his gaze fell on her pink lips..he threw the paper somewhere and locked her between his arms pinning her to the wall..
"Sam..",she said softly... as his lips descended on hers..
She clutched his shoulder tightly as he pulled her closer into his embrace...
He parted once and immediately kissed her deeply on her neck...making her moan..."Sam...ye kkya...kar.."
"I love you bumpy... and..i missed you so much...i need you...i just..need you..please marry me...",That was his reply...
She smiled.."i..love you too...and...yes...",before she could open her eyes...she felt herself landing on the bed...and he was beside her...close to her...
"Kaddu...i am so sorry for misbehaving...",she said crying..
"Hey..its ok...ek baat batao...Nadiya ki identity kyu?"
"Mai undercover kaam karti thi na... so it was just a safety measure..in case kisi ko mere bare pata chal jata...i wanted my family to be safe...commissioner sir ko pata tha..."
"Hmm...Bumpy... meri ek baat manogi?"
"Kya?"
"Chod do is addiction ko!! you are killing yourself..."
"I wont promise... but i will try..."
He leaned again pecking her lips once more...soon that peck turned into a passionate kiss..
As the kiss deepened her hold on him tightened while his hands tugged inside her top..He stopped for once realising what they were doing...but one bite from her...and he gave in...very soon his fingers fumbled with her buttons and his hands roamed over her delicate form earning gasps and moans from her...
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ONE MORE..OR 2 MORE PARTS...!!!
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL!!!!!😳
LOVE YOU GUYS!!

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