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Posted: 10 years ago
here comes the next part of the story, hope you all will enjoy reading it


credit to original writer : Dhristi Kapadia



PART 2



After 8 years...


Priya has become a teacher n has won the best teacher award..its a great achievement as at young age..she loves her children like a crazy n is planning to get nuts n kartik married...


Nuts is persuaing mba with kartik in the same university...kartik along with mba has joined his brothers in business...


Kartik-hi priya di aaj apko anna hai main kuch nahi sununga...as it was his bday today n he had come to invite priya n nuts...after so much perusation priya agreed...


Priya-ok kartik main aaungi bus kush...


Kartik-di i ll be picking u both at 6:30pm n gave a lovely hug to nuts n priya n left frm there...


Priya-pagal kahin ka after wards priya n nuts both laughed n then later got ready for party...


Exactly at 6:30pm kartik came in audi to pick them up n after then they all headed towards his house...


After 20mins they reached km n they entered in the house...


Kartik-neha bhabhi meet priya di n he introduce priya to neha...


Neha-hi priya i m neha kartik bhabhi n vikram wife maine tumhere baare mein suna tha kartik se tum utni hi sundhar ho...


Priya-thank u (while blushing)


Kartik-di aur yeh hai mere bade bhai vikram bhai aur ram bhai...priya turned n saw a pair of brown eyes staring at her...


Ram-hi i m ram...ram kapoor he extended his hand towards priya...


Priya-hi i m priya sharma plz to meet u...


Kartik-aur priya di yeh hai meri ma krishna kapoor...priya bent down n touch her feet...


Kk-khush raho beta aur sada sukhi raho...


Kartik-lets dance di...


Priya-kyun tum natasha ko chor kar mere saath dance karoge..(teasing him)


Kartik-di main toh yun hi puch raha tha i knw u will ask me to dance with nuts...


Priya-badmaash kahin ka n pull his ears...


Kartik-sorry di n took nuts to dance floor...


While dancing nuts watched her di as she was talking happily with the kapoor member...


Nuts-kartik kya di ko kabhi khushi mil paayegi jiski wo hakdaar hain...


Kartik-kyun nahi nuts jo log acche hote hai unke saath bhi achha hi hota hai...achha hua rajat ki sachie phele pata chalgayi warna...


Nuts-kartik bahot dance ho gaya chalo ab kuch kha lete hai...


Vik-aare nuts u never said u have a elder sis...


Nuts-woh bhai i never got chance coz who school mein bahot busy rehete hai unhe waqt hi nahi milta...woh toh kartik ne force kiya isliye...


Neha watched nuts n kartik,ram-priya n vikram were heading toward dinner...


neha-maa kitna accha hoga na agar ram priya se shadi karle toh...mujhe ek company bhi mil jiyegi...


Kk-neha beta tumne mere maan ki baat keh di par ram shadi ke naam sunte hi bhaag jata hai...


Neha-maa mere pass ek idea hai jisse ram ye shadi se mana nahi karega...


Kk-phir teek hai neha...


Then scene shift towards the dining table where all were having dinner...nuts n priya were chatting with them n having fun...


While eating ram spoon fall down n priya n ram both bent down to pick the spoon their hand touched...


they looked into each other eyes n their hands were entangled...


Vik-kya hua ram n ram left priyas hand...


ram-woh spoon gir gayega tha...


Then all finish their dinner n nuts-priya bids bye to kapoors...n ram n kartik were told to drop priya n nuts home...


Ram-(thinking) she is so beautiful...


Priya(thinking)- kuch toh tha ram ki eyes main i kept looking at him...


After dropping them home ram-kartik reached home when ram saw tension in his house...


Ram-kya hua vikram-neha sab teek toh hai na...


Neha-ram maa is nt well after hearing this he ram straight to kk room...


He went to her maa room n saw doctor checking his mom...


Doc-ram she has got a mild bp attck bt nw she fine...


After sum tym kk open her eyes n saw ram sitting near him n holding her hand...


Kk-ram mera ek kaam karogye.


Ram-haan maa bolo...


Kk-ram main chati hoon tum priya se shadi kar lo..bahut pyaari ladki hai aur tum meri yeh iicha puri karega na...




Wat ll be ram answer keep guessing????




Edited by jineejiggs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
good starting raya first meet was nice continue
and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start, Raya's 1st meet was superb,pls continue soon,thx 4 PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

its a big jhatka for ram 😛
awesome update..cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..
Ram-Priya's first meet was good..
 Neha ka plan nd bomb for Ram..😆
Thanx for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
jo aap chahe wahi hoga ram ki answer😆... thanks for pm 😛very nice update👏...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
thanks 4 pm and please update soon
waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hope he agresss and showers his love on priyaaa
waiting eagerly nowww for next update