Jeevan Saathi, a SS on RaYa, updated on page 42 - Page 3

jineejiggs

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Posted: 10 years ago

a short preview is here, hope you all will enjoy

Kartik-di aur yeh hai mere bade bhai vikram bhai aur ram bhai...priya
turned n saw a pair of brown eyes staring at her...

Ram-hi i m ram...ram kapoor he extended his hand towards priya...

Priya-hi i m priya sharma plz to meet u...

Kartik-aur priya di yeh hai meri ma krishna kapoor...priya bent down n
touch her feet...

Kk-khush raho beta aur sada sukhi raho...

Kartik-lets dance di...

Priya-kyun tum natasha ko chor kar mere saath dance karoge..(teasing him)

Kartik-di main toh yun hi puch raha tha i knw u will ask me to dance
with nuts...

Priya-badmaash kahin ka n pull his ears...

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sushfiza

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Posted: 10 years ago

lovely character sketch...cont soon...

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sushfiza

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice preview...priya n karthik bonding is very good..cont soon

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

very nice continue

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

awww really nice Preview will surly gonna enjoy next yaar jaldi post karo..

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Ira_PM

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Posted: 10 years ago

sounds very mega interesting ;) please continue soon

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thanikachalam

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Posted: 10 years ago

preview was good

hope you will make it more elaborate like your other stories even though this one is not yours

update soon please

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 10 years ago

here comes the second preview, hope you will enjoy reading this

Vik-aare nuts u never said u have a elder sis...

Nuts-woh bhai i never got chance coz who school mein bahot busy rehete hai unhe waqt hi nahi milta...woh toh kartik ne force kiya isliye...

Neha watched nuts n kartik,ram-priya n vikram were heading toward dinner...

neha-maa kitna accha hoga na agar ram priya se shadi karle toh...mujhe ek company bhi mil jiyegi...

Kk-neha beta tumne mere maan ki baat keh di par ram shadi ke naam
sunte hi bhaag jata hai...

Vik-kya hua ram n ram left priyas hand...

ram-woh spoon gir gayega tha...

Then all finish their dinner n nuts-priya bids bye to kapoors...n ram
n kartik were told to drop priya n nuts home...

Ram-(thinking) she is so beautiful...

Priya(thinking)- kuch toh tha ram ki eyes main i kept looking at him...

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sushfiza

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice preview...cont soon

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contactcharu

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice preview... pls update soon...

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