Originally posted by: rampriya7aug
mkl ... iht thread 3 me total kitane parts hai
well I haven't planned it yet let's see all I can say is that its not going to end soon, meri iss SS ko thoda aurl bear karna parega aap sab ko
Originally posted by: rampriya7aug
mkl ... iht thread 3 me total kitane parts hai
Very sweet update. ๐
Progression of the story is handled very well. You have described Priyas' relationship with each member so well. Love it... small conversations with each member gives a complete picture of this story.. Lovely. ๐ ๐
Loved that you have kept Priya still strong and determined to win her husbands love and his heart... Awesome. ๐๐๐
Yes.. for a second,,wanted to bash Ram Kapoor but then again.. i am hoping things will change for better so will hold off my RB mode.. ๐ ๐ ๐
Last Balcony scene was cute, touching and may be a little sad. As a reader. felt bad for Priya that he does not care.. Again.. very well written. ๐๐๐
Loved it
Touching ๐ญ
and i take not wanting to bash Ram back from my last update..๐
he is SO MEAN. What the fork. Implying Priya is used to travel by bus?
Why is the man forgetting that Priya said yes to marrying him for his family's happiness. He is SO rude.. cant even be normal and polite? More punches from me to him
Haha.. ok. now that i have punched him HARD...back to comment.
Loved it how Priya handled the situation and her plan to ignore him. ๐
You have described Priya's time with Sudhir and Shipra so well.
As always.. smile to my face as a reader when you write about Priya and Mithi. Such a beautiful relationship. Bond they share is so heart warming and you write their conversation so well
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Thank You
Ram - Priya main uss din tumhe hurt nahi karna chata tha, I was actually concerned for my sister and you, main nahi chahta tha ki tum dono bus se travel karo, am sorry
Priya - maine pehele hi aapko kahan tha ki aapko sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hain aur aage se plz mere liye concern hone ki zaarorat nahi hain, I can handle myself.
Ram was trying to patch up but Priya wasn't even bothered, now Ram made Priya face him and said, of course I am concerned about you, meri biwi ho tum, you are my responsibility, agar tumhe kuch ho jayega toh...
Ram - tum kyun aisa soch rahi ho?
Priya - jo sach hain main bas wahi kahan hain
Ram - yeh sach nahi hain aur yeh tum bhi janti ho aur main bhi
Priya - main sirf yeh janti hoon ki humari shaadi sirf ek compromise shaadi hain bas aur kuch nahi, na hamare beech koi rishta hain aur nahi kabhi hoga
Ram - yeh sach hain ke hamari shaadi compromise ki hain lekin yeh bhi sach hain ki tum meri dost ho
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