omg very intense indeed...beautifully written prologue...showing strong grip of urs writing skill...
hmmm so he is the father but he denies...but offcourse who else can know whose the father of
child more than a mother herself...mr arrogant aggressive and rude raizada...in pain khushi saying
the father of my child is already dead...great going khushi...awesome
deepu...misunderstanding...confusion...ruthlessness ...same night if he remembers those
hurtful 45 sec.. he also drilled her whole night ...damn very very interesting ...
thought provoking : "His once Her"...
loved the prologue
Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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