T#2 Vishwas Tootne Ka dard.Epilogue-pg58. *completed*

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Well...

Opening the 2nd Thread of my SS on Ariya...

   ''Vishwas Tootne Ka Dard''...

I didnt expect that this story of mine will get so many comments and views.

Hope you will like it even more.

Index in Thread-2.

Ch10-pg2
Ch11-pg9
teaser for ch12-pg12
ch12-pg14
ch13-pg18
ch14-pg24
ch15-pg30
ch16-pg35
teaser for ch17-pg40.
Ch17-pg41
ch18-pg46
ch19: pg50
note: pg51
ch20-pg55
epilogue-pg58
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Index:

Link to Thread-1:
 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3574641Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago
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conga  new thred zebbie
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Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Congratulation! dear

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Originally posted by: unishaz

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Ch10.

Next Day:

Bannerjee House was decorated like a new bride...Every corner was glittering with lights and was decorated with flower garlands.There was hustle and bustle going on inside the house.


Dida and Mashimaa were looking after the food arrangements,while,Subroto and Ashwin helped in the last minute hall decorations.Shubh and Rudra was asked to look after the security arrangements,while,Dida asked Riya and Sara to help Antara to get her ready.

After re-checking every single thing,all of them went to their respective rooms for getting ready.

In the evening:

Guests started to come.Subroto and Dida welcomed them.Waiters were serving snacks and soft drinks.Rohit and DIG Mama were talking with the guests.After a while,Panditji asked Mashimaa to call the expecting mother.Mashimaa signalled Riya and Sara to bring Antara down.

After 5 minutes,a married woman played the conch shell while the other married women did the ''Ulu'' sound,when Antara was coming down the stairs with Riya and Sara.As she came down,she was taken towards the dais,where the Godh Bharai rituals will take place.


[Imagine her as Antara: 

As the Panditji performed the Aarti,he signalled Dida of Rohit to start the ritual.As Dida applied the tilak and placed some gifts on her aanchal,she whispered blessings for Antara and Rohit's baby in her ears.This was followed by Mashimaa and DIG Mama,Sara and Ashwin and other guests... Everyone presented her gifts and blessed her and her unborn baby.

Finally,it was Riya's turn. Riya applied the tilak and placed a handful of rice,a coconut and some sarees and a two pairs of white and red bangles on Antara's aanchal.Riya went near Antara and whispered something in her ears,which made Antara blush...

''Boudi,Maa Durga aapko aur aapke hone wale bacche ko humesha khush aur salamat rakkhe... Love you,Boudi...'' Riya said to Antara...

Antara's eyes filled with tears.She took Riya in a hug and said, ''Mere liye iss parivaar ki khushiyaan aur teri khushiyaan se zyada kuch bhi nahi hai... Tu khush rahe,toh,main bhi khush rahungi... Sadaa khush rehna,meri bacchi...''

Riya smirked lightly and said, ''Meri khushi toh kabki mujhse cheen chuki hai... Ab khush hone se bhi dar lagta hai,Boudi... Lekin,aap sab keliye khush rehti hu... Aaplogo ki khushi mein meri khushi hai...(wipes her tears)... Anyways, Godh Bharai ki function hai aur nachna gaana nahi??? Yeh kya baat hui???? (running towards Sara,Ashwin,Shubh,Rudra and Subroto) Chalo,kuch dhol baja hojaye???''

Ashwin played the music,while Rohit and Mashimaa helped Antara to sit on a sofa... All the others took their places to enjoy the programme...

Ashwin,Sara,Subroto,Rudra and Shubh danced,sometimes together,sometimes giving solo performances... They also dragged Rohit in their dance.Rohit also danced.

Now,it was Riya's turn.

BG Music:

Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn (x2)



As she was dancing,Rohit and Antara looked at their Riya,who was dancing after so many years.Rohit's eyes brimmed with tears to see his babu enjoying after so many years.A smile crept up his lips.

Sara also joined Riya in the dance.

Re khat-khat haan khat-khat
Baaje dastak woh na ab tak aaya
Re tab se haan tab se 
Haan dekhe raahein
Ki ab tu khol baahein aaja
Umad-ghumad ghumein
Re machle re mora mann
Goonje re baalam ke bol

Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn

Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn..."



As the music still goes on,Arjun,Sameer,Ankita,Shree and Chotu enters.Rohit sees them and greets them and brings them inside..They greet Dida,DIG Mama and Mashimaa... They also greet Arjun,Sameer,Ankita and the others back.

Leeli lemdi re
Leelo nagarvel no chhod
Parbhu parodh na re
Maar gher uttaara karta jaao
Utaaro nahi karun re
Maar gher Sita juve vaat
Sita ekla re
Juve ram-lakhman ni vaat



Arjun's MV: ''Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki Riya yahin kahin hai? Uski payal ki khanak mujhe sunayi derahi hai... Kya Riya hai yahaan pe?''

As Arjun was lost in his thoughts,a girl was twirling so much,that she collided with her.Arjun caught her by her waist...

''Sorry,main aapko nahi dekhi...''

Arjun raised his eyebrows and to his shock,he saw Riya in his arms...

Riya was also shocked to see Arjun after 3 long years,that too in Antara's Godh Bharai Rasam...She was shocked so much that she thought,she saw a ghost... She fluttered her eye lashes to confirm it...

Rohit and Anatara were not shocked,because,they knew what was gonna happen next.

As Riya was still in Arjun's arms,they had a eye lock.Through the eye-lock,they conversed with each other.Tears of happiness brimmed in Arjun's eyes,same with Riya... Riya,lost in his spell,raised her finger to wipe his tears,when,the music stopped and both of them came out of their trance.

Riya pushed Arjun away and said, ''Leave me alone...''

Saying this,she ran away and went upstairs,only to be followed by Sara...

As Riya went upstairs,she went to her room and locked herself up.Sara banged the door and requested her to open it.But,Riya didnt open the door.

TBC...
Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago
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wow
beautiful update
love it
cont soon
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 congrats for the new thread...😊

so riya met arjun ... both were happy but... 

waiting for arjun's action and her reaction ... 

loved riya - baudi convo...

update soon
Edited by nakshatra92 - 10 years ago