OS: Daddies' day in with their kids (completed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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''Baba...''

''Papa..''

''Baba..''

''Papa..''

Continuous rantings of the kids were making three men run behind them... The three men looked tired and it felt like they would collapse any moment...

Such was the scene at Aradhana,a big house built by the joint contributions of Arjun,Rathod and Shree... It was a dream home to everyone... Every single person is attached to them...

''Oye,Shera... Tu hai ek supercop,jiske naame sunne se criminals ki band bajti hai... Aur yahaan ka mauhal dekhtehi mujhe andaza hai ki teri yahaan pe kitni band bajti hai... Bhagwan se yeh hi prarthna hai ki mujhe itni jaldi bacche na de...'' Karan sighs and prays to Bhagwan.

''Oye,hello... Abhi toh hum dono pe has raha hai... Jab Simmi tere bacche ko janam degi aur raat bhar teko jaagke rehna hoga,tab samjhega... Haaye,meri kamar...'' Sameer says in a sad tone...

''Baba,mudey tokolate thhek tahiye...taldi lao...'' Ayaan,Arjun's 1 and 1/2 year old son said...

''Eh leh,Shera... Tera bulava agaya... Mere Ayaan shera keliye chocolate shake hazir kar... Har baar aisa mouka thori na milta hai teko ghar mein kaam karte dekh... Hahahaha...'' Karan laughed..

''Has beta aur zyada has... Jab teri baari aayegi,tab dekhliyo...'' Arjun glared at Karan and left for making Ayaan's chocolate shake...

''Sam,tu coffee piyega?''

''Haan yaar... Ek coffee pilade.. Shubh ke piche bhagte bhagte meri halat kharab hogayi hai... Mujhe dekhke kaun bolega ki main ETF chief hu... Damn It..'' Sameer said,in an irritated tone...

Suddenly,Shubh started crying very loudly...

''Phirse... Nahi...'' Sameer said in an irritated tone...

Sameer went to Shubh and tried to calm him down by patting his back,but,nothing was working...

''Shakal se ETF chief hai tu,par,akal nahi hai... Parenting class le tu,Sameer yaara... Shubh ko bhook lagi hai... Uske bag mein dekh.. Aayesha bhabiji ne zarur feeding bottle mein milk banake rakkha hoga... Dekh... Shubh ko mujhe de aur bag mein bottle search kar...'' Karan said.

Sameer glared at Karan and started searching for the feeder in Shubh's bag,while,Karan tried to calm Shubh down.. After a while,Sameer found the feeder and gave it to Karan and Karan made Shubh drink the milk from the feeder.. Sameer looked at Karan,who calmed down Shubh,so easily... Meanwhile,Arjun brought two cups of coffee,his cutting chai and Ayaan's choco shake... Arjun makes Ayaan wear his baby napkin around the neck and gives him the glass of choco shake,while he gives Sameer his coffee mug..

After a while,Shubh slept and Karan made him lie down in the kids' bedroom,keeping the door slightly ajar...

''ETF chief ka beta hai.. Equally ziddi hai... Bhagwaan na kare tere jaisa gussail na nikle...'' Karan said,while sipping his coffee...

''Chal,thora aaram karte hai,warna,agle second bulava ayega ki meko potty karni hai,meko ninni arahi hai,meko bhookie lagi hai... Hey Bappa.. Mala madat kara... Yeh Shan do baccho ko kaise sambhalti hai? Mujhse nahi sambhalte bacche...'' Arjun said.

Next Moment,they hear Ayaan wailing loudly to catch their attention...

''Baba,Baba... Potty..'' Ayaan said,making a pout and closing the nostrils of his nose,indicating that Ayaan did his potty...

Arjun hid his face with palms and sighed in defeat.. ''Chalo,Ayaan.. Tumhe clean karta hu... Bhagwaan,bachao mujhe..''

''Jun,aap itne se hi irritate horahe ho? Pata nahi,aage kya dekhne ko milega? Laiye,Ayaan ko mujhe dijiye.. Aap dusre kamre mein fresh hojaiye... Aashu darling,can you please make three cups of strong black coffee,please?''

Arjun turned around to see his beautiful wife,Shanaya,with Ayesha and Simran,who went to shopping along with visiting the Doctor.. Simran was 5 months pregnant,so,Shanaya,took her daughter,Pari along with Aayesha with Simran... Shanaya took Ayaan in her lap and went towards the kids' bedroom,where she saw Shubh sleeping peacefully. She kept Ayaan on the bed and changed his nappy,nicely and cleaned him,while,Aayesha served Simran and Shan their coffee...

''Mera baccha cleanie cleanie hogaya... Ab mera baccha ninni ninni karega,phir,main,Shubh bhaiya,Pari di,Aashu maasi,Papa,Shree chachu,Liza maasi,Karan chachu aur Sim maasi ke saath khelenge,thik hai?'' Shan said,while she talked with her son Ayaan,who was giggling...

''Aai..'' Ayaan said.

''Main idhar hu,baccha... Chalo,hum ninni ninni karte hai..''

After a while,Ayaan also fell asleep,along with Pari,who was hell tired... Meanwhile,Shanaya and Aayesha freshened up and changed their clothes and joined their husbands'.

This was their everyday routine.. As the kids' slept,all of them would come and join each other for a cup of tea with the random discussions of case and etc...


The End...

P.s: Sorry,Shaanu doll..could'nt make it upto ur expectations.. Wrote in a hurry... But,next time,will write a much better one...
Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsummm Re Zee..loved it!!! 😆😆😆 Sam Bhai...😆 Bechare!!! Is situation me bhi Damnit!! 😆 Jun!!!!! Sacchi itne se pareshaan ho gaye..🤣🤣🤣 Ab samajh aaya ki bacche handle karna is not easy!!! 😆 Awww..Mere Ayaan nd Pari!!! Mere nd Jun ke angels!!!! ❤️❤️ Nd shubh bhi shooo cute!! Chalo..Sim too pregnant!! 😊 loved Karan's Dialouges!!!! VRy cute os! Nd no worries..I understand!! Thankk u fr keeping my rqst!! :)Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Phew... Done with this os...
Sorry,shaanu doll... Could'nt write upto ur expectations.. Wrote it in a hurry.. Hope u understand.
Please do comment and let me know ur views
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome and mind blowing os zebbie dear.
Just loved it.
Bechare samjun and shree.
They are doing baby sitting.
Loved karan dialog on samjun.
Sam is situation main bhi damit bolna nahi chodega.
So the fathers are hell tired.
So sasha kasim and arjun shanaya are married.
And simi is 5months pregnant.
Lovely os dear.
Just loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesum os zoobi..it ws soo cute! loved karan ke dialogues! Aww..bechare sam n arjun 😆 It ws amazing!