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awesome update
loved astha and shlok fights
so astha jealous of swathi
continue soon
thanks for the pm
loved astha and shlok fights
so astha jealous of swathi
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: shahbhavini
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Part 6:
Shlok entered along with Aastha into Agnihotri mansion... Swathi jumped and hugged him at the door with excitement evident in her voice, "Hey Shlok...!!!"
Aastha stood aside with wide eyes burning with jealousy... If she will get a chance, swati will be out of Mansion with broken legs and arms... Aastha jaw touched floor looking them hugging... She wanted to part them with force and stand between them... She snapped out of her illusion seeing Swati dragging him with her... Swati ignored her completely after wishing her a simple hi'... Swati cannot see anyone after and through Shlok...
Everyone comfy their seats in huge living room with their gift packets wrapped in colorful covers... Aastha guessed the person gifted them those attractive surprises... She cursed under her jaw, "Aagayi sabko gift dekhe apne jaal mein phasane ke liye... Chudail kahiki..."
Aastha has no issues with Swati... Aastha spends time with her and treat her good... Everything disappears in a moment when she turns everyone's head towards her... She hates hearing her name before her name in her family... She can share everything with her but not her family's love... She hate that moment of preferences given to her... She hate when Swati tries to compete with her... She knows that in few minutes her indirect competition is going to start...
She jerked from her own world hearing Sojal, "Aastha, iddar aao waha kya kar rahi ho..." Aastha faked a smile; went and sat with Sojal...
"Swati, Uncle aur Aunty nahi aaye...???" Aastha questioned to implat her presence before her...
"Pappa ko kuch kaam aagaya tha issi liye chale gaye... Mehendi ki function se pehle aajayenge..."
Swati was back to unpack her baggage of gifts... Her eyes didn't leave to observe Swati and Shlok... Shlok didn't miss her wary nature... It is really hard to succumb his laughter observing her changing expressions...
Swati handed a box wrapped in red shining cover to Shlok... Shlok added oil to fire, "Wow... Kya hai iss mein...??? Jo bhi ho, tu ne diya toh iss mein kuch accha hi hoga..."
Aastha stood up with close-set eyes, "Mein sabb ke liye sharbat baana ke aati hoon..."
"Tum rehne do Aastha, mei bana leti hoon..." Swati volunteered..
Aastha managed to present a smile muttering, "Pata tha, jo karne jaati hoon ussi kaam ke peeche pad jati hai..."
"Kuch kaha tumne...???" Swati questioned...
"Kuch nahi... It's ok...Mein banake leke aati hoon..."
"Lilliput tu rehne de... Swati ko bana ne de... Bahot din hogayi uss ki haath ki sharbat peeye hui..." Swati smiled and left to bring Sharbat...
"Uss ki haath ki sharbat se kaunsa special flavor hoga ... huh..." She sat back thinking to herself...
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"Abhay, mein aaj nahi mil sakti... tujhe pata hai na ghar mein shaadi ki tayariya ho rahe hai aur kal Mehandi ki function hai... Bahot saara kaam hoga... mein sab chodke nahi aa sakti hoon..." Jyothi is trying to explain adamant boy-friend who wants to meet her right now... She tried all ways but failed to convince him, "Teekhe mein kuch sochti hoon..."
"Kya hua hai tayi...??" Aastha's unacknowledged voice made her stiff...
She is shocked to see Aastha there... She didn't stop praying god to keep her secret as secret... She doesn't want any mishap before her brother's wedding...
"Kuch nahi, mein Abh.. Abhilasha se baat kar rahi thi.. uski ek jaani pechani si mehendi wali hai... usne kaha ki kal ki Mehani function ke liye chahe toh usse bhulalegi..." Jyothi took deep breathe with a thought of management... Jyothi left from there leaving suspicious Aastha still... Aastha felt something fishy going in Jyothi's life... She has a gut feeling of uninvietable problem into her family...
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Aastha was pulled with a jerk while crossing Shlok's room... Aastha's sudden quake in her body shook her from head to toe... That sudden surprise pull landed her in Shlok's room in-front of him... Shlok lost himself gazing at her tigtly shuttered eyes; innocent and soft face... Aastha slowly opened her eyes and saw Shlok standing there lost out of present...
She smacked his hand bringing him back to present, "Shlok, dara diya tu ne..."
Shlok jerking back, "Dar ne ki kya baat hai, humari ghar hi toh hai... Mere alawa kaun tujhe tang karega..."
"Aaa.. abb behas matt kar, kya kehna hai jaldi kaho...???" Aastha stood crossing her hands...
Shlok witnessed new Aastha today... Aastha was always jealous of Swati and ready to poke her head in any work where Swati is involved to prove herself... But today her jealous is beyond preference and proving of herself... Her hidden anger on him is no more hidden from him... She always fought with him, but what is that anger which she is not letting out on him... Is she angry on him because of his closeness with Swati..?? Is she angry because of his ignorance towards her from the time Swati stepped in..?? Is she angry for his preference..??
Shlok snapped out of thoughts looking at waiting Aastha, "Problem kya hai...?? Jab se Swati aayi hai, tab se teri mood karab hai..."
"Isse pata chal gaya...!!! Mujhe toh laga ki Swati mein itna khogaya ki, Aastha naam ki insaan ko hi bhulgaya..." She exclaimed in her thoughts... She answered sternly, "Mujhe Kya hona hai...???"
"Meri saamne natak matt kar..." He took a pause seeing her eyes rolling here and there, avoiding eye contact, "Yeh bata problem kya hai...???"
She looked down finding answer... As answer struck she raised her head and looked into his deep intense eyes, "Mein humare shaadi ke bare mein soch rahi thi... humne decide hi nahi kiya ki, shaadi ko rokhne ke liye hum karne kya waale hai..."
He stared at her for few seconds, "Jhoot bolna bhi nahi aata hai... Teekhe yeh bata, tum mujhse gussa kyun ho...???"
She looked down at floor muttered to herself, "Gussa...!!! Yeh Shlok Agnihotri, Antharyami Agnihotri kab banngaya hai..." She avoided eye contact, "Agar gussa hota toh, tujh pe kab ka nikal deti... Tujh pe gussa kyun chupungi..." She realized her words...
She always fought every moment and went out her rage on him... What is that stopping her today...??? Why is she not fighting with him on this..?? Answer is with in her, she wants him to find out reason by himself and say her sorry for ignoring her...
Happiness sprinkled her heart realizing hi care and finding out her crazy anger on him... But anger didn't leave her as he didn't come out with sorry in their togetherness of 23 long years, she expects him to understand her through eyes and simple sighs... They may fight with one another 24x7; care and understanding quietient never reduced to 99.9 from 100... Before being Cousins, they are fighting friends; who fought with each other and fought for one another...
"Wahi pooch raha tha... Agar gussa ho toh abhi mujh pe chilla ke nikal do, chupane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..." He said...
"Hogaya tera bakwas..." They heard Swati calling Shlok... She bursted her sarcasam, "Jao... Jao... Bhula rahi hai Swati... uske alawa toh koi dikta hi nahi... huh..." She walked out...
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