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Originally posted by: lpsakshi
intrstng dear thnks for pm me
Originally posted by: sandhyasn
nice story
Priya ar kya guzar raha hai I understand. aaj naye naye rishte mein bandhne jaa rahi thi aur kismat ne Priya ke saat bahut bada Mazak kiya. Ram Priya ke liye ek life ke roop mein aaya hai.Priya itne jaldi se ram ko accept nahi karne wali but yakin hai ki jald who iss dard se bahat aayegi.good OS..please continue and thanks for PM
Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Lovely concept...
Nicely described...
Grt bonding between two families...
Poor priya hrtbreaking situation for her 😭 ...feel like crying ...
Bt one thing i didnt get that hw the elders can take such descision..that too they know very well priya loves deep..after such a hrtbreaking news they r going give her another shock of her life ...they should understand what time she is going trough...
Loved ur writing...thanks fr pm..cont soon
A very brilliant write up...!!
Prfctly blnded...!!!
Contn soon...
Thnx fr the pm...
Originally posted by: vironikajain
Nice concept..
Beautifully described..
Bonding btw members of both the family is very good..
Felt bad for Priya..very tough time for her nd everyone..emotional part nd very well penned down..one can feel pain while reading..
After this shock..I think elders should give her some time..its not easy for her as she loves Deep..situation is already very difficult nd now this marriage proposal she will totally break..
But its elders decision so...hope Ram handles her..nd with his friendship nd family's love she comes out of it soon..and both falls in love with each other..
Interesting..
Thanx for pm..
Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Lo ji yeh dadi hamesha mauke pe chauka maar hi deti hai ;) ...nice concept..now waitting for next :)
Part 1
i just loved this concept its way to gud... i know its similer to Rab ne bana di jodi movie but no doubt its awesome for sure... i loved also one thing RaYa never thought abt each other as Bro-Sis realtion yani yeh sab pehle se hi tay tha in destiny ek din yeh ek honge... i know ab Dadi the rockstar RaYa ki saadi karwa k hi rahengi koi unhe nahi rok sakta she is the best... par kaise kab hogi yeh dekhna baki hai so post next soon waiting...
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