RaYa - OS - tum dena saath mera, updated on page 63 - Page 2

Lovely concept...
Nicely described...
Grt bonding between two families...
Poor priya hrtbreaking situation for her 😭 ...feel like crying ...
Bt one thing i didnt get that hw the elders can take such descision..that too they know very well priya loves deep..after such a hrtbreaking news they r going give her another shock of her life ...they should understand what time she is going trough...
Loved ur writing...thanks fr pm..cont soon

A very brilliant write up...!!

Prfctly blnded...!!!

Contn soon...
Thnx fr the pm...

Nice concept..
Beautifully described..
Bonding btw members of both the family is very good..
Felt bad for Priya..very tough time for her nd everyone..emotional part nd very well penned down..one can feel pain while reading..
After this shock..I think elders should give her some time..its not easy for her as she loves Deep..situation is already very difficult nd now this marriage proposal she will totally break..
But its elders decision so...hope Ram handles her..nd with his friendship nd family's love she comes out of it soon..and both falls in love with each other..
Interesting..
Thanx for pm..Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago

Lo ji yeh dadi hamesha mauke pe chauka maar hi deti hai ;) ...nice concept..now waitting for next :)

Part 1
i just loved this concept its way to gud... i know its similer to Rab ne bana di jodi movie but no doubt its awesome for sure... i loved also one thing RaYa never thought abt each other as Bro-Sis realtion yani yeh sab pehle se hi tay tha in destiny ek din yeh ek honge... i know ab Dadi the rockstar RaYa ki saadi karwa k hi rahengi koi unhe nahi rok sakta she is the best... par kaise kab hogi yeh dekhna baki hai so post next soon waiting...

Thanks for the PM

Awesome story.😃..really love the different situations you bring in for the story of Ram and Priya😊...keep it up didi..👏👏👏👏...thanks for PM...😳😳...hats off to your love for the two characters Ram and Priya..👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

nice start we r waiting to see ram consoling priya aur RAYA love story continue soon

thank tou for the pm😊

Oh wow u back with an OS...Was waiting for it...I loved the start...Liked Priyas rapo with Rams family and Ram...Hmmm so Priyas first love is no more...Waiting eagerly to know what will b her and Rams reaction to their marriage...I think she will agree for dadi...Lrts see whats in store for the next part...Do update soon dear...Thanks for the PM...😊