Originally posted by: Shruti21
i am so glad finally i am here and the first post itlsef says i will definately few things over here..thank you for writing and sharing your story over here..
Originally posted by: Shruti21
-oh you started with a very impressive n simple line..loved it..ππΌ
aman and anjali are married?? i so wanted this to happen in show..
description of khushi right?? beautifully written..oh my god, i don't have words to say over this...that was the first hug of arshi which we craved since ages..
oh hell how i missed this- why i missed this..this chapter reminded me of IPK every single word took me to old memories.. you have cleverly used few parts of IPK and wrote this brilliant piece... i am super happy after reading this chapter.. loved it very much...π
Hey greenteaholic, thats a nice picture of Edward Cullen on your display pic π
Lavanya.. I like OS-es from her perspective. Maybe because she is so real with all her flaws, not above envy or a bit of selfishness. Nice..
Originally posted by: mimosa658
Wow...I see some piece of genius done here...π...
Simply superb and impressive...where were you and why didn't I see you earlier...Reading the story in your words literally makes this STAR-CROSSED...and yes to say something about this story is beyond my vocabulary limitations... I can only wonder...π
The thing about love is that in the throes of its deepest trench, you cannot but imagine that is where you belong. But the truth is there is no real concept of belonging - there is compatibility and a lot of hard work but larger than that is an inexplicable bond between some people. That is what exists between Arnav and Khushi and that is what keeps that shimmering mirage between Arnav and Lavanya.
Strangely, the only track that sort of came close to being done well on the show was Lavanya's transformation and eventual exit - graceful and heartbreaking. Who would've thought it was the same woman you wanted to slap in the first few episodes.As always you write thoughts with much desired poignance - and yet there humourous helplessness lacing it all. Beautiful.
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