Romi so sorry for the late comment dear Actually have been on n offline for a while now. Welcome back 🤗 I donno y u criticise ur writing so much 🤔 I have always noticed sincerity in ur writing n I mean it Well am no one to say stop bad mouthing ur updates when I always do that with mine 😆 But I do mean every word of what I say - u r good 😊 Like u said the plot maybe cliched but lets face it - all of us, be it ff writers, or even authors get inspiration from some or the other story thats already been told. I suppose all my works for that matter have been inspired by movies I have seen or stories I have read. So its perfectly all right.
Coming to the TS, I loved Pia's POV 👏 Was written very well. Her awkwardness, her trust issues, and I could understand the fact why chose an anonymous identity in social networking. She is those nerdy types and ususally ppl around her will label her to be the boring kind who consider social networking a waste of time. But they forget that even the nerdy folks like to blend in like the rest of them. I liked the way Abhiya met for the first time 😳 It was defo dreamy and Pia recognised Abhay but Abhay didn't since he didn't know her real identity and neither had he seen her face. Abhay's conflicting emotions were told very well from Pia's POV. Abhay had already started having feelings for this online friend of his and on the other he was meeting this girl who seemed to be a lot like her n he couldn't help but fall for her n then he felt he was cheating on the unknown stranger whom he had first lost his heart to. So I can understand why he had gone numb when Pia had revealed the truth to him. But then I am sure he would have realised that his heart could never fail him for Piyu and Piya were the same 😳 And what is this? 😲 Abhay met with an accident n died? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Ye kya kiya? 😭 But I will wait to know for the next update to get my answers 😊
Lovely TS Romi 😃 Do update soon and hey I am still waiting for Fateful Night and Broken Paradise 😛 When will u update ma'am? 😉
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