Originally posted by: piaviviandsena
finally chipkali u decided to write? and u dis time u stick to ur decision?! nice. vry nice.
Originally posted by: piaviviandsena
about d update it was nice! thax fr pm.
wowww u r back ... welcome :)
nyc update
why abhay is after piya ? luks like a trap for piya
plsss soon cont ur other works
Originally posted by: cute.girl97
Welcome back.. I'm still confused what abhay has to do with pia.. Looking forward for more updates
Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Awsomee Renu..waiting for next🤗
You know what u r freaking awesome!! This is really one of mu best birthday gift this is all I can say!! I luv ur writings and this story is amazing aur upar se a whole update just for me so u can really understand my excitement level lol 🤣 Thank u sooo muchhh sweets!!!
Wow this story is somewhat inspired from ur dreams which u have modified & made it more mysterious but still i must say your sub-conscious mind is highly imaginative too!!
I am feeling super excited & really enthusiastic now. My mind is still trapped in ur story & I am still trying to figure out the mystery lol.
Coming to the story now... The storyline is definately gripping & mysterious. Piya looks like a simple ordinary next door girl like u & me but Abhay's identity is something confusing & secretive types. I doubt if he is a human being or something else 😕 why he is following piya & what he exactly wants is still a mystery & I guess we need to wait till the last chapter for the mystery too disclose. Kabir is a detective here. Hmm this is something new & innovative for his character. Piya is a ordinary looking, quite simple human being with no extraordinary look which is again something new & more realistic for her character. I liked the way u tried to potray one's inner beauty & innocence over artificial beauty! She has a beautiful heart which is her real asset & I guess Abhay Raichand had discovered it 😉.
Maya is again a mysterious character here. I doubt why she is here. And my most fav character in this story is of Abhay's ofcourse. Strong, dark & mysterious as always. Though one can connect to Piya's character more but Abhay's character is such that can hold anyone's attention.
The way u have potrayed each & every emotion, feeling & Perceptiveness of Abhay just through the little sneek-peeks are amazing! Piya's as well as kabir's thoughts & feeling were explained really well. I enjoyed reading all the parts and now I can't wait for the next update. I swear if u don't update this one asap I will actually start bugging u. 😉
And thank u sooo muchh for this beautiful birthday gift dear! I wasn't expecting this much but u know I m sooo happyyy!! I seriously loved loved loved it!! Brilliant work!! Both ur creativeness & writing skills have made this SS a unique one & I am honoured to be a reason for u to update this one!! Now update next part asap!! U rock!!
And really very sorry for this delayed comment. U know the reasons so plz don't mind! Aur ha I have no complaints coz the gift was really worth of the long wait! I really can't thank u enough! Love u yar 🤗!
Keep smiling & update soon pleash [:p]
And like button isn't working so pm me for the next chp too!!!
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