OS - A new beginning - Page 3

Originally posted by: ever_smily

Hi Vironika,

Thank you. Yes, one of my biggest complaint about BALH is that they don't show the true emotions of all characters, most of the characters (Dadi, KK, Rishab, Sowmya and now NeVik too) are just used as props to fill the screen space,

About the emotions, it came automatically once I started writing.. I guess, I feel so strongly for RaYa, it just comes out.

And writing this OS made me connect with the charcters more strongly.

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Exactly no consistency in any char nd they use them as mere props these days..
We all feel same..its great u have vent out ur frustration like this nd we re still cribbing..

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

This is so beautiful😊

u penned down each thing very nicely.

I like where Ram still treat Naina as his daughter.

Raya scene is superb. specially the last one.

 

Originally posted by: simlavidhi

Awesome... Hope something like that happen on Monday.
Keep writing...very good os.

Originally posted by: ever_smily

Thanks Sandhya, glad you liked it, please do give some pointers on how I can improve

Originally posted by: ever_smily

Thanks Simlavidhi. We all hope the same. Having another concept in mind, but you guys might hit me if I write it.

About a presumed meeting between Ram &  few months  after Ram marries Juhi & Priya wakes up. It will be an emotional roller coster, with Ram as a broken, dejected man and Priya holding it together for the sake of family & kids. I will narrate both their emotions, but mostly from Priya's POV.  No others are directly involved in the story. S, what do you think of this concept?

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Please write it. concept is great and even I thought somebody will write on it.

Originally posted by: ever_smily

Thanks Simlavidhi. We all hope the same. Having another concept in mind, but you guys might hit me if I write it.

About a presumed meeting between Ram & Priya few months  after Ram marries Juhi & Priya wakes up. It will be an emotional roller coster, with Ram as a broken, dejected man and Priya holding it together for the sake of family & kids. I will narrate both their emotions, but mostly from Priya's POV.  No others are directly involved in the story. S, what do you think of this concept?