*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 21

wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: salooni
so villians are in action
lovely
loved how both are fuming in anger
wonderful mystery part
and at last so many to suspect
one victim in there hand
other in delhi
wow
many things in one instance
loved it 😃

Thanks for liking! Mystery will unfold in the next update once I begin writing it! 😃

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Andi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: wiwy

Arnav made you cry😡 Rakshas kahin ka!
Poor dear. Don't you worry. Sab theek ho jayega.😃

but in sab ke piche toh app hai na😡

i know sab theekh ho jayega app ho na plz jaldi theekh karo nd updt do na di bohot time ho gaya

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851453

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: wiwy

😆 I PMd you! 🤗

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 5:27pm
CC: sigrid, supriya.arshi, chalhov, samin6, cinthiann1758, indi52, sohara, Katelyn, Arshidiehardfan, ArshiHamesha, BarunDiwani, IssPKaur, salooni, DurgaS

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hadiqua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

ohk i completely hate u for the cliff hanger...but i love u for the update..its lovely...update soon andthnx for the pm😳

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Ee ka howat hai, Wiwy ji? Mamaji ka bakri ki dhaal ma bhediya hai? (wolf in sheep's clothing) You are making Mamaji an interesting character.

Aww, Arnav thinks he can forget Khushi by patching up with La. But still he wants someone near her who can keep giving her news to him. His brain has gone bonkers.

Uff these love birds. One faints taking his name and the other jumps up from his sleep taking her name. Jao Arnav bitwa, Khushi needs you or rather you need her.

So, Shyam seems to be the likely culprit behind the kidnapping. But, why do I feel that it is someone else? Hmm... inbhestigation kareka padi.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

khushi kidnapped.

oh no.

this is getting most interesting. and what is this manorama shyam la whatever whoever conspiracy. he thinks he can mange this emotion he has for khushi... good for him. no harm trying, but allow me to guffaw loudly.

i didn't like that dirty hand on khushi. i do hope mr raizada will do something about it... in a way the owner of the hand will never forget. ever.

thanks, wiwy. lovely update.

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SIMI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

ohh...no...Arnav thoda apne akal lagao aur Khushi ko bwapas le aao

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sindhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

wow simply amazing update...

loved it...

thanks for the pm...

so khushi is jealous of arnav going with lavanya and she is trying to make him jealous...

wow simply awesome...

who did kidnap khushi now?

am eagerly waiting for the update...

pls continue soon and pls pm me the update...

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: rulama
So La is trying to be back with Arnav with the help of Mamiji!
Khushi is kidnapped! Arnav senses something amiss!
Loved the update.

Thanks for liking the update! 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow what an update!

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😃 Thanks. I am so happy you liked.

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