OS. Jealous? Who? Me?

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OS. JEALOUS? WHO? ME?

Requested by honeybees22

 

 

 

    Hi guys! Kalpana, the writer is back! With another one shot! Now I know that you guys are rolling your eyes and thinking Phir se aagayi! Kitna likhti hai yeh ladki!' But kya karoon? A very sweet reviewer had requested me to write a Jealous Raghu! Agar itne pyaar se koi bolega toh main try to kar hi sakti hun, right? This one shot is dedicated to honeybees22 who requested for it. It is based 6 months after Rantara marriage and Raghu works at Machmach garage. Please read it, enjoy it and review it!

 

 

      Raghu huffed as he noticed Antara taking out clothes for the day. Their marriage was only 6 months old now and till now Raghu had never noticed Antara wear a Saree. She wore a nau-vaari saree for her first mangala gauri pooja and their wedding too but she never wore sarees in day today life. Today, as he sat on the bed watching her ruffle through her clothes he decided to take some action. He got up from the bed and hugged her from behind. She stopped whatever she was doing and smiled shyly. Their marriage was still new enough that she still smiled shyly when ever he did anything romantic. He turned her slowly and looked at her face, "Ae Antara!" "Hmmm...", Antara hummed as she kept her eyes focused on the button of his jacket. Her hands touched his jacket collar while she shyly looked downwards. "Ae Miss Call!", Raghu mumbled but Antara kept her eyes focused on the buttons feeling too shy especially at the way he was calling her. He slowly tugged her chin up with his hand and she looked at him with shy eyes. "Meri ek baat sunna!" She looked at him with dazed eyes; his voice spinning magic on her. "Aaj se saari pehenna re!" Antara hummed softly but soon she realized what he had asked her. She pushed him away gently and frowned, "Main saari nahi pehenungi Raghu!" Raghu huffed and placed his hands on his waist, "Kaayko nahi pehenegi? Kitni mast lag rahi thi tu nau-vaari mein shaadi ke din!" Antara narrowed her eyes at him, "Shaadi ki din ki baat alag hai Raghu! Us din mujhe Aaji ne hi pehenaayi thi! Aur woh nau-vaari thi! Yeh saadhi saariyaan toh meri jaan le jaati hain! Pata nahi chalta pallu sambhaalu ya apne aapko neeche girne se bachaaun!" She looked worriedly at him while Raghu shook his head, "Dekh Antara! Tu saari pehenegi na toh Aaji bhi khush ho jaayegi aur Mayi bhi woh kya kehte hain...haan impress ho jaayegi!" Antara resisted rolling her eyes. Raghu still respected his Mayi even though the blind worshipness was gone but Antara mistrusted her and still felt uneasy in her presence. She whined, "Please! Raghu! Main nahi pehen sakti!" Raghu shook his head, "Arre! Yedi! Rasika kaaki ko dekh! Roz kaise woh saari pehenti hai!" Antara glared at Raghu for comparing her with Rasika. She knew very well how much crazy Rasika was for her Raghu! She replied, "Tum kuch bhi bolo Raghu! Main Saari nahi pehnungi!" How dare he compare me to Rasika Kaaki! Ab toh main galti se bhi nahi pehenungi! She huffed and turned away. Raghu replied in anger, "Theek hai toh main bhi tere se baat nahi karta ja!" He huffed and turned away. She turned around and pleaded, "Raghu please meri baat ko samjho!" She placed her hand on his shoulder but he shrugged it off. Antara sighed miserably but suddenly an idea entered her head. She smirked happily, "Theek hai Raghu! Tum Machmach ke garage mein jaao. Main tab tak saari pehenke aaungi tumhein dikhaane ke liye!" Raghu frowned at her words. Mereko aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise main apni paaun pe kuraadi maar raha hain! But he shrugged off the feeling and grinned at her happily. Soon, Raghu was off to his work while Antara stared at his retreating back, "Jaao! Jaao! Raghunath Naik! Mujhe us Rasika kaaki ke saath compare kiya na! Ab tum dekhlo! Apni happiness enjoy karo! Kyunki jab tumhaari yeh Biwi Antara Naik aayegi toh mohalle mein dhamaka hoga aur tumhaare hosh udh jaayenge!", she smiled and ran off to Rasika's room.

 

 

   Raghu took a deep breath as he adjusted the nut of the car in front of him while lying down under it. He had to get it ready in time. Suddenly, he heard the murmur around him. Yeh kya horaha hai? Soon, people started crowding around the garage staring at his house. Raghu turned to look at his house and got the shock of his life. There stood Antara dressed in black transparent saree which he was sure he had seen Rasika Kaaki wear it once or twice. But unlike Rasika who wore it with sleeved blouses, Antara teamed it up with a sleeveless blouse with a deep neck hinting at her cleavage. Raghu gulped at the expanse of skin shown by Antara. Due to the transparency of the saree and Antara's not pinning it up in pleats on her shoulder, he could see her whole figure through it. She had tied the skirt low enough that her whole expanse of stomach could be seen through the saree. The kamarband wore on her stomach enhanced the sexiness of her get up. He realized that she was wearing the Saree because he asked her to and he grinned happily at her. He got up from his place and walked towards her. She also walked towards him with a secret smile on her face. Both were oblivious to the crowd formed around them as the people and young men of mohalla stared at Raghu's hot looking wife. Raghu walked towards her with a smile. The moment she reached him, she turned around with her back facing him but turned her face to look at him, "Kaisi lag rahi hu, Raghu?", she asked in the most flirtious voice. Raghu gulped again as he looked at her back. Her blouse was connected from behind by a thin strip of cloth on the lower part of the blouse leaving the rest of her back open. Suddenly, there was a murmur of "HAAYE" from around them and Raghu came out of his reverie. He looked around in wide eyes as he finally noticed the crowd formed around staring at them; more specifically his wife's back. He glared at them and turned her around. He roared at her, "Yeh kya pehen rakha hai?" She shrugged and spoke in the most innocent tone, "Arre! Tumhi ne toh kahaa thi ki saari peheno Rasika kaaki ki tarah! Toh yeh saari maine unse aaj ke liye udhaar li hai! Agar tumhein achcha laga toh main roz aisi hi saari pehenungi. Toh bataao! Lag rahi hoon na Rasika kaaki se bhi beautiful?" Raghu simply glared at her and she pouted innocently. He burst out, "Haan! Haan! Lag rahi hai! Ab tu jaa yaahan se!" "Raghu!", Antara whined in a flirtious way and Raghu slapped his forehead. Yeh yedi ko bhi yahi-ich jagaah mili thi yedigiri karne ke liye! Ghar pe nahi kar sakti thi! Again his eyes fell on the group of admirers around them, and he pulled Antara's pallu from behind and wrapped it around her back making her right hand hold the edge of it. "Ab tu jaa ghar! Main teri taarif shaam ko karega! Abhi tu bas jaa!" Antara huffed and turned and walked away while Raghu glared at the people around him, "Abhi kya dekh rahe ho? Special program chaalu hai kya idhar? Jaao! Apna apna kaam karo!", Raghu scolded and the people scattered away. Meanwhile, Antara smirked! Jalo Raghu! Aur jalo! She giggled and ran into the house.

 

 

    It was evening when Raghu entered his house. He sat on the sofa and chatted with his family. After a while, Aaji piped up, "Arre! Raghu! Dekhna! Aaj Antara itna saji dhaji hai tere liye! Kyun tu usko aaj baahar ghumaane nahi le jaata?" Raghu looked at his Aaji and then at Antara who was still dressed in the same black saari. Raghu wanted to refuse but seeing his Aaji's hopeful eyes he could not resist and agreed to it. Soon, Raghu got ready and after giving instructions to Aaji on how to take care of her self Raghu and Antara walked out. At the last moment, Antara turned and winked at Aaji who showed a thumbs up signal at her. Let the next part of Antara's plan start!

 

 

   Antara and Raghu were sitting in a restaurant having their dinner. Raghu was very happy as Antara was wearing a saari though he wished she would tone down the display of skin. But he was too happy to scold her about it. Antara was a bit miffed as she did not know how to get Raghu jealous without acting like a cheap woman. Suddenly Raghu noticed a friend nearby and waved at him. The friend waved back and signaled him to come over. Raghu smiled, told Antara about it and wandered off. No sooner than 5 minutes of Raghu's walking away, a man joined her table introducing himself as Rahul. She smirked as she looked at the man carefully. He is perfect for my plan! She smiled and introduced herself in a very husky voice.

 

 

     As Raghu spoke with his friend, his eyes wandered towards his wife. He did a double take as he noticed a man smiling and talking with his wife. And above on that, his wife was also flirting back. He got up and marched towards them swiftly. As he neared them, Antara placed her hand in the man's hand. The man said something and Antara flirtiously laughed back. Raghu narrowed his eyes. Aisa kya bol diya joy eh aise has rahi hai! Aur yeh yeda haath kyun nahi chod raha! Abe yede, haath chod! Aur yeh Antara yeh toh fullto yedi hogaya hai! Suddenly, the man bowed and placed a kiss on the back of her hand. That did it! Raghu felt his blood boiling. He grabbed the man by his collar and mumbled, "Doosron ki biwi pe line maarne ka bahut shauk hai na tereko!" The man shook his head frantically. Raghu threw a punch breaking the man's jaw. He again grabbed the collar and shook the man, "Ladkiyon pe chance maarne ka bahut shauk haina tereko?" Again the man shook his head frantically. Raghu was about to punch him again when he felt Antara's hand on his shoulder, "Chod do! Raghu! Please! Mere liye!" He remembered that his wife hated fighting and threw the man aside. He bellowed in anger, "Meri Biwi se door rehna, samjhe!" The man got scared at Raghu's roar and he nodded frantically. He grabbed his wife's arm and dragged her towards the door. He paid the bill and dragged her towards the jeep all the while Antara kept on shouting, "Raghu! Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Chodo mujhe!" But from inside, she felt like dancing. All the parts of the plan was over, she just hoped the result came the way she wanted.

 

 

   Raghu glared at her and ordered her to sit in the jeep. Antara nodded and sat in the jeep meekly but from the inside she was grinning happily. Raghu sat in the jeep and drove it. Both remained silent the whole way. They reached home and Antara was about to get down when Raghu stopped  her, "Ae Miss Call!" She had a smile on her face but when she turned to look at him she adopted an innocent look. Raghu glared at her, "Agli baar main tereko saari pehenne bola toh mereko maar! Chappal se maar! Belan se maar! Par maar! Lekin saari mat pehenna aur kabhi bhi pehenna pade toh Aaji ki pasand ka pehenna Kaaki ka nahi! Samjhi!" Antara nodded weakly. Raghu continued, "Aur phirse aisi saari tu ne pehni na toh dekh!" Antara gulped. She turned to walk away when she turned back and spoke up, "Kal phir roz saari..." Raghu slammed his palms in prayer style, bowed his head and begged her, "Nahi meri ma! Galti se bhi yeh mat karna! Tu kal se tera woh salwar kameez hi pehen!" Antara nodded and turned to walk away. Her innocent expression made way to a smug smile as she whispered a "yes!" and wandered off inside with a grin on her face while Raghu sat in his jeep cursing himself for even thinking about asking her to wear Saari!

 

THE END

 

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