The Bride With A Doll..Thread#3 Completed Arshi SS - Page 52

Twiggy


Edited by vgedin - 10 years ago

Jen.

I have never felt this apprehensive, this scared after reading an update for a long time...

Two word"Last meeting" is having more impact on my mind than the whole chapter...

2 years have passed and  they havent seen each other..2 years have passed and his room hasnt been opened...why? ...if he was in jail then with Arnav's dad's influence I am sure either he would have been released or at least Khushi would have gone to see him in the jail..please dont tell me something more sinister has happened...he cant be dead..oh God no..has he gone missing?

My heart is crying for Khushi..what a pain to experience...

However it will be cheating not to mention anything about their last meeting..it was indeed of the long lasting moment that leaves a unforgettable impression in ones memory..just loved the way replied Arnab back with her questions..I only hope that in order to save an innocent life he hasnt sacrificed his...

please update soon..



Edited by Aparamegha - 10 years ago

Wow amazing update, I hope Arnab is okay!!!Edited by anu1017 - 10 years ago

emotional part..
Wat happened to arnab???
Khushi pain is unbearable..
Continue soon..
Waiting..Edited by sri91 - 10 years ago

last meeting wt do u mean? NOOO😕
Edited by dieforasr - 10 years ago

wow wow great news - waiting

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Edited by vandana.sagar - 10 years ago

wonderful post, please keep writing and keep sharing your heart with us, your lines touch my heart and i feel immense joy when i read your creation... Luv u... TC😊Edited by MehreenAli - 10 years ago

unres..

I don't know what to say Jenny...this update left me in tears.😭

When Arnab made the first journal entry after Khushi's arrival, he knew that he would have to spend his life with her but he probably never thought about their happiness becoming closely linked to each other. 

You've sketched their characters beautifully and the evolution of their relationship is fascinating to read. 

You have depicted the pre-independence era very nicely and also the Bengali culture. Being a Bengali, I never feel that this story hasn't been written by someone who isn't Bengali.              

So much has been left unsaid between the two of them. Khushi is going to read his journal and finally understand why he kept a distance.

Two years passed and he never came back. What happened to him? Will he come back? Will she look for him? Does she think he's dead? so many questions...hope we will get some answers in the next chapter. 

You have a way with words and the chapters leave an impact.  

Beautiful. 👏 

Edited by incandescent - 10 years ago

Res

Two years of no Arnav and Khushi 😭 What must have Khushi gone through during those two years, poor girl!

Edited by ssyahoo - 10 years ago